Kingdom Keys
Ok, this is my first story so don't hate me if it sucks! I would like some criticizim in the review at the end but if it's good or bad, is up to you. Any reveiws is better than none! And I might have spelt some things wrong, and if I did, I'm sorry. Just don't go camando on me!
Chapter 1:
I awoke from a deep sleep. I looked around and realized I was a Saki-sandwich from being hugged in between Chiba and Saru. As sweet as that may have been, I was really bored so I did the first thing that came to mind in waking them. I poked them. Chiba yelped and fell off the bed while Saru screamed and hit her head on the wall. By this point, I was laughing my ass off. Chiba glared at me from on the floor and growled, "Sakamoto Itoe! What is your problem?! I was having a wonderful dream about Shino!" At this, I crack up more. "Yeah, onee-chan! I was having a dream about Gaara!" Saru shouts. "Well, too bad! I want to play Kingdom Hearts. Anyone want to come with me?" I say while walking downstairs. They grumble and follow. "Hey, do you want a soda?" I ask (Hey! just because I'm evil, doesn't mean I can't be a good hostess!) Saru and Chiba nod. I throw them some coke and grab one myself.
"Come on! Let's go!" I say while walking to the basement. They open their soda and follow. We walk down the steps and I take a seat on the bed in front of the TV. Chiba sits in the chair in front of the computer which is right next to the TV. Saru sits next to her on a foot stool. I put my soda down and go up to the playstation. I remove the memory card and put in my own then I put in the KH game and hit the 'power' button. Soon it started up and went to the title screen. "Hey Chiba, Should I start a new game for Saru to see, or continue where I left off?" I ask her. "Hmmm… start a new game." Chiba says. So I hit the "new game" button on the screen. All of a sudden, there was a blinding flash of light and before I knew what was going on, we were in space. Well, not really space per say, more of an abyss. Yeah, an abyss of nothing. Well we were floating on air and sorta crying. I swam/flew toward the girls and grabbed their hands. We pulled together and did a group hug. "What ever you do, don't let go!" I hiss. "We won't!" they say at the same time. Then we landed on a platform with a picture of Snow White on it. "Don't be afraid children. Come, and take a step forward." A disembodied voice says. We look at each other and shrug. We walk to the middle looking like 'this is a waste of our time'. "Now, choose wisely." It says.
Just then, six platforms rise up. Three in front and three in back. The three in front were a sword, a staff/rod thingy, and a shield. The three in back were a sitar, a pair of guns (like the ones Yuna has on FFX2) and a bowstaff. I walk up to the sitar and pick it up. "The sitar, a symbol of friendship. Is this the path you choose?" the voice asks "yes" I answer. "Now what will you give up in return?" it asks. I look around and my eyes fall on the sword. I go over, pick it up, and drop it into the abyss. "Your destiny awaits." It said. Then I sit down and wait for the others to choose. Saru steps up and goes toward the guns then stops and looks back at us. "Can I?" she asks. "It's your pick" Chiba says back and I nod. She picks up the guns. "Guns, the symbol for speed. Is this the path you choose?" "Yes" she then walks over toward the staff without letting the voice finish. She chucks the staff and sits next to me. "I got myself some guns!" she said smiling. Chiba walks up to the bowstaff and picks it up. "The bowstaff, a symbol of integrity. Is this the path you choose?" "Of course" she says while she walks over to the shield and throws it into the darkness. "Your destinies have been chosen" it says. Then the platform brakes and we were falling again. End part 1
Author's Note: So? How'd you like it? Was it good? Please review so I know! And can someone PLEASE tell me what R&R means?