Saiyajin
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Ok so welcome to something I've been working on and reading over myself many times to make sure it was interesting, and I would say it is, now sorry for being away for so long but I needed to thin about a few things. Don't be alarmed, Changes is still going on, I just need to take a break from it for some time, that and I'm rewriting it, so in the mean time I'm writing this story, which is something I wanted to do for quite some time, so enjoy and leave some reviews and criticisms etc.
It was the night of the Summer Sun Celebration and there were fireworks going off in the night sky to celebrate, as it was only mere minutes away before the sun rose. A certain group of six ponies, three fillies, one dragon, and seven pets were all sitting on top of a hill on a picnic blanket. They were all staring up into the sky, Rarity had Sweetie Belle by her side fast asleep, and the same can be said for Apple Jack and Rainbow Dash, who had the respective fillies next to them. Spike was barely awake as he sat on Twilight's back and all of the pets were huddle together asleep as well.
The scene on the ground was peaceful, despite the fact that Pinkie Pie was down there, but she would make Discord jealous. But, elsewhere an epic battle was raging that would intertwine the fate of this world and that one. (Pfft right)
There was a loud explosion as dirt and flaming chunks of wood were strewn across the field from a narrowly avoiding energy blast. The being that fired the blast had a smug look on its face, "Hmph, not bad for a pitiful monkey." It said
First person, GO!
"Frost! Don't get cocky, I'm still not done!" I yelled, looking up, I was panting heavily and my eyesight was getting blurry, but I could still see the out line of Frost's figure. Frost was the same species as the defeated tyrants, Frieza, Cooler, and King Cold, but he resembled Frieza, a lot. The only differences are that the shiny parts on his body were a deep blue instead of purple. "Come on, give me everything you've got you smelly dildo shaped lizard!"
I smiled as I saw him get visibly pissed, but that smile instantly slipped away as he held his finger up, pointed towards the sky in an iconic pose/stance. A red ball the size of a wrecking ball formed above his finger, "So you want it all? Fine, take it!" the ball grew 100 times to the size of the Spirit Bomb used on Frieza, "SUPER DEATH BALL!" he yelled, sending the huge ball of energy flying towards me.
I gulped down a lump in my throat, 'Fuck…' I thought. As I looked up I got into the most well known pose to any fighter or person that knows me or the man that trained me. I spread my legs apart slight, put my hands behind my back and cupped them together, "KA ME" a small blue ball formed in my hand, "HA ME" it grew bigger and just as I was about to say the last word a small ball of bright light appeared in front of me without me noticing until the light engulfed me and then I was gone.
Meanwhile
A bright light appeared slowly and Twilight tried to wake Spike up, as he'd fallen asleep, "Spike, wake up, the Princess is raising the sun."
Spike just mumbled, "Five more minutes mommy" and held on tighter to Twilight. She just shook her head, but as the light got brighter she was getting excited, as was every other pony. However, the excitement died when the light faded and standing in it's place was a creature with a bright ball in it's hands, almost as bright as the sun this close up.
Back on EarthFrost was worried as he felt his attack hit the ground, but didn't sense any energy opposing it, as soon as he fully thought of this he went into full blown panic mode. "Fuckfuckfuckfuckfuck!" he said, pacing back and forward, "Crap, Py (pronounce as pie) is going to kill me….. AGH FUCK!" Frost was now hyperventilating; he sat down to think really quick, "Fuck, I just killed my best friend!"
At this point a loud scratchy voice appeared in his head, "FROST, ARE YOU THERE?!" Frost nearly fell over when he heard the voice of King Kai… 'WAIT! King Kai that was it!' "Hey, King Kai…. Um…. well I'm sure you were just watching but um…. wan you find out if BJ is in the afterworld of HFIL?" Frost asked quietly, but loud enough to be heard.
"Sure, give me a second." King Kai went silent for a minute and then came back, "No, he's not in either, in fact according to Old Kai, he's in a complete different dimension that not even Shenron could bring him back from, sorry Frost, and good luck with telling Py. I have to go deal with these two idiots messing up MY planet. HEY NO NOT MY HOUSE-"the line cut off.
"Well that's just great…. I mean I'm happy I didn't kill him but still, will we ever see him again…. Oh… OH FUCK! I GOTTA TELL PY... maybe I can get that jerk to brag about it yeah…. Yeah that might suit me better…but first I need a nap." Frost instantly passed out at that point.
Back in Equestria
I blinked as the light faded and I was ready to fire off the Kamehameha wave, but good thing my brain kicked in at the last second and told me to look before I fire, because if I did I would be shooting off into a crowd of….. PONIES?! I looked around frantically looking for somewhere to fire it but everywhere had a pony, so I did something I've never pulled off before without passing out for several days, I absorbed the energy from the attack and it disappeared, 'For once I didn't pass out, Woo-oh there goes my legs…' I face planted into the ground and everything went black.
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So that was a lot better writing than I've had before and it's shorter than normal with a nice little ending if I do say so myself, sure it still may not be the best writing in the world but I say its better than the first chapter of changes.
KINGDOM BRONY AWAY!
