Hi uhm this is my first story so review and if you steal any of my
characters I will hunt you down and massacre you j/k I will hurt you
though.
Death in a dark heart
Far away on the planet of icy flame Gwar, many strange creatures exist. Some creatures are healthy for the environment such as the cwalos. There are dangerous creatures to and just because the cwalos are not dangerous no one has ever made it through once a cwalos attaches to you
Back on Earth Goku was getting packed for a week of training on Gwar. Since Gwar has a gravitational pull of 666 it's is very hard to lift anything. This gravity level has crushed even the strongest humans. Chi-Chi "Goku please be careful any one who every stepped foot on Gwar never made it back, and if u don't make it back ill kill you." Goku replies "sheesh Chi-Chi ill be alright u don't have to go super saiyan 5 on me." Chi-Chi yells back "I know, I know I just don't now what will happen if you don't return to us." Goku yells once again "Listen don't worry about it I'll be just fine, ok." Chi-Chi "ok."
Goku continues to pack anxiously, "Hey gohan you sure you don't want to come........Gohan hmmmm must be with Videll. Ok Chi-Chi I'm going to go now bye." "BYE Goku" Chi-Chi responds. Goku leaves Earth and finnaly arrives at the awaited planet Gwar. Inside Gwar Goku wonders were everyone is. Then finally a tour guide arrives to Goku, "Excuse me sir are you the warrior of Earth Goku" says the guide. Goku replies "Why yes, yes I am, I am here for the training center." Little does Goku know he is being watched by a tribe of cwalos that aren't exactly friends of the human race.
Later that night Goku packs everything in to his dresser and little does he now he is being watched and hunted. Goku relies there is a draft and says "damn that draft is murder." The cwalos moved in for their attack as soon as Goku fell asleep. The cwalos quicky attached themselves to Goku arms and legs manipuilating his mind and getting inside of his head literally. As Goku sleeps through the night the Cwalos move into his body and mutating on the way. The cwalos finally found Gokus hearth and were in for the fight of there life with Goku's kindness surrounding his hearth no evil cwalos would break through. The mutated cwalos or majanolos started to retreat when Goku's antibodies rushed to the scene. A war started inside Goku near the heart causing serious heartburn. Goku wakes and scream out. He runs to the sink and drinks over 1 gallon of water before the heat of the heartburn died down the water rushed into the heart knocking out many of the enemy but the barrier of kindness as well.
The cwalos and majanolos quicky finished the antibodies off and rushed ti the wounded heart of Goku. Many of the enemy did to the blood many died of the power of the heart and many dioed inside the heart in the blood flow of Goku. The herat was not affected by that and all the cwalos inside Goku died in the body of Goku to be recycled somehow. Goku awakens the next morning feeling slight pain in his heart due to the war last night. Chi-Chi calls up and ask how he is doing and Goku replies "Just peachy you old hag now hang up the goddamn phone and do your stupid job I'll be home in 3 days ok you witch" C hi-Chi starts to cry and hangs the phone up.
Why would Goku say that to Chi-Chi? Could the cwalos attempt to make Goku negative have worked? Find out in my next fic.
Bye for now
Death in a dark heart
Far away on the planet of icy flame Gwar, many strange creatures exist. Some creatures are healthy for the environment such as the cwalos. There are dangerous creatures to and just because the cwalos are not dangerous no one has ever made it through once a cwalos attaches to you
Back on Earth Goku was getting packed for a week of training on Gwar. Since Gwar has a gravitational pull of 666 it's is very hard to lift anything. This gravity level has crushed even the strongest humans. Chi-Chi "Goku please be careful any one who every stepped foot on Gwar never made it back, and if u don't make it back ill kill you." Goku replies "sheesh Chi-Chi ill be alright u don't have to go super saiyan 5 on me." Chi-Chi yells back "I know, I know I just don't now what will happen if you don't return to us." Goku yells once again "Listen don't worry about it I'll be just fine, ok." Chi-Chi "ok."
Goku continues to pack anxiously, "Hey gohan you sure you don't want to come........Gohan hmmmm must be with Videll. Ok Chi-Chi I'm going to go now bye." "BYE Goku" Chi-Chi responds. Goku leaves Earth and finnaly arrives at the awaited planet Gwar. Inside Gwar Goku wonders were everyone is. Then finally a tour guide arrives to Goku, "Excuse me sir are you the warrior of Earth Goku" says the guide. Goku replies "Why yes, yes I am, I am here for the training center." Little does Goku know he is being watched by a tribe of cwalos that aren't exactly friends of the human race.
Later that night Goku packs everything in to his dresser and little does he now he is being watched and hunted. Goku relies there is a draft and says "damn that draft is murder." The cwalos moved in for their attack as soon as Goku fell asleep. The cwalos quicky attached themselves to Goku arms and legs manipuilating his mind and getting inside of his head literally. As Goku sleeps through the night the Cwalos move into his body and mutating on the way. The cwalos finally found Gokus hearth and were in for the fight of there life with Goku's kindness surrounding his hearth no evil cwalos would break through. The mutated cwalos or majanolos started to retreat when Goku's antibodies rushed to the scene. A war started inside Goku near the heart causing serious heartburn. Goku wakes and scream out. He runs to the sink and drinks over 1 gallon of water before the heat of the heartburn died down the water rushed into the heart knocking out many of the enemy but the barrier of kindness as well.
The cwalos and majanolos quicky finished the antibodies off and rushed ti the wounded heart of Goku. Many of the enemy did to the blood many died of the power of the heart and many dioed inside the heart in the blood flow of Goku. The herat was not affected by that and all the cwalos inside Goku died in the body of Goku to be recycled somehow. Goku awakens the next morning feeling slight pain in his heart due to the war last night. Chi-Chi calls up and ask how he is doing and Goku replies "Just peachy you old hag now hang up the goddamn phone and do your stupid job I'll be home in 3 days ok you witch" C hi-Chi starts to cry and hangs the phone up.
Why would Goku say that to Chi-Chi? Could the cwalos attempt to make Goku negative have worked? Find out in my next fic.
Bye for now