soz about short first chapter need rreviews and ideas !:-P
Olivia woke up in darkness she saw Amanda tied up across from her. "Amanda" she whispered but didn't get an answer "Amanda" she said pulling on the chains she was tied to. The chains dug into her wrists as she edged her way forward. "Amanda" she called one last time in the hopes that Amanda would wake up but she didn't.. A man walked in to the room "who's first" he said rubbing his hands together and Olivia looked up "ahh hello there Olivia" he smiled getting closer which made Olivia uncomfortable and she edged away "shh it's OK baby you'll be fine I don't bite" he said calmly pulling her forward. There was a loud bang which made Olivia jump "shh you need to stay quiet now" he said putting his hand over her mouth. "NYPD open up!" yelled a voice which Olivia knew anywhere, it was Nick! After a half an hour the voices had stopped and another man entered the room. "What're you doin I told you to stay away from her!" he yelled "but daddy she woke up" said the other man who had a bit of a jumbled accent between Texas and New York. "I don't care she is here to suffer she is here to die" yelled the older man "you promised when you were done you'd let'm go and no one would get hurt" said the younger one "I lied now get the knife, she dies first" the older one smiled. Olivia struggled but it's hard to move when you're chained to the wall, "can we keep her?" the younger one asked "fine but she's your responsibility" the older one said and at that point Olivia felt like some stray they took off the street and didn't appreciate them negotiating about her and her living arrangements.
The younger one stroked her hair "I'm Jackie and I promise I won't let him hurt you" he whispered kissing her forehead. Olivia's mouth was taped shut this time and Amanda still lay motionless, Olivia had to face facts she was dead. Suddenly she heard a cough and a groan it was like music to her ears Amanda was alive!
Amanda's eyes slowly opened and she looked around her she was dazed and confused but recognised Olivia instantly. "Liv why're you dressed like a chicken" Amanda laughed and Olivia knew she was high.
The older man walked in again "get up" he said pulling Olivia by the hair. Amanda kept giggling the whole time which didn't help the situation. Olivia fought with all her strength but the man had the chains and the control. Olivia knew she'd be tortured but she also knew Amanda would be next which made it more unsettling.
It took Amanda to come around but she soon realised what was going on and she knew she was gonna die. A woman approached her with a bottle of beer "drink it" she said forcing the alcohol down Amanda's throat which made her cough and choke. After two hours of torture Amanda was left alone but it didn't last long. An old man (Jackie's father) approached carrying Olivia in his arms "night sweetheart" he laughed walking out. Amanda noticed that Olivia had been beaten just like she had. Except she knew Olivia must've got it worse if she was knocked out, unless she was drugged and all these thoughts came to mind as Amanda tried to edge closer to Olivia.
Meanwhile Nick and Finn where getting nowhere even IAB and narcotics were involved CSI and the BAU even said they'd get involved and the case was being spread throughout not only the NYPD but PD's all over America. It even leaked to the press.
Meanwhile hidden in their apartment the kidnappers watched the news. "The search continues for Sargent Olivia Benson and detective Amanda Rollins who have been missing two days now and have been believed to have been kidnapped and it appears almost all units are responding" said a reporter "turn it up" Jackie said smiling happily.
But who were these people? Why did they kidnap Rollins and Benson? Why does almost every unit every police force want this case?