Ok, hi guys Today I Bring you the first chapter of youshkens story, Final Fate. This will be a prologue, i hope you enjoy.(Btw This will be very weird later on, and it's in a new timeline so none of my other stories affect this.)
~?, Unknown era~
~Darkness. So much darkness. One could say it consumed the room, it was the room. All there is is one figure. A humanoid black hedgehog. He has spines, unlike any other which curve a bit and then go directly up. They are black as well, but with blue tips. He is wearing a blue jumper, and black trousers. He also has white shoes, with a single blue stripe going down the middle. He looks to be a child.~
The Child: An empty place. So empty. I'm feeling a lot of Deja Vu here. Wait I see a light, what is it.
~The light spreads, and the child sees another boy, with a grey jacket, he seems to be human~
?: Youshken, Youshken wake up, it is time to go see ben!.
~Memories flood into Youshken's mind, and he continues like time said it should.~
Youshken: Ok, tyler, Geez
Tyler: But he'll be mad if we're late, he says he has a surprise for you!.
~the human, names tyler, drags Youshken into a corridor, and another room with a machine in it. The child then turns it on and they jump in, and teleport into a car park outside a building~
~Shadatech Pizza, Unkown Era~
Tyler: Come on, we need to hurry up
Youshken: Ok geez
~Tyler drags Youshken into the building, and another human like child runs up to them, he has a headset on, and a blue shirt and trousers. He also has brown hair and brown eyes.~
Tyler: Hi ben
Ben: Hi Tyler, Hi Gold, I finished my first animatronic, Shadatech!.
Youshken: Why do you always call me gold, it's not my name….-_-
Ben: Yea whatever gold, just look
~He shows us an animatronic, and then we walk to the eating area~
~You watch as they slowly panel out and spin, the screen goes white~
*10 years later*
And that ends our short prologue, comment what you guys think and it would be nice if you could give me any tips on writing. Cya!