love

by mainmanmason

okay my first sonnet i made it up and it may not be write but its good i think so read and enjoy, i made it my freshman year and my teacher said to put it up here so you tell me your thoughts on it.

LOVE

Love is a passion that burns in the soul

When I'm not with her my world is dark and cold

No one else but she can make my life whole

I will love her for life even when old

The day we part is the end of my life

I stop breathing when she walks in the room

With her I have no worry and or strife

Her leaving me would only lead me to my doom

I try to find out what makes her tick

I will always stand write beside you

Without you I lie down sore and sick

There's no one else who can love you like I do

I can make this promise with my heart even if you make it sore

I will always love you forever more