CHRONICLES: REUNION
Vision 0: Everything Happened the Wrong Way (Lolo's Point of View)
I held her in my arms on the cracked wall. I breathed heavily, sweat dripping from my face and drenching my clothing. The area was destroyed and the sky was dark, lightning cracking in the air. The girl whimpered in my arms. I began to glow pink, using my Priestess powers to heal the girl.
Lolo: Shh…don't…cry…don't cry…
It wasn't supposed to happen this way. It was supposed to be better than this. The plan was to get in, get out, and destroy the Temple of Desire. It was so strange, the Temple of Desire. It represented everything…it meant gaining something, dreaming, lust…
Nothing was working out right…the 5 other temples had been destroyed, crumbling like my dreams. There was no hero anymore, no love, no hope.
*STOMP* *STOMP*
Lolo: Oh no,
not another one!
Suddenly, a giant with no skin or meat but was just a skeleton, gripped me and the girl. Suddenly, the skeleton fell to the ground after the ground shook. The bones were scattered apart and standing upon them, besides me and the girl, was a green-blue figure. He had a golden collar on and red eyes. His ears were long and flowing in the wind.
???: Lolo…I can't keep this up-UGH!
The King of Sorrow fell to the ground, blood leaking from his mouth. I began to cry, and I looked down to the ground. I looked into the sky and looked up and thought about how it all started…
Lolo: It was all because of that day…because of the Reunion…
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If you would prefer that I right the dialogue like "No! I cannot allow you to die!" than I'll do it if majority says so.
Yeah this is a remake of my past
fiction Klonoa Returns. It'll be 80% different in the way that
it'll have 3 parts to it and better writing and a more
understandable/pretty different story. This, Vision 0, is a prologue
chapter for the middle of the 2nd fiction in this series
"Chronicles." The 3 fictions will be known as
Chronicles:
Reunion
Chronicles: Defeat
Chronicles: The Coming Generation
So stay tuned! The next chapters will be normal length for sure! In the 1st Vision, Lolo remembers