!this a story I wrote when I was sick with strep throat. Please read and review
I hate it when Edward has to go hunting. I know he has to go drink animal blood or he'd wind up killing me but I hate being away from him, even for a weekend. But at least Edward would be home tomorrow. I hadn't been able to sleep without him, the cool feel of his body pressed against mine through the quilt, the way he hums my lullaby. Only one more night I thought to myself as I put on pajamas, brushed my teeth and snuggled underneath my quilt. I tossed and turned all night, but sometime between four and five, I dosed off. Around seven, I was awoken by Charlie's police cruiser as it pulled out of the driveway. No doubt my father was going fishing, like he did almost every Sunday. SUNDAY!! Edward was coming back to Forks today! As though answering my thoughts, I heard a knock on my bedroom window. I hurried over to let my vampire boyfriend in. As soon as he was fully inside my room, I fell into Edward's embrace, locking our lips together. "Bella, how was your weekend love?" he asked, pulling away to look at my face. I decided to go with the truth. "Slow," I responded, "And yours? Did you manage to get any mountain lion?" "Three, plus a bear," my true love said, staring at me with those wonderful, golden butterscotch eyes he gets when he's full. Edward placed his too-cold hand on my forehead. "Bella, sweetheart I think you are sick. Your forehead is incredibly warm and your throat is swollen. Does it hurt?" he asked, his brow crinkling with concern. Now that he mentioned it, my throat was feeling a little scratchy. I nodded. "A little bit." "And," asked Edward, "how long has your throat been bothering you?" "Honestly, Edward I don't know, "I told him, "I didn't notice until now. I didn't notice much of anything this weekend." Suddenly, Edward scooped me up in his arms. "We need to get you to Carlisle. I think you have strep throat, love."
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