This is my first time trying a fic like this so please feel free to give me your feedback on it with a PM or in a review I don't really care I just want to become a better writer so I can entertain all of you better. But anyway this will be a harem for Naruto if you have a certain girl you want in tell me and I will have a poll for whoever gets the most votes the total count will be three girls. He will also gain a bloodline in this fic as a descendent of the Namikaze clan but I wont reveal what it does just yet but it will be awesome. If I misspell any names or anything at all I am sorry and please correct me on that also my grammar is terrible and I am aware of this I am slowly trying to work on it. I will use the English words for the jutsus because I have no clue how to say or spell the Japanese version.
Roar: Demon speaking
Roar: Normal speaking
Summary: What would happen if Naruto learned the secret to the shadow clone jutsu and he used it to train before going to team seven and he actually got Kakashi to train him on his free time as well as getting some help from a thirty story tall demon fox who is not as bad as most people think.
Disclamer: Sadly I do not own Naruto but one day maybe I will win the lottery and buy the rights to it.
"You are the nine tailed fox" yelled Mizuki as he glared down at the blonde haired blue eyed boy who was shaking in fear from seeing one of his sensei's throw a volley of kunai at his other teacher Iruka. Iruka was a rather tall man with brown hair and an athletic body type with a scar reaching from one side of his face to the other crossing over his nose. He was leaning against the side of the wood shack with a kunai sticking out of his thigh while another one was lodged in his shoulder.
"Run Naruto get back to Konoha and get that scroll to the Hokage" yelled Iruka as he tried to stand but was unable to from the pain in his leg and shoulder. "NO I REFUSE TO LEAVE YOU HERE TO DIE" yelled Naruto as his eyes changed from their hypnotizing blue to a deep crimson to a bright gold with a black cross in the middle (Hint it is his dojutsu) Naruto let out a menacing roar as Mizuki charged but was blasted back from the force of the roar as he was thrown through multiple trees causing them to crash down.
Naruto charged after Mizuki leaving Iruka to wonder what just happened. Mizuki struggled to get up as he was blown back by some invisible force. His head was swimming from being knocked through the trees as he saw a figure coming towards him when he realized that it was a severely pissed off Naruto. To put it simply Naruto looked like kami's personal death dealer on this world. As Mizuki stared into Naruto's eyes he wondered what was wrong with his eyes before everything went black.
Naruto retracted his arm as he witnessed the kunai burrow its self handle deep inside Mizuki's skull. As he saw Mizuki's body slump to the ground and fall over dead all of his blind anger receded and he was able to think clearly. The first thing he noticed was how clear his eye sight was and how good he felt. As he made his way back to Iruka he slowly got tired with each step until he passed out directly in front of Iruka.
Drip, Drip, Drip "Where the hell am I" Said Naruto to himself as he found himself inside of what looked to be a long sewer pipe with blue and red pipes running down the length of the pipe until he looked further down the pipe and saw were it turned. Naruto made his way down the pipe following the blue and red pipes until the lead to a massive room with a huge cage and two pools full of what looked to be red and blue water.
Each respective pipe lead to its respective color, Naruto noticed this with some interest as there was a small pipe leading from the red pool to the blue pool as the red water passed through the middle of the pipe and changed to blue. He turned his attention away from the pools of water to look upon the huge cage as he did this he saw to blood red eyes gaze at him when a menacing looking fox made its way into Naruto's view.
"Sit down kit we have much to discuss" said the voice as Naruto looked around for his eyes to land on the gigantic fox head that was now resting on its paws. Naruto wanted to come up with a witty retort but kept his mouth shut and sat down and peered at the fox. "Good I see that you are capable of following simple directions that will keep you alive in the future. Now as you may or may not know I am the Kyuubi and as to where we are we are in your mind but for you physical body it is being carried back to the hokage tower by an ANBU. While Iruka is being carried to the hospital, now I know that you probably have tons of questions but let me start from the beginning. I was sleeping in my den with my kits when I felt a very weird and unfamiliar tug on my gut. When I finally came to I saw these glowing red eyes and then the next thing I know I am sealed away inside of my first jailer whose name was Mito Uzumaki. I had just been sealed inside her and I would not be out until her seal weakened and I was able to break free when she was giving child birth. I was then sealed away again into a woman whose name was Kushina Uzumaki also she was your mother Naruto. Your mother was the Red Death of Konoha and your father was the Yellow Flash also known as the Fourth Hokage.
At the time of your birth I once again felt the seal weaken and as I tried to make my escape your father kept me at bay. Until a man in a mask came along and sabotaged the birth and he released me only for me to be trapped under the same genjutsu." As the Kyuubi said this it shook its gigantic head as if it was disappointed in itself. He spread his nine tails out behind himself and stretched them out as he once again laid his head to rest on his gigantic overlapped paws before he continued his story.
"When I woke up you were five years old and I saw everything, I saw the way you were neglected, beaten, burned, scorned, and overall just hated for people's idiocy of not being able to tell the difference between a kunai and a sealing scroll. I saw the way you always got up and never gave up even to this day all you wish to do is protect the village and be respected for Naruto Uzumaki and not some demon as some claim you to be. I can honestly say that you are by far the first jailer of mine that I have truly respected. For that I want to help train you and I want to help you achieve your dream. As you can tell before you passed out your vision seemed different well that is because of your dojutsu. I don't know much about it but I do know that it was passed down from your father's side. I believe that he once called it the Eye of the Grim Reaper all that I can tell you that it does is that it helps your brain speed up its processing time so the people you are fighting look like they are going significantly slower than what they really are. So you can see them coming from a mile away. Also it allows you unparalleled control over wind release and also dark release( Yes it is new and I made it up but have you ever been walking at night and felt the wind hit you and you get scared as hell and just want to run ya if you have then you know it is intimidating as hell) but those come at later evolutions right now it only helps with your brain. The down side is that if you body does not have the speed to keep up with your brain then you are basically screwed." Said the kyuubi as Naruto pushed chakra into his eyes and looking at his reflection to see the gold eyes with the black cross in the middle.
"This is to freaking cool so basically I have a new super awesome dojutsu that will make me a badass ninja in the future" said Naruto as he began to bounce around the room getting a chuckle from the kyuubi at his jailer's innocence.
"Tomorrow you get your sensei and that is when your dreams will be put into place but you must take the intiative to get the training from your sensei if you want to get better and you have to train on your own and when you do that I will help you. Said the kyuubi as Naruto began to phase out of the mindscape as apparently he was waking up or being woken up.
"I promise to help you achieve your dreams for all of the pain I have caused you" said the kyuubi as he closed his eyes.
And done what do all of you think this is my first try at a Naruto story and feedback is great I don't really care how it gets to me oh and for anyone who wants to flame me go ahead I will just laugh at you I happily accept constructive criticism but flames are just unnecessary. Till next time.
