hehe this was my first story and chapter. please review your thoughts about my fiction. I would be grateful for some suggestions.
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Chapter 1: How it all began
"Wow the breeze is cool and fresh isn't it?" a girl with a brown hair asked to a man next to her with a black hair and sharp grey eyes."hn, yes it is". he answered. "Eh, they were having a conversation am i right?" A certain brunet asked a certain silveret. "Yes your right, Juudaime." the silveret replied."Yo, Hayato and Tsuna also!" a baseball guy said to them while walking towards them. " How dare you not showing any respect to juudaime!" hayato said while emmitting a dangerous aura around him. "Gokudera-kun it's ok.".Tsuna said. "yes Hayato." Yamamoto said while smilling. Atleast Gokudera calmed down at once. They were still staring at the couple having a smiled all together. Until ...
"Sir,Sir the ship is going to sink!" The luxury ship's crew said as he ran to the Captain's room."Boss what's happening?!" Chrome said as she stare at tsuna."Chrome,don't worry,don't panicked we'll be okay." Tsuna said as he reassured his mist guardian their safety."B-boss but-" Chrome said but was stopped when she saw tsuna smiled at her but she can feel her boss is nervous, so she only kept silent. The people in the ship were all panicking , they were all screaming,running around and many more. the two couple in the deck also noticed this,the girl went scared but the man promised her that she would be safe. then the girl kept female crews guided the passengers inside the ship and helping them to put them their life jackets. after a minute they were all ready. there were no boats so they have to jump straight to the water. the Vongola Decimo's guardians also jumps and also the couple did it to. but unfortunately, the waves were to strong that the two couples have been separated."Yu! where are you Yu?!" Hibari
shouted as he try to find her, but he didn't succeed. when they got to the shore, Tsuna and his other guardians were safe, no one has serious injuries. "Wait, where's yu-chan?" the brunet asked until he noticed Hibari was all quiet. He then walks to him. "Hibari-san are you a okay?" Tsuna asked didn't answer, his face was covered by his began to doubt what had happen,and he started to cry. All of his guardians stare at the scene and they didn't even realize that there was a tears falling from their face.
1 day after the incident,they go back to the shore that they were when the ship sinks. They were all dressed in black. They were all crying except Hibari who kept silent all the time. After that they left the place but still crying,Hibari staying quiet all the time. still remembering what had just happend. Still blaming himself that he didn't hold her more tightly. And the days has passed, they were still searching for her."We won't give up!,we can still find her!" Tsuna said desperately."Yes,Juudaime! I also believe,she will come back." Hayato reassured Tsuna. All of Tsuna's guardians nodded believing that one day she will come back and they will be all happy together.
After a month, Hibari still didn't recover over the incident,still blaming himself for the lost of his loved one. Tsuna and his guardians are starting to get worried about him,they think all of the possible ways to comfort hibari but, if they ever disturbed him and talked about the incident, Tsuna was sure that they would be 'Bitten to Death!'. After school they would end up going home together. Even if they were with a creepy pineapple head, that has a creepy laugh like 'kufufufu'. all of them were scared up to their spines. they were now hoping that one day would come, so Hibari won't be like that forever.
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"Um, Hibari-san, when will the first comers welcoming will start?" Kusakabe asked to his higher ups.
"Hn. Tomorrow, 7:00 P.M. so prepare everything that is needed." Hibari replied while looking outside the windows watching the sun goes down before leaving a sigh
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"Yes,Hibari-san!" Kusakabe said as he bowed. Hibari glared at him, indicating that he must leave. kusakabe leave the room immediately. Leaving Hibari alone, and sad.
Yay! I finished my first chapter! next one, will be updated soon or i can make it after the first chapter?. :) Thank you for reading~! please leave a review on how about you think about my fiction! Thank you~! :)