DISCLAIMER: I don't own NARUTO, blah blah blah
Words
"Talking"
"Demon Naruto Talking"
'Thinking'
-LOCATION-
"Demon talking"
'Demon Thinking'
-DEAD END ALLEY, KONOHAGAKURE-
He stands up, ignoring the pain, and stares in horror as the ever-growing mob cut off all avenues of escape. Even ANBU were on the rooftops, snickering through their masks. The Sandaime was leading them: civilians and shinobi alike. As two chunin that he knew from peeking on the academy, Iruka and Mizuki, flanked the Hokage, he tried to remember where he went wrong.
-FLASHBACK no JUTSU!-
His seventh birthday. His seventh birthday and noone congratulated him. Not Jiji, not old man Teuchi, not his daughter Ayame, NOONE! Noone acknowledged him, unless you count the hateful glares he got everywhere he went. So he decided to do something noone could overlook. That's right, paint the Hokage Monument. What he and his seven-year-old mind thought was a good idea was actually MISTAKE NUMBER ONE. MISTAKE NUMBER TWO came when he was being chased by everyone in the village. AGAIN. Since this was a normal occurence, especially on his birthday, he knew this next alley was good, the one after had a five-foot brick wall, and the one after was cluttered but also was good. As he was turning, his foot caught something and he rolled right past the entrance, which the mob had overtaken. Another mob was coming the other way and had already passed the third alley. So he had to chance it.
-NOT FOR THE FAINT OF HEART OR PPL WHO LIKE SARUTOBI, KAKASHI, IRUKA, TEUCHI OR ANYONE ELSE WHO IS A FAMILY-FIGURE TO NARUTO-
As he was running down the alley, he was dodging a hailstorm of kunai and shuriken. He was too busy looking behind him that he failed to notice the makibishi the ANBU had thrown on the ground from above. Until his feet sunk into them that is. He fell forward and more makibishi embedded themselves into his legs, stomach, chest, and arms. When he looked up he knew he was in trouble. For right there in front of him was the wall he was meant to jump over mocking him. He stands up, ignoring the pain, and stares in horror as...
-KAI!-
Mizuki and Iruka pull out two fuma shuriken apiece and hurl them at the crying blonde. One digs into each elbow, digging into the wall and lifting him a few inches off the ground. The other two hitting his shins and breaking his bones like toothpicks, and embed themselves into the wall as well. A jonin with spiky white hair throws two kunai that stab through his trapezius and grins through his mask at the terror etched on his face. As the adrenaline wears off, he screams for someone, anyone to help him. The Sandaime raises his hand, motioning for the crowd to quiet, which they do. He slowly walks toward Naruto with a smile that radiates warmth. However if looks could kill, Naruto would have died right then and there, but he couldn't focus due to his crying.
"J-jiji! Wh-why?"Naruto pleads through sobs before the elder Hokage backhands Naruto. He pulls a kunai out of nowhere and impales it into his cheeks right next to his condyle and slices through all of his jaw muscles, all the way to his mouth and repeats the process on the other side, causing his lower jaw to hang loosely.
"I'm not your grandfather, BRAT! The only family you had was that bastard 4th and his whore from Uzushio who thought it a good idea to seal that damn Kyuubi inside you!" This was met by cheers from the crowd. "And who DARE you deface the men that have given their lives to defend this village! Do you know why I have a son, and no wife! It's because she died when someone tried to take the Kyuubi!"
Naruto was shocked from the news he heard. His father was the Yondaime? And the Kyuubi was sealed inside him! He tried to call for help again but all that came was a gurgling noise as blood drenched what little clothes he had on.
That was when old man Teuchi walked up to him and leaned into his ear.
"I poisoned every bowl of ramen I gave you but that demon cleansed it from your system. I was ex-ANBU during the second war, but I'm sure I still got it." With that he pulls out a knife that he uses to cut the vegetables for the ramen and places the tip below Naruto's elbow. With a flick of his wrist, all of the skin on Naruto's arm slides to the ground, slick with blood. He felt like his arm was on fire!
"Ayame! Salt!" A brunette about twelve comes skipping through the crowd and digs a hand into the bag she's holding and throws the white granules onto his arm, increasing the pain tenfold. She sticks her tongue out at him and says "That's for making daddy stay late for work, demon!"
Naruto closed his eyes. He didn't want to see everyone he thought loved him take turns mutilating him!
"Nu-uh-uh" An ANBU member lands in front of him and pulls out a kunai. He makes slow incisions and cuts off his eyelids. Then he stabs his left eye and pulls it out. He lets it hang, chilling cold air now entering his skull.
A civilian comes up to Naruto with a sledgehammer and a manical grin on his face. "Hey demon, you killed my wife. Now, I'm gonna help kill you." That said, he swings his sledgehammer, shattering Naruto's kneecaps. The pain goes through his legs, chest and head. He looks down and sees bone puncturing through the skin. The pain is unbearable, why can't he pass out. Or die?
"Here you go, Naruto Namikaze Uzumaki. The sweet release from all of this pain. Death." Wood is placed around Naruto, the pile reaching his tattered pants. Hiruzen walks up and snaps his fingers and a small flame appears on his thumb. With his other hand, he rips Naruto's shirt off, revealing his malnourished frame. He lights it with the fire and tosses it on the wood. The flames melt his sandals, the straps feeling like hot wax. His pants catch automatically, his skin peeling of by itself, blisters subsequently forming and bursting. When the flames reach his stomach, he blacks out.
-IN NARUTO'S MIND-
He is ankle-deep water standing in front of a cage twenty stories tall. Behind that cage, is a sad sight to behold. The Kyuubi no Kitsune is half-dead. Being mentally linked to Naruto, it felt everything, physical and emotional.
"Dammit, Kit! If this doesn't stop, we're both going to die!"
"So, why do I care if you die! You destroyed my vil-"
"I WAS BEING CONTROLLED!" the roar reverberated throughout his mindscape.
"Say I believe you, then what?"
"You merely pull this seal off and I will destroy everything that causes you pain. Then I give you your body back."
Naruto walks toward the seal and a typhoon lifts him up to it. He grabs a corner and someone grabs him and throws him to the ground. A hand reaces out to Naruto but he slaps it away.
"N-Naruto? What's wrong?" The Yondaime Hokage asks.
"Nothing I can't fix, DAD!" He retorts, spitting the name out like bad food.
"Seriously, what is going on?"
Naruto stands up and glares at the man that was supposed to be his father. "Oh, nothing. Just the entire village MUTILATING ME! I've been through HELL these years and it's all...because... of YOU. If you hadn't sealed the Kyuubi inside of me, none of this would be happening! Now get out of my way so I can end this suffering."
Naruto begins to walk toward the seal again. Minato tries to grab Naruto again but his hand goes straight through Naruto as if he were a ghost. "This is my mind, and I think I don't want you touching me ever."
Minato begins to walk away but turns around. "Fine, but how old are you?"
"7, why?"
"I want to know how old the last Namikaze was when he died..." And just as quickly as he appeared, he disappeared.
Naruto walks toward the seal and says to noone in particular "I'm an Uzumaki." With that, he rips the seal off.
-BACK AT THE ALLEY-
What had been a few minutes in Naruto's mind had barely been one second to the villagers. But now Naruto was prepared. At first, few changes were visible due to the fire. His whisker marks darkened, his finger- and toe-nails elongated. His canines became more defined, his hair became more unruly, and his pupils slitted and his eyes turned red. Then slowly, the fire pushed back and the wall cracked due to the shroud of red chakra now surrounding him. The one tail that accompanied the shroud split into two. When two bacame three,a crater formed where Naruto was causing the fuma shuriken along with the kunai that were stabbed into him, fell to the ground and clattered. Everyone turned around from their cheering to stare at the hellish transformation. The eye that got stabbed out was being pulled back by an invisible force, but it wasn't the same. The eye was purple with a ripple like pattern. Each ripple had three tomoe on it and were slowly rotating.
Hiruzen grabbed another kunai and tried to stab Naruto through the shroud. Naruto's head tilted ninety degrees to the left and asked "Jiji...having trouble?" One of the tails shot from behind Naruto and wrapped around the elder's throat. The smell of burning flesh was pugnent, causing a few civilians to throw up. The tail's grip tightened and crushed his windpipe. Sarutobi fell to the ground, limp. "NOW I WILL BECOME THE DEMON YOU SAY I AM!" Naruto's skin began peeling, showing the muscle as blood began to boil to the surface, the shroud turning a sickly ruby color when the fourth tail bubbled up. Both of Naruto's eyes had the ripple pattern now, while he looked more Kyuubi than Naruto. Another burst of chakra, four became six and a skeletal system appeared. The pressure of the chakra combined with the massive K.I. radiating from Naruto like a tsunami caused most people's hearts to literally explode. This is when he made his move. He slid on the blood like an impromptu figureskater, claws outstretched, disembowling anyone who was unfortunate enough to be anywhere near his path of travel. The six tails propelling him, Naruto ran straight into the Hokage Monument. If one were to see through the dust, they wouldn't recognize the faces of the previous Hokages, but they would recognize the muscles and fur that were subsequently forming over the bones, revealing a miniturazied, but no less deadly, Kyuubi no Kitsune.
It looked down and recognized many of the people crowding the top of the Hokage Tower. It's mouth opened wide and began forming a ball so dark, it seemed to suck out all light from the already dreary October morning. It let the ball just fall, to prolong the wait, firing it would be too quick. They could only stare in horror as it fell, too shocked to do anything to prevent it or run away. It jumps awy as soon as the Biju Ball hits, riding the shockwave above Konoha, all the way shooting a stream of fire at anyone it saw.
When it landed, it swiped it's claws, creating twisters to tear through Konoha, throwing people and debris into the air, only to have it all come crashing down to earth
"GRAAAAWWWWWRRR!" That one roar destroyed the Hospital along with any other buildings, crushing everyone under the weight of the rubble.
-IN NARUTO'S MIND-
"Kyuubi, I think you destroyed everything, can I have my body back?"
"WHY? I'M HAVING SO MUCH FUN!"
"...because nothing's left."
"Fine, but only because I said I would. Demon's can't break promises."
A burst of light and Naruto was standing among the ruins of what once was the Hidden Village of Konoha.
"*sigh* Now what?"
-END-
this was a oneshot of Naruto snapping
if i get alot of good reviews say, 30, then I'll add another chapter, 30 more, i'll add another chapter