This is my first Odyssey Fanfiction. Please review so I know if I need to fix it or anything. It takes place right when Odysseus goes into Circe's palace. He doesn't know that the animals are his men.
" You must be starved after your long trip." Circe smiled seductively at Odysseus. She motioned for one of her maids to get a few bottles of wine, just as a sheep a few feet from Circe bleated, Odysseus looked at it, and the sheep looked somewhat familiar. He stood up and walked to the sheep.
" Funny, this Ram looks a bit like one of my men, Vetaurus. His eyes, they look like he's intelligent, but still naïve." Odysseus turned to Circe, " Especially since he went missing a little while ago." Circe stood up, handed him a glass of wine, and answered him.
" You are wise, Hero." Circe smiled, She sipped on her wine. The red liquid rolled down her throat and she lipped her lips. Odysseus also took a drink.
" Wise?" Odysseus asked.
" You are clever. And, yes these are your men." She walked behind Odysseus and started to rub the back of his neck.
" Turn them back." Odysseus warned.
" Your threats are nothing to me. I am these animals master. They do what I say. Your hurt me, you try, and they will be on you in a second."
" Surely they remember me. They will know that I mean them no harm."
" They have no memory of their human life." She said as she kneeled down to a Lion, she petted it behind it's ears and the large beast purred. Odysseus sighed.
" How can I get them back?" Odysseus asked, Circe pointed to the chair that Odysseus had sat on a few moments ago. He sat in it, and waited eagerly to find out what she would say next.
" I need you to get a man, and bring him here." Circe said, " I need you to get-."
" You can have one of my men." Odysseus said, pointing to a frog in the corner of the room.
" No, I want a special man." Circe said.
" Who?" Odysseus asked.
" Achilles."
" Achilles? The Achilles that I fought the war with? The one man that I cannot get?"
" How cant you?"
" He is dead."
" I'm sure one such as yourself has no problem getting him."
" I can't. I don't know where to get him."
" Then I guess that there's no way your getting your men." She turned so that her back was facing him.
" Fine, I'll get him." Odysseus said, he stood up, " But where are the gates to Hades?"
" The gates to Hades? Foolish child, there's only one way to get there. And let me tell you, it's not pleasant."
" What is it?" Odysseus asked eagerly.
" Death." She said. Odysseus took a deep breath.
" Surely there is another way."
" No."
" Then you are sending me on an errand that I cannot fulfill."
" You will do this for me."
" You can keep my men."
" You will bring my Achilles with you when you come back. You are bound to me, now. If I want you to come back, with the snap of my hands you will come back."
" What?" Odysseus asked confused.
" You drank the potion." She said, " you and I are bound."
" Are we bound like the animals to you?
" Yes, I am your master."
" What?"
" You will go on this quest and you will not fail."
" Yes... Master." Odysseus said, his eyes widened when he realized what he had called her. He was really under her spell.
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