This is my first ever release of any story I've created, so all reviews will be appreciated.
I'm going to keep it short. Just a minor one shot I developed while back, I'm making it in medias res just because that's easier for me and will hopefully successfully intrigue you. ;)
So Enjoy!
"Why are you following me?" His clothes remained flopping after his abrupt turn; he didn't look happy…He was trying to seem intimidating, and he surely was, but I apparently wasn't buying it.
"I…uh..I was…" Why wasn't I responding? No words were coming out of my mouth…
"I…I wasn't"
"Oh, you weren't?"
…What an awful smirk, and those eyes they're like…
"It's rude to stare."
…Was I staring….I'm staring…Words, where are my words…"I'm not staring. I'm thinking. There's a difference"
His eyes rolled…
"But now that you bring it up. Yes, I am staring…And...What, What happened to your…" I stopped...He finally looked intimidating enough for me to back off. Or not... "Are you growling?"
He turned away, almost as fast as he had turned in the first place.
I watched him go…and shuffled my way through the crowds back to our little apartment in the bustling city of Ba Sing Se.
Yay. the end. Well that's like the shortest thing ever and I'm hoping the lay out doesn't get confusing. I could have organized the dialogue better but I'm not good with it so I'd much rather leave it as is...And that is all you readers are going to ge for now. Hopefully you were able to figure out who my mystery man was...
If not, maybe you'll find out soon