The Unknow

by brucec22180

Sodor needed a new heavy goods train and Sir Topham Hatt finds some blueprints for an Southern 2-8-0 Consolidation that was numbered 401 so he builds one almost exactly like it expect as a coal burner and numbers . This is the story about that engine form when she first opens her eyes to the world.(First Fanfic Please Review)Now on hiadus.

1. Born

This is my first story and i would love some feed back.

Also I own my thing but Thomas the Train and the other characters are owned by Mattel

Chapter one

"Born"

The first thing I felt was nothing, total nothingness. I might have stayed in that state for who knows how long, until I felt the warmth. It was like a light or an signal to tell me I was ready. I then felt as if something solid start to course through me as though saying, it was my turn now.

I felt as though I should wake up and open my eyes, as if something was compelling me to.

The first thing I saw when I opened my eyes, was a figure standing in front of me. It said or more like shouted "She is finally awake come over and see.".

It sounded like a male's voice. So I guess it was a he? I thought but before I could think further on it, another one came around from my side which startled me, making me jump a little.

"Look what you did John, you scared her." Said the first one.

"How was I supposed to know that she is easily scared." Said the one called John.

"It common sense, newly awaken steam trains should not be approached from behind their face plate to not scare them." The first one said accusing to John.

The two continued to bicker with each other in front of a very confused engine. It was then that another one came over to the bickering pair.

"Stop it both of you, you're confusing it." Said the one walking up to the to the pair.

"Yes,sir."They both muttered looking down at themselves as the one that had come over left.

"Well we'd better call Sir Topham Hatt to tell him his engine is ready for him." Said John. The other one nodded and they both left my field of view.

I had to question to myself who was this Sir Topham Hatt person and why would they need to tell him any thing about me, also what were those two bickering about. Also who was the one that stepped into it and broke them with all these questions I was thinking about, I was starting to feel tired.

I figured this was a good as time as any to look at my surroundings. When I started to look around from where I was, I saw a wall of tools and many workbenches, a forge, and many other things I did not recognize. It was then that I finally put to and to together to realize that I was in some sort of works.

With that in mind I slowly fell asleep, back into the darkness, but the darkness was different than before it seemed more light as though not permanent but it still had nothing to it but a void. With that thought the void finally caused me to cease thinking and rest.

AN. Ok so I would like some reviews and I would like criticism don't be to hard please this is my first BYE ( edited 10/1/2016)