(Please note that this is the old version of Chapter 1 please go to the updated version in the drop down list this will be deleted soon)
Chapter 1: The new Naruto and a new home!
Hello fellow fanfiction readers and writers this is the Black Hearted Ninja speaking, now I just want to say before you start reading this that this is my 1st fanfiction and I am also not a very good speller so please don't criticize me btw in this story I shall be giving most of the characters unique new moves and will also give you the chance to vote for them as well ok see you later bye. One last note I will also be making up a bloodline for Naruto and you can vote for what you think the best abilities are you can also submit your own abilities for this bloodline it is called "Demon eyes".
I do not own Naruto however I do own this fanfiction.
Italic writing =me
Bold writing = demons
Normal = Narrations and characters
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It was a dark stormy day in the village hidden in the leafs where everyone stayed inside with their loving family's except for one young blonde headed boy who sat on top of the hokage monument as it was his favorite place to visit in the whole world, this boy wore a orange jumpsuit with matching trousers this one boy who was hated by almost everyone in his entire village dreamed to become their leader the Hokage but eventually gave up and met the girls of his dreams this is the story on how Naruto Uzumaki survived his hell of a life.
Naruto sat on top of the hokage monument wondering why he was hated so much, he began to remember the beatings he would get every year on his birthday and was afraid as tomorrow was going to be another one of those days.
"Kit why are you so afraid you can easily stop these beating that you get?" a voice in Naruto's head growled, Naruto soon found himself standing before of a massive cage be looked closely to see a massive red fox standing behind it glaring down at him.
"Oh my god, Naruto said as he backed away who no what are you?" "I am the mighty Kyubbi no kitsune I was sealed inside of your body 12 years ago by the 4th Hokage to save this pitiful village" Kyubbi growled at Naruto.
"Wait you are sealed inside of me so that is why everyone hates me and calls me a demon" the young blonde had a shocked yet sad look in his eyes as he said this. "Yes that is why you are treated the way you are but this is probably a bit much for you to take in at the moment go home and go to sleep kit I shall talk to you tomorrow" (yeah I know Kyubbi is not nice to Naruto but hey its my fanfiction)
The next day Naruto woke up thinking everything was but a dream but then he realized that it couldn't be, Naruto never spoke to Kyubbi that day but Kyubbi did tell him that he should change his image and stop being the class clown so Naruto went to the shop the and bought clothes exactly the same as the ones he already owned except this time they were black and the trim around the clothes were blood red he also then got permanent hair dye and changed his hair from blonde to black (before you say or think anything no he is not going Goth or Emo it's just that it was either this or all blood red and that would lead to the beatings he got to become worse).
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Iruka the academy's teacher along with Mizuki stood at the front of the room taking attendance and had only three students left to check out.
"Sakura Haruno are you here?" "Yes sensei", a pink haired girl announced, "Sasuke Uchiha are you here?" "Yes", a tough looking guy said, "and finally Naruto Uzumaki are you here?"
There was no response, "I guess he is absent" Iruka said and was about to mark it down when the doors slammed open and there stood a boy with black hair and black clothes that looked like Naruto's, "sorry I am late sensei I had things to do" the class looked wide eyed at the boy "Na...Na… Naruto is that you" Iruka stuttered the boy nodded "what happened to you?"
"What so I can't change the way I look" argued Naruto "sorry Naruto just take your seat please" Iruka said while bowing in an apologizing form, as Naruto walked down to his seat he couldn't help but notice everyone staring at him he just decided to ignore it and sat down beside Sasuke as no one else dared to.
"Hey Naruto I like the new look it suites you better than all those bright colours" Sasuke said shocking most of the class as Sasuke usually never talked to Naruto "thanks Sasuke" Naruto said coldly, all of the girls in the class except Hinata Hyuuga could not help but think "oh my god he is so hot" on the other hand Hinata looked at him with distastefully thinking "I can't believe I used to worship this guy he is such a freak who can wear all black and have black hair to"
The rest of the day was pretty shocking for the class as Naruto was answering almost every question that Iruka asked correctly usually Naruto would sleep or pull a prank but everyone just thought that this Naruto seemed so much cooler than the old Naruto.
On the way home Naruto looked at himself in the windows and grinned he like the new him and it seemed other people did as well but the villagers were a completely different story, Naruto had totally forgotten it was his birthday and on his way home he was attacked by a group of villagers and some ninja Naruto did not fight back as if he did then he would just prove them right but what shocked him even more was that his so called friends from the academy saw what was happening to him and they just walked away"
"Leave that boy alone" a voice hissed the villagers turned around only to see two bright yellow eyes they had not seen in years the eyes of the snake sanin Orochimaru the villagers ran in fear and then the snake sanin leaned down to the boy and looked at him and hissed "I can offer you a home a home where you will be treated with respect even if they find out about your friend inside of you"
Naruto couldn't believe what he was hearing he was being offered a new life all he could say was "where" and he got his answer as Orochimaru said coldly "my village, the hidden sound village" Naruto did not even think his answer through as he said straight away while grinning "I will follow you to my new home in the hidden sound village".
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Yea I know you don't want to see this happening but I am fed up of the way Naruto was treated in his village I am doing this so they realise what they have done. Now I told you about Naruto's new bloodline the "Demon eyes" my ideas for the ability are that if he makes his enemies look directly into his eyes that they will be locked into a deep genjutsu where they see their worst nightmares come to life and also they witness their own death fake death of course also his eyes will give him the ability to use lightning and fire based moves and he gets these eyes from the Kyubbi. You can submit your own ideas for the demon eyes or you can tell me what you think of my one anyway see you later
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