Ian Hawk's Daughter

Chapter 1

Note: What if Ian had a daughter and wife?


Racheal Hawk's P.O.V.

Racheal: I am Racheal Hawk, Ian & Franny Hawks' Daughter,

AaTC movie 1

Racheal: I one day heard the chipmunks singing down stairs. I suprised like my father.


But, soon at a party... My father had a fight with David Seville, a worker of his. Then my father decided to lie to the chipmunks, I tried to stop him.

Racheal: Father! What are you doing?

Ian: shush, my daughter

Racheal: Don't hurt their feelings and don't lie to them.

Ian: Now you're acting like Dave!

Racheal: Father, please... Their not rats, they have feelings just like us!

Ian: I should keep you away from Dave! Now if excuse me!

Ian pushes Racheal aside and she rans off screen and starts crying.


Racheal: Much later, I climbed up the roof to see the chipmunks after father threw Theodore out of his room.

Racheal: Any room for me?

Simon: Racheal?

Alvin: Hey...Racheal

Theodore: Hi Racheal

Racheal: If you want, you guys can sleep in my room.

Theodore: Thanks but..

Simon: We'll think about

Racheal: Okay, and if you want to tell something then you can tell me.

Alvin: Cool

Simon: Fine by me

Theodore: Okay


Racheal: Then later on, my father tried to Serparate Dave from the chipmunks.

Racheal: Are trying to serparate Dave from the chipmunks?

Ian: Honey, Honey, Honey, Let's not talk about that.

Racheal: Let Dave see them, because he cares about them.

Ian: Uh...No!

Ian Pushes Racheal again and she runs off screen and screams

Racheal: Dad, you are a jerk!

Ian: You'll love me soon


Racheal: Then came the concert. The chipmunks' singing voices needed rest but my father disobeyed the vet.

Racheal: Please, father listen to her, they need that rest

Ian: Get out of my way!

Ian pushes Racheal for the 3rd time and she again rans off screen and crys.


Racheal: After the chipmunks trashed their concert I saw the chipmunks in a cage, and I sent them free.

(I know not from the movie, But I added Racheal)

Simon: Racheal?

(as she frees the chipmunks)

Racheal: I'm freeing you but be quit, you see my dad... he hired someone to kill my mom because she wouldn't a concert. And only kept my live to his heir.

Theodore: What horror you lived, Why are you the nice one?

Racheal: Because I'm not like him

(she frees the chipmunks)

Alvin: Thanks

Racheal: You're welcome

(she replaces the escaped chipmunks with 3 of the chipmunk dolls)

Ian: Hey Racheal

Racheal: Father, I was just telling the rats to shut up.

Ian: What's with the change?

Racheal: I finally know how you are successful and famous, hear that rats!

Ian: Good, that's my girl. Now come on my heir.


Racheal: And that's how I met & helped the chipmunks

Note: the chipmunks are not mine. Only Racheal Hawk is mine.