Hey! This is just a test on a story I would like to write, I'm going to give the full summery of what it's going to be about, and the character sketch of it all. You have to review to let me know weather or not you think it's worth writing. Anyways here's the characters.
Mikan, Natsume, Hotaru, Ruka, Sai ect. Are all 15.
Mikan - the girl with the curse (a.k.a Ella)
Kind and loving, and also very energetic, Mikan Sakura has had a gift set on her sense birth. The gift was more of a curse, she was obedient, she had to, no matter what the order is. After finding out she has an alice along with it, her parents send her to the academy due to lack of money. Determined and hopeful Mikan sets out to try to break the curse with the help of her best friend who is also the only person other then her mother to know about the gift. Along the way she meets maney people, Natsume being one of them.
Natsume - the "prince"
Natsume Hyuga, the handsome cold hearted heartthrob is a prince, who once old enough will take over the throne, was sent to the academy at the age of eight, for his mother thought he was too much to handle, his father had been killed a long while by an ogre. Accompanied by his mothers "baby sitter" for him, Aito. Tired of all the fake fan girls he is refreshed when he meets down to earth Mikan.
Hotaru - Mikans best friend
Hotaru Imia, pretty, intelligent and sometimes can seem cold deeply cares for Mikans safety, causing her to follow her along to the academy. She has the inventors alice, with this she makes sneaky devices that help her get some good blackmail material. She would do anything more some money.
Ruka - Natsumes best friend
Although Ruka Nogi is the complete opposite of prince Natsume, they are the best of friends. Ruka is the only person Natsume opens up to. He has the animal pheromone alice, which often causes him to be blackmailed by the sneaky money seeking Hotaru, who he happens to develop feelings for, that is after getting over the ones he has for Mikan.
Aito - Natsumes "baby sitter"
Odd and power thirsty, Aito Hyogo, 35, has been with Natsume in the academy from the beginning. Natsume never really opened up to him, but he always figured he could trust him in some way, after all Aito is his uncle. Aito always convinced Natsume that he could teach him how to be a great leader someday. I wouldn't be the first to trust him though.
Sai - Mikans stepsister
Not so attractive Sai Sakura is Mikans stepsister. Uncaring and overly obsessed with Natsume is quick to become friends with Permy when she too findsĀ out she holds an alice, the flying alice to be exact. She doesn't know about Mikans gift but she does realize whatever she asks Mikan to do she obeys, she uses this to her advantage.
Summery - Mikans family, always had a fairy come and place a gift on a new born baby, weather it was the gift of beauty, brains, or a wonderful voice. But Mikans gift was more of a curse, Maki the fairy was horrible at giving gifts, she placed the gift of obedience on Mikan Sakura, leaving her with no choice but to obey the rest of her life, no matter how many times her mother begged her to take it away, she refused. She would always reply "If she doesn't like it, she can figure a way to take it off herself, if you don't like it, I can always turn her into a squirrel!" Mikans mother never told even told her own husband about Mikans gift, the only person that got a chance to know was Hotaru, for she was Mikans trusting, loyal friend sense the age of two, Mikan told her friend of her gift before her mother got ill and requested for her never to tell anybody of the gift.
Mikan at the age of 15 found out she has an alice, because of her mothers growing sickness her father sends her to the academy for money, Hotaru also followed. At the academy she meets Natsume, whom she thinks of as a stuck up royal pain in the ass. It's a long journey as her and Hotaru set out looking for her fairy godmother to lift the curse.
As you all hopefully know, this is based on the book/movie Ella Enchanted.
Rated - T for mature content and language.
Disclaimer - I do not own Gakuen Alice, or Ella Enchanted.
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