This is my first story so please read and review. I hope that you enjoy!
"ugh! How does johnny get all of that stuff into a backpack!" Mavis talked to herself aloud as she looked through piles of clothing, supplies, and other things she figured she would need to bring with her on her on her adventure with her new zing.
It had been a few days since johnny the human had walked into her fathers hotel, and she had been trying to pack this backpack ever since Dracula had brought it home with him after going and stopping johnny from leaving.
No matter how many times she unpacked and repacked this thing she could never get all the things she wanted to bring with her into it. "i wonder if I really need to bring this many pairs of stockings?" She said as she removed a pair of the red and black stocking with stripes on them from the bag. "maybe if I leave this extra pair of shoes at home I'll have more room to fit my blood substitute and some other stuff..." Mavis' train of thought was broken by someone knocking on the door to her room and shouting to her "Mav? Can I come in?"
Good...johnny was here. He would be able to help her pack her things, he had been doing this for a while and surely would be able to help her. "sure Johnny! Come on in!" With that he slid his head into the room, as Mavis watched him poke his head in she noticed his wild red hair and carefree face as he looked in at her
" I finaly found an airline that would agree to Keeping all the windows shut on the flight do that you don't get all... burn-y" He looked at her with a face that showed he wasnt really sure what the correct word to use would have been. "i told the homie at the airport that you had some kinda weird condition with your skin pigments or something and he agreed!" Johnny watched Mavis as she continued her struggle with the pack.
"Holy Rabies! that's awesome Johnny! I can't wait to go on our trip!" she said, looking up at him as he slid fully into the room. "but its gonna be a problem going if I can't get this bag packed!" She got a frustrated look on her face as she gestured broadly to the pack and piles of things strewn around her room. "No problem Mavy-Babe! I'll help you out in just a sec. i gotta go tell Drac that I found us a flight." With that he slid out of the room, leaving Mavis to stare blankly at her backpack...
This is my first story and this is just kind of an introduction...any ideas for the story, reviews, or tips would be greatly appreciated. Im not 100 % sure what I want to write about in this story so please suggest things!