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Hey guys so this is our first story. Yes I do mean ours. My friend and I are making these stories together we will try to put up a new one everyday so I hope you like it. You can refer to us as either K (me) T (My co-writer).
This story is about Maximum ride right where angel left of accepted a little different in a way that we think it should happen.
K: I hope you enjoy it.
Fang: its okay I guess K: Shut up they don t know about you. Eh whatever I kidnapped fang now he lives with me and T. T and I are like divorced parents this week I have him.
Fang: I hate you.
K: No you don t you love me .. You love me this much [ ]; D I quoted you.
Fang: really I hadn t noticed.
K: I need at least 5 reviews people .ENJOY!
T: *randomly pops in and waves* Hello! Maybe? ...
Maximum Ride: Nevermore
It was late afternoon the sun blazing down on us as we searched through the rubble. I saw a flash of black hair. It was Fang; he was running from pile to pile throwing chunks of debris in every direction. One just happened to hit me right between the eyes. Ow! I screamed, "Watch where you re throwing those! Fang looked up he ran his hands through his shorter-than- I m-used-to hair.
Sorry. His normally calm deep emotionless black eyes were full of pain. I swear I saw a tear creep down his face but he quickly turned away. I ran towards him, not thinking about the outcome or even what I was doing, and I hugged him. Not looking for anything important besides comfort. A pair of strong arms slid around my back I pulled myself closer to his warm body. This is how it always should be. Only one bad thing had come out of everything. Angel my baby ...was dead.
Chapter 2
Fang: you make me look like a baby
K: oh does the big emo no like it
Fang: IM NOT EMO
T: sure you aren t
K: hey
T when you get here
Fang: ahhh double evil T: I have been here the whole time
K: Sorry emo boy was distracting me Fang: I AM NOT EM T: You knid of are. *pulls K in front of my as a sheild*
K: Back to the scheduled program
Fang: but
K: shut it Fang: *whimpers*
Chapter 2 :
You know the whole being a bird kid thing doesn t help with the whole claustrophobia thing. Oh and being in the same elevator with the guy who shattered you heart into . a billion and one pieces doesn t begin to cover it. To make it worse we where alone .. imagine my joy. Thoughts were running through my mind, thoughts I have been determend to keep suppressed since Fang left. I would not let my emotions show now or ever. So I chose not to look at him. "Why did you stop loving me?" Damn my mouth. Immediately embarrassed I turned away. Seconds ticked by. We were only going from floor one to floor three, how slow was this machine?
"Max," I turned and saw Fang, talking to me. Suddenly shocked by his face, I saw emotion from ...who woulda thunk it. "I...I never did," he replied slowly.. "If this is the dumb speech where the guys goes 'I was only trying to protect you, I didn t mean to hurt you'. Cause if it is I don t have time for it." But of course he continued. "Max, leaving you was the hardest thing I have ever done right when I left, I immediately wanted to come back, but I couldn t. I didn't think I'd be able to face you after...after what I knew I had done to you and the flock." That sentence surprised me because he one had to share a small room with a bean-filled Gazzy (You ever hear the rhyme about those?). "Not the time Max." Oh hey voice, long time no annoy. Oh I have a voice...In my head...You mean you don t? Well you can pick them up at Walmart, they're free...because no one wants one! 'Max listen to him, he is telling the truth' Okay why not? Since this machine is a slow as a freaking turtle, I guess I have time. Fang must have noticed my absence in the conversation because he was staring at me.
"Max are you okay?" he asked curiously.
"Me, ya, I guess I'm fine just talking to the handy dandy voice in my head."
What did it say?" he asked.
"Oh nothing I replied my cheeks flahing red." Silence is a akward sort of thing. They say you can slice silence with a knife. Or is that tension? Either way, I really wanted to chop up that silence with an expensive Japanese knife right about now. Please ding please ding. Ding! Yessssss, its over!As I took my step to get out a hand pulled me back. Fang? He pulled me right into his arms.
"Max I missed you," he choked out. I looked up at him tears threatening my eyes. Wow, emotion and tears? What a bonus.
"Me too," I said, before bursting into sobs. His strong arms pulld me in but not into the hug I was used to, but a kiss. I have been waiting this since he left. We broke apart. The elevator dinged again and the door opened. Curse you, ding-y elevator! Fang walked out and I followed he went to his gang and I went to my flock.
K: aww young love
T: its wonderful isn t it
K: ye-
Fang: HELL YAH
K: hey language there are kids around
Fang: where ?
T: here Extremely hot taco: aqui K: he said here in spanish Fang: you re a kid?
K: eres un ni o
Extremely hot taco: si senor
Fang: Can I eat you
K: Puedo comer le
Extremely hot taco: no senor
K: PLEASE REVIEW T: I hope you liked it!
Extremely hot taco: Fang puedo ir ahora? Es emo? Parece emo...
F: I don't know Spanish, but that taco might have to die...
Extremely hot taco: No! Perd name! Por favor! Tengo una familia! *hugs K and T's legs*
Fang: *Glares*
T: SHUT IT! Please tell us what you thought.
Fang: Pushy.
T: WHY I OUGHTA...
K: k bye
Extremely Hot Taco: Adios!