First fic so please be gentle!
Disclaimer: don't own avatar duh! Only li.
This is my story…my story of pain, suffering and love…..
Li's POV
I was tending to my wounds when I heard it. The sound of him…he was coming and I had to run…my life depended on it.
I got up and packed the few things I had in 3 minutes flat like I had practiced. I put out the fire and put leaves on the ground and rustled up the dirt. 'Maybe he won't find my camp…maybe he's grown weaker...' I thought
As soon as I was done there, I ran, I ran like hell. I was too weak to face him in my condition; if I faced him I would surly die. I ran through the woods. The branches hit and scraped and teared at my skin…but I didn't care I had to get away, I just had to. I ran and ran until I got to a path and decided to follow it on its side.
Zuko's POV
'You stupid Avatar! Why can't things go my way just once? Once!sigh Mabyefather was right...' I was going back to my ship from a long and aggravating day of trying to capture the avatar. When all of the sudden I saw something duck into the woods…
"Who's there!"
Nothing…
"Who's there!"
Nothing…
"I demand to know who's there!"
Nothing…
At this point I was bright red and was fuming mad at the fact that there was no answer.
"Guards! Find the person in the brush!" I yelled
" ? But sir I saw no one go in." a random guard said
"Do you question my order!" I shouted
" N-no sir." he stammered
"Then go find him!" I yelled irritated
" Y-yes sir." He stammered again
At this the guard went into the woods and searched. I dismounted my rhino and went over to stand on the side.
In about 6 minutes I heard…
"Ofh! Oww! Ahh! " yelled the guard (can't keep calling him "the guard so his name will be Chan)
"No! I won't let you get me Chou! Never again!" yelled a feminine voice
"What? Whose- OFH!" Chan had died
Then I heard foot steps coming in my direction...
"Ofh! groan"a girl yelled
The girl hadgone unconscious when she hit my chest plate and fell and hit a rock on the temple of her head
"What?" I asked
"Oh my!" said Uncle worriedly
"Who is she?" asked Lieutenant Ji
"How should I know!" I told him irritated again…
"Oh my goodness! Prince Zuko look at how my cuts and scarsshe has!" Uncle exclaimed… he had moved closer to get a better look.
"Hmmm, yes. She has many." I said
"She looks as if she is a warrior." Uncle stated
"A girl warrior! Psh. Ya right." I said
"Don't Psh me. You remember the Kyoshi warriors?" uncle questioned
"Yes, uncle, I do. They were hardly warriors though…" I said
"(sigh) Anyhow Zuko this girl sounded as if she was running from a person…perhaps that Chou character?" Said Uncle Iroh
"So?" I said without a care
"Zuko, she might need help! She might be in danger and maybe she needs a place to stay!" Uncle Iroh yelled quietly
"(sigh) Fine." I gave in
I picked her up bridal style and started to walk to my rhino. As I walked I got a closer examination of her. Her skirt was green and had about 20 rips and scraps as well and blood stains. Her shirt was also green it was almost gone, there were also many cuts and rips and more blood stains on it. Her arms and legs had many many scars, cuts, and especially bruises. But her face and ears are what got me. Her face had fresh cuts and on her right eyelid there was a wide diagonal scar on her. Her hair was black. And finally what had got him the most was her ears. Her ears they-they were elf ears? 'How? How is that possible?' I wondered to myself…
I put her on the rhino first and then I mounted. I flicked the reins and the rhino started to move and soon the others started to follow to. About 4 minutes of riding and it started to rain. 'Great! Just great! Ugh'
We finally reached the ship. We went up the gangplank and I dismounted, and picked her up bridal style again. I walked through the halls; twisting and turning until I got to the infirmary. I set her on the cot and told the doctor I had brought her here. He listened, nodded, and told me I could leave.
I went to my room and got into my robe. I sat in bed….and stared at the ceiling…thinking about….her.
What do you guys think? Hm? Well it's my first so please only constructive stuff!
And if you're gonna' criticize my spelling well only tell me nicely! Please!