Kio

This isn't my first fanfiction. I used to go under the name Loveless8000, and i've worked on improving my writing as far as vocabulary goes and even maturing my writing style. I hope to better develop my writing style even further and to be entertaining to you all the while. I welcome any feedback. Enjoy!

I woke up this morning with another man in my bed and another hangover, but it's not the man I want. He's a gorgeous man, the man I long to hold in my arms. He's always quiet but he looks as though he's got something to say. His name is Soubi and, unfortunately for me, he is in love with a sixth grader named Ritsuka, who in all honesty is pretty cute too. He spends all his time thinking about Ritsuka-kun or hanging out with Ritsuka-kun. It's always time for Ritsuka-kun no time for Kio (that's me by the way). Well enough is enough. Today is Kio day! Soubi-chan promised we would spend time together today, and I'm going to make sure he keeps that promise.

I arrived at the McDonalds at noon where Soubi told me to meet him, which was odd because Soubi hates fast food. I ordered a big mac and an extra fries on the off chance that Soubi would eat them. I took a seat in one of the booths close to the entrance so he would be sure to see me. The time was 12:12 and I tried to pass some time by playing a game on my phone. Somehow I found myself texting him Where are you Soubi? I've been here for over a half an hour. I rested my head on the table, how stupid am I? Why would I possibly think he'd show up? He's probably out with Ritsuka without even-. My thoughts were brought to a screeching halt by the touch a so soft I hardly felt it. "Now I wasn't that late was I?" said the silky voice of the hand. "A lot can happen in a half an hour Soubi-chan" I said with my head still on the table. "Well I'm here now sweet Kio." He said in a velvety voice, like that of a crooner on an old fashioned record. "Are these fries for me?" I looked up and smiled when I saw him sitting in front of me looking perfect as ever. He has the gorgeous, seductive eyes that can make you forgive him in a split second. Even if you're infuriated with him he give you one look with those eyes and you want to pounce on him right then and there.

"Yes, of course!" I was gushing but i couldn't control myself. "I mean they may be cold but I could get you more if you wa-"

"They're perfect Kio." He flirted with a grin "So what's on the agenda today?" he looked so appetizing today. His hair climbed all over his black jacket and pink scarf like the roots of an old oak tree. I daydreamed for only a moment before I realized I had been gawking as he was awaiting my response. I could feel my face getting hotter with the passing seconds. My lips quivered as I searched for an answer.

"Oh I was thinking we could go to the art festival up at the university." I somehow managed to let the words fall out my mouth. I handed him the flyer our professor had passed out in class. "Then maybe go do some shopping?"

"Sounds delightful, are you ready to go?"

I looked down at my tray and there was still a half of a burger untouched and almost a whole box of fries. I was starving and my new diet had been kicking my ass. I shook my head. Get in the game this is your chance Kio. "Of course, let's get going.

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If you enjoyed please ask for more its kind of short but i promise it will only get better. I hope to start working on chapter 2 tomorrow. I enjoy any critiquing THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING!

P.S, as the story continues it will begin to get more sexual