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From: "Grace Fonseca" coolloving@h...
Date: Thu Feb 22, 2001 3:12pm
Subject: Fic: Payback
Fandom: X-Men Evolution
Title of Story: Payback
Author: Grace Fonseca and Rachael Keane
E-Mail: coolloving@h... RachaelKeane@p...
Pairing: Ally/Evan/Julia
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Everything belongs to Kids WB, Marvel Comics, and Stan Lee.
Rachael owns Allyson LeBeau, Grace owns Julia Duvall.
Story Summary: Julia decides to go after Evan and cause all sorts of
problems for the Supreme Queens.
Author's Note: Sequel to "Supreme Queens". There will be an extended ending
done by Rachael.
Feedback: Hell yes…
"Put me down, ya' stupid fool." I shouted at the speed demon.
"First of all, my name is Pietro Maximoff and I'm assuming you have one too
girl." He simply stood there with a condescending smirk on his face.
"Julia Duvall, normally ah would say it's a pleasure, but ah want to kill
dat' bitch." I took a knife out, when Pietro knocked it out of my hands.
"Now, Julia you want to hurt Allyson, hurt her emotionally, not physically.
Go after her man instead. His name is Evan Daniels." Pietro's suggestion had
possibilities. "Besides, you don't want to tangle with her friends.
"So what does 'dis guy look like?" Ah wondered what moron would date that
no good skanky ho Allyson LeBeau.
"Oh you will know when you see him. Gotta go…Bye." He just blew by me, as I
went to my history class.
I saw a hot looking guy when I entered the room. He was lean, had beautiful
dark chocolate eyes and beautiful blonde hair. I decided to take the seat
next to him. "Hi, my name is Julia, wha's yoah's sweetie?" I slowly fed him
a chocolate, when in walked 'dat bitch from lunch.
"Hey, 'dat's my seat Julia 'dat yoah sitting in." Allyson looked really
mad.
"Ah don't see yoah name on 'dis seat. Besides 'dis guy hasn't even told me
his name, bitch." Ah responded bitterly to her holier than thou attitude.
"His name is Evan, and yoah name is gonna be MUD if ya' don't get the hell
outta my seat." Allyson said, as she took me by the collar of mah shirt and
then Evan suggested:
"Allyson, why not sit down on the other side of me?"
"Oh fine, but ya' aint heard the last of me, ya' bitch." She said taking
da seat on da left side of Evan.
"So ah hear ya' like to skateboard, Evan. I do too. I would love to see ya'
moves." Mah eyes were locked firmly on Evan, so 'dat Ally could see.
"I'd love to see your moves." Allyson mimicked me.
***I'll show you some moves, into my fist, you fuckin ho bag!***
"Hey, Ah ain't no ho bag, BITCH!!!" I responded to what she thought.
"Girls…" Evan pleaded with us to stop.
" Shut Up!" Allyson snapped at Evan. Her cold green eyes giving him a
deathly stare.
" Hey don' you tell 'im ta shut up! He can make his own decisions." I
grabbed Allyson by her collar.
"I can tell 'im ta shut up if ah wanna. He's mah boyfriend…not yours.
If ya don' like it, you can sit and spin of "dis, bitch!" Allyson said,
sticking her middle finger up at me.
"Oh really." My eyes lit up wit' demonic glee as I said very loudly
"Well at leas' Ah don' cheat on mah boyfriends. You'r fucking Scott
Summers." Ah sat back in mah seat happily, exposing Allyson to total
humiliation.
Allyson suddenly ran out of the room in tears "AH DON' BELIEVE YA!" she
yelled.
Jean was furious, but Kate stood up and walked over to me. "You fuckin'
whore!" she snapped, punching me in 'de face. Then ah followed Allyson out
ta 'de hall.
"Hey Jean, can' keep yoah man fait'ful." Ah wanted ta knock 'de Supreme
Queens down a peg or two.
Jean 'den walked up ta me "The only one who isn't faithful is YOU! With
your god damn lies. I know Ally would never sleep with Scott. She and I are
like sisters." She yelled, slapping me in 'de face.
Ah took out a tape labeled "Allyson LeBeau & Scott Summers". "Here is the
tape, ya stupid barbie doll if ya don' believe me." I branded it to her
proudly as I over heard a small tidbit of Allyson's and Kate's conversation.
Kate found Allyson in a corner by the staircase "Hey are you okay?" she
asked.
Allyson sighed and looked up her face tear stained, her mascara smeared
across her face "Kate, she's no damn good! She has no right to do such shit
to me."
Kate rolled her eyes "Well, I'm neutral in this, all I'm gonna to tell
ya' is that she's a very disturbed person w'th blood in her eyes, ah
wouldn't go too far with her." She warned.
"What the hell is this garbage you're peddling me?" Jean didn't believe me
that this tape was genuine, until I told her where I got it.
"That tape came from Ally's locker." I stuck my tongue out at Jean.
"Are you serious? Well, I'm gotta talk to her about it, later, as soon as
I find her." Jean sighed.
"Yeah, but it looks like ya two don't know how to please a man." Ah found
myself so enjoying destroying their little group. Revenge was so sweet.
"Hey, I think that's enough." Evan grabbed me and shoved me into the
ladies room. "Stay away from Allyson and the rest of my friends, you skanky
ho." He yelled at me and I hated being bullied by anybody.
I walked up to Evan and stuck a finger in his face accusingly "All I
wanted was friends, but they didn' want ta be 'dat wit' me. So I was all
alone again. Fine! But one day, I plan to make you ALL pay for your
insolence." For some reason, I couldn' control all of my rage 'dat I felt. I
swore to myself that I would make them feel the same way that I felt. I then
continued "Did you know 'dat Ally and I know each other from back home?" I
asked him.
Evan looked at Ally in some shock "You know this girl, Ally?" he asked.
Ally sighed "Not by fuckin' choice, Ev. My family and her family were
rivals in New Orleans. But we broke 'dat deal up. 'Cause her, Remy, my blood
brother Bobby and I were the best of friends. But her and Bobby started
dating when they were like 12, and then when she was 13, one new year's
eve…her and Bobby made a big mistake and conceived a baby. That would be her
daughter Francine, who is now about 2 or 3." She explained.
I was furious about Ally's sudden "foot in the mouth" disease. So ah
decided ta retaliate back ta her "Ah wouldn' be one ta talk, Ally. Who here
has a baby by Remy? Why didn' ya evah tell Evan 'bout 'lil Gabrielle?" I
asked her, with a mischievous grin.
Ally hopped off the sink in the bathroom and walked out with the rest of
us trailing behind her "Ah guess ah deserve 'dat 'lil comment. My foot loves
ta live in mah mouth. But let me tell ya guys 'dat ah didn' plan on bringin'
Gabby into 'dis world. She was a HUGE mistake. I would nevah tell her 'dat
ta her face. She'd hate me foah life. All I gotta do now is try to figure
out what to do 'about mah traitorous best friend here." Ally wanted to kill
me, but ah wasn' scared.
"Now, Ally sweetie, ya' just gotta love me. Ah put some spice in yoah
boring life." Ah just walked out of Ally's sight as ah saw the rest of them
holding her back.
When school was over, ah saw a familiar face in a beautiful cherry red
Porsche. Now, there was a welcome surprise. It was Remy.
The End.
To be continued in another story.
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From: "Grace Fonseca" coolloving@h...
Date: Thu Feb 22, 2001 3:12pm
Subject: Fic: Payback
Fandom: X-Men Evolution
Title of Story: Payback
Author: Grace Fonseca and Rachael Keane
E-Mail: coolloving@h... RachaelKeane@p...
Pairing: Ally/Evan/Julia
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Everything belongs to Kids WB, Marvel Comics, and Stan Lee.
Rachael owns Allyson LeBeau, Grace owns Julia Duvall.
Story Summary: Julia decides to go after Evan and cause all sorts of
problems for the Supreme Queens.
Author's Note: Sequel to "Supreme Queens". There will be an extended ending
done by Rachael.
Feedback: Hell yes…
"Put me down, ya' stupid fool." I shouted at the speed demon.
"First of all, my name is Pietro Maximoff and I'm assuming you have one too
girl." He simply stood there with a condescending smirk on his face.
"Julia Duvall, normally ah would say it's a pleasure, but ah want to kill
dat' bitch." I took a knife out, when Pietro knocked it out of my hands.
"Now, Julia you want to hurt Allyson, hurt her emotionally, not physically.
Go after her man instead. His name is Evan Daniels." Pietro's suggestion had
possibilities. "Besides, you don't want to tangle with her friends.
"So what does 'dis guy look like?" Ah wondered what moron would date that
no good skanky ho Allyson LeBeau.
"Oh you will know when you see him. Gotta go…Bye." He just blew by me, as I
went to my history class.
I saw a hot looking guy when I entered the room. He was lean, had beautiful
dark chocolate eyes and beautiful blonde hair. I decided to take the seat
next to him. "Hi, my name is Julia, wha's yoah's sweetie?" I slowly fed him
a chocolate, when in walked 'dat bitch from lunch.
"Hey, 'dat's my seat Julia 'dat yoah sitting in." Allyson looked really
mad.
"Ah don't see yoah name on 'dis seat. Besides 'dis guy hasn't even told me
his name, bitch." Ah responded bitterly to her holier than thou attitude.
"His name is Evan, and yoah name is gonna be MUD if ya' don't get the hell
outta my seat." Allyson said, as she took me by the collar of mah shirt and
then Evan suggested:
"Allyson, why not sit down on the other side of me?"
"Oh fine, but ya' aint heard the last of me, ya' bitch." She said taking
da seat on da left side of Evan.
"So ah hear ya' like to skateboard, Evan. I do too. I would love to see ya'
moves." Mah eyes were locked firmly on Evan, so 'dat Ally could see.
"I'd love to see your moves." Allyson mimicked me.
***I'll show you some moves, into my fist, you fuckin ho bag!***
"Hey, Ah ain't no ho bag, BITCH!!!" I responded to what she thought.
"Girls…" Evan pleaded with us to stop.
" Shut Up!" Allyson snapped at Evan. Her cold green eyes giving him a
deathly stare.
" Hey don' you tell 'im ta shut up! He can make his own decisions." I
grabbed Allyson by her collar.
"I can tell 'im ta shut up if ah wanna. He's mah boyfriend…not yours.
If ya don' like it, you can sit and spin of "dis, bitch!" Allyson said,
sticking her middle finger up at me.
"Oh really." My eyes lit up wit' demonic glee as I said very loudly
"Well at leas' Ah don' cheat on mah boyfriends. You'r fucking Scott
Summers." Ah sat back in mah seat happily, exposing Allyson to total
humiliation.
Allyson suddenly ran out of the room in tears "AH DON' BELIEVE YA!" she
yelled.
Jean was furious, but Kate stood up and walked over to me. "You fuckin'
whore!" she snapped, punching me in 'de face. Then ah followed Allyson out
ta 'de hall.
"Hey Jean, can' keep yoah man fait'ful." Ah wanted ta knock 'de Supreme
Queens down a peg or two.
Jean 'den walked up ta me "The only one who isn't faithful is YOU! With
your god damn lies. I know Ally would never sleep with Scott. She and I are
like sisters." She yelled, slapping me in 'de face.
Ah took out a tape labeled "Allyson LeBeau & Scott Summers". "Here is the
tape, ya stupid barbie doll if ya don' believe me." I branded it to her
proudly as I over heard a small tidbit of Allyson's and Kate's conversation.
Kate found Allyson in a corner by the staircase "Hey are you okay?" she
asked.
Allyson sighed and looked up her face tear stained, her mascara smeared
across her face "Kate, she's no damn good! She has no right to do such shit
to me."
Kate rolled her eyes "Well, I'm neutral in this, all I'm gonna to tell
ya' is that she's a very disturbed person w'th blood in her eyes, ah
wouldn't go too far with her." She warned.
"What the hell is this garbage you're peddling me?" Jean didn't believe me
that this tape was genuine, until I told her where I got it.
"That tape came from Ally's locker." I stuck my tongue out at Jean.
"Are you serious? Well, I'm gotta talk to her about it, later, as soon as
I find her." Jean sighed.
"Yeah, but it looks like ya two don't know how to please a man." Ah found
myself so enjoying destroying their little group. Revenge was so sweet.
"Hey, I think that's enough." Evan grabbed me and shoved me into the
ladies room. "Stay away from Allyson and the rest of my friends, you skanky
ho." He yelled at me and I hated being bullied by anybody.
I walked up to Evan and stuck a finger in his face accusingly "All I
wanted was friends, but they didn' want ta be 'dat wit' me. So I was all
alone again. Fine! But one day, I plan to make you ALL pay for your
insolence." For some reason, I couldn' control all of my rage 'dat I felt. I
swore to myself that I would make them feel the same way that I felt. I then
continued "Did you know 'dat Ally and I know each other from back home?" I
asked him.
Evan looked at Ally in some shock "You know this girl, Ally?" he asked.
Ally sighed "Not by fuckin' choice, Ev. My family and her family were
rivals in New Orleans. But we broke 'dat deal up. 'Cause her, Remy, my blood
brother Bobby and I were the best of friends. But her and Bobby started
dating when they were like 12, and then when she was 13, one new year's
eve…her and Bobby made a big mistake and conceived a baby. That would be her
daughter Francine, who is now about 2 or 3." She explained.
I was furious about Ally's sudden "foot in the mouth" disease. So ah
decided ta retaliate back ta her "Ah wouldn' be one ta talk, Ally. Who here
has a baby by Remy? Why didn' ya evah tell Evan 'bout 'lil Gabrielle?" I
asked her, with a mischievous grin.
Ally hopped off the sink in the bathroom and walked out with the rest of
us trailing behind her "Ah guess ah deserve 'dat 'lil comment. My foot loves
ta live in mah mouth. But let me tell ya guys 'dat ah didn' plan on bringin'
Gabby into 'dis world. She was a HUGE mistake. I would nevah tell her 'dat
ta her face. She'd hate me foah life. All I gotta do now is try to figure
out what to do 'about mah traitorous best friend here." Ally wanted to kill
me, but ah wasn' scared.
"Now, Ally sweetie, ya' just gotta love me. Ah put some spice in yoah
boring life." Ah just walked out of Ally's sight as ah saw the rest of them
holding her back.
When school was over, ah saw a familiar face in a beautiful cherry red
Porsche. Now, there was a welcome surprise. It was Remy.
The End.
To be continued in another story.
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