Tremors

by Xander and Kanja

This one is about Rabbitpaw, the poor apprentice who only lived to see one full day as an apprentice. This is what happened when he died. Please R&R! This will either be called tremors or Burning Sensations! Please review whixch title you think best fits this! If you think they both dont really fit it, post your own on the review! Thanks!

It started with a tremor.

That was the first thing I remembered.

I was out hunting for my clan.

My second day as an apprentice.

A violent tremor

Trees were falling all around me when it started.

I heard rocks falling down the gorge below

Holes were opening up all around me.

I ran.

Ran as fast as I could.

My life flashed before my eyes.

I let out a startled screech as a hole opened up in front of me.

I managed to grab onto the ledge on the opposite side as I fell.

I looked down.

Rocks were jutting out inside of the hole.

They were like teeth ready to rip me to shreds.

There was a bright liquid at the bottom.

I remembered my mom telling me she was named after an element.

This must be it.

Magma.

That was the name of the liquid.

The ledge started to give way underneath my weight.

I tried to pull myself up,

But it only made it worse.

I yowled my lungs out as I fell towards the magma.

The hole seemed to get wider as I went.

The closer to the magma I got,

The hotter it got.

I flailed my paws around as I turned and rolled,

Trying to grab onto any ledge available.

But there was none.

I let out a hole of pain as the magma bubbled up and hit me square on my back.

My fur caught fire as it did.

And all I could think of was how much this hurt.

This was torture.

But the worst was soon to come.

When I hit the magma it felt as if the sun had just touched earth.

My entire self caught fire.

But I was glad it was finally over.

'I couldn't bare another second of this.

My name is Rabbitpaw.

I was brought into this world by Magma,

And I was taken out with magma.