FUCK IT! I'm re-writing, one chapter a week at least. I'm changing it up. I want to go with what people said... and make it my own. I'm adding in a back story and more things that will tense it up and loosen up some parts. I'm going to do what you want and make it more my own... So ….. (: here it goes.

Blue lightning shot from her hand toward the man in black. He dodged it like all the others, but she struck him where it hurt when she aimed her lightning at the girl only meters behind him. Both eyes wide, he ran to catch the blue bolt before it hit. He jumped for the girl's life and fell helplessly to the ground. She cried out his name and ran to his side.

"I'm so sorry. I should've stayed away. Please be okay." She held is unmoving head in her hands and watched for any slight movement, but he never moved. She cried harder. "Please. I Love you."

With that, she kissed his un-parted lips one more time and walked to meet his killer's uncaring eyes and watch her die in flames.

3 YEARS EARLIER

Long ago, the legendary Avatar kept the world and its four nations at peace with each other. However, the Avatar disappeared one hundred years ago and hasn't been seen since. During that time, the tyrannical Fire Nation used the opportunity to wage war with the other three nations, seeking to conquer them. One hundred years passed and people began to lose hope that the Avatar would ever return and bring peace back to the world. But we never lost hope.

…

"Ari, chill out. I know it's cold but seriously, there has been worse." Arcadia laughed at him and turned around on their small boat. Her hair blew in the wind. It was a bright red that you could notice a mile away. It was all natural just like her bright emerald eyes. They looked innocent but could burn you to the ground in a second if she wanted them too.

"You'd think these clothes would actually DO something." He said, referring to his Water Tribe outfit. His black hair went to his jaw line and his eyes were the color of rubies. It was funny how different the two seemed. They were both pale, with no more color than a piece of eggshell colored paper, but there personalities were so different and alike that the same time.

He was always calm and easy to entertain, anything he could do with his hands or required any type of skill, he could do in a heartbeat.

She was calm but when she wasn't, you'd think she had a horrible case of ADHD. She was light on her feet and easily bored. She couldn't sit for more than an hour without falling asleep or being bored.

They were both collected though. They had it all together and figured out. She was going to head to the North Pole after Ari became The Earth King and she'd become a water bending master. They were bending prodigies.

Cadi was wearing her Fire Nation outfit. They had a bag full of clothes from every Nation and Tribe, just for extra clothes. Ariston was wearing his Water Tribe clothes. They were both out of their ordinary clothes either way.

They were from the Earth Kingdom. Ba Sing Se to be exact. They were the Prince and Princess of the Earth Nation. They might frown upon Ari being crowned though, since he was a fire bender.

They aren't sure how it happened. Their mother was a full-fledged water bender but their father was an Earth bender. No one knows how Ari became a fire bender unless it was already in their family. It was something Ari always wanted to know. He was going to keep searching for anything on his past family.

That's what kept his mind busy during their travels.

"Maybe you're not wearing enough clothes?" Cadi suggested.

"How am I wearing 2 full shirts and a jacket and freezing but you're in barely a sweater and fine?" Ari asked, shivering.

"I'm cold blooded." Cadi said, smiling evilly at her brother.

"Ha ha, very funny."

"I thought it was." She laughed as she shrugged.

A sharp noise of ice cracking sounded around them. It eventually surpassed and Ari was the first to speak. "What was that?" He asked.

"Like I know, I'm standing right next to you." Cadi said with sarcasm dripping from her voice like venom. She had that type of dark, twisted and stupid sarcasm that only Ari could stand after a while.

"Well, bend us over there and let's find out." He laughed at her.

She moved the boat over to a large patch of ice. Two people in Water Tribe outfits are hitting the ice.

"What the hell are they doing?" Cadi asked.

"Hitting ice." Ari said.

"No shit." She said. He flicked fire at her and she barely dodged it. "I know, watch the language." She said.

A beam of light lit up the sky. They looked up in surprise but had to cover their eyes from the blinding light.

…

The lights lit up the sky, giving notice to it to anyone around. A Fire Nation ship scoped the waters of the South Pole, in search of someone. The crew looked up with intensity. "Finally. Uncle, do you realize what this means?" The boy asked.

The old man is sitting at a board drinking a cup of his favorite tea. "I won't get to finish my game?"

"That light came from a powerful energy source. It has to be him! It could be the Avatar! Helmsmen, head for the curse of the light." He said.

"Prince Zuko, don't get your hopes up too high." The old man said.

…

The boy floated out of the ice berg with bright eyes before falling and lying still on the ice.

"Ari, do you know who that is?" Cadi said, excitedly.

"Who?"

"The Avatar." She said before getting the boat from around the ice and towards them.

…

The boy whispered in a weak voice. "I need to ask you something."

"What?" The water tribe girl asked.

"Please... come closer."

"What is it?"

He was excited now. "Will you go penguin sledding with me?"

The girl was utterly confused. "Uhh... Sure I guess." He bended himself up and on his feet. The water tribe boy yelped in surprise.

"Hey," Ari said after getting off the boat and walking towards them. "What happened?" He asked.

"We just got him out of the iceberg." The water tribe girl said. She gasped and stepped back. "Are you fire nation?"

"What?" She looked down. "Oh, no. I'm not. I'm from the Earth Kingdom. This is my brother Ariston. I'm Arcadia. These are just extra clothes we brought. We have an extra pair of clothing from every nation." She threw her bag at them. "Check the bag if you don't believe me."

"No need. You've convinced us enough. I'm Katara and this is my brother Sokka." She pointed to the water tribe boy.

"And I'm Aang!" The boy from the iceberg said. "Nice to meet all of you." He smiled.

There was a loud moan from inside the iceberg. "Appa!" Aang yelled.

He climbed up the iceberg and slid down the other side while the other four walked around. Katara, Sokka and Ariston's mouth fell open and Arcadia ran to Appa's side.

"Wow, A flying bison. I've read about these. Adorable animals." She smiled as Appa woke up. The bison sneezed and snot flew over to Sokka and Ariston. Katara, Aang and Arcadia laughed.

Sokka was getting irritated by the lack of security he felt. "I'd like to go home."

"Where is your home?" Ariston asked.

"Southern Water Tribe." He answered.

"We were going there to see if we could stay for a night before heading home." Arcadia said.

"I'm sure that'd be fine. All of you can come back with us." Katara answered.

Aang smiled. "Everyone on Appa!" Arcadia was the first on followed by Katara and then Sokka and Ariston.

…

"I thought you said FLYING bison?" Sokka asked.

"He's just tired." Aang said, happily.

"Sure." Sokka said lamely.

Cadi laughed at him and he smiled at her.

…

It was sunset when Zuko practiced his fire bending. Iroh is sitting nearby watching.

Iroh tells him to do it again. Zuko blasts fire from his hands at the guards, but misses. Then the guards attack Zuko with blasts of fire from their fists, but Zuko dodges. He back flips over the guards to land behind them. Iroh sighed and got up from his seat.

Iroh exclaimed, "No! Power in fire bending comes from the breath. Not the muscles. The breath becomes energy in the body. The energy extends past your limbs and becomes fire." Iroh demonstrates, releasing a controlling plume of flame that bursts in front of Zuko, but does not hit him. "Get it right this time."

"Enough. I've been drilling this sequence all day. Teach me the next set. I'm more than ready." Zuko was mad because he was sure he had it right.

"No, you are impatient. You have yet to master your basics. Drill it again!"

Zuko blasted one of the guards backwards with a gout of fire. "The sages tell us that the Avatar is the last air bender. He must be over a hundred years old by now. He's had a century to master the four elements. I'll need more than basic fire bending to defeat him. You WILL teach me the advanced set!"

Iroh sat back down. "Very well. But first I must finish my roast duck. Num num... num..."

...

Katara and Aang headed for the penguin homes. They were hopelessly excited to ride a penguin. Katara showed Aang how to catch a penguin and he offered to take her to the North Pole so she could learn water bending. Then, they made it to the fire navy ship.

"What is that?"

"A bad memory for my people."

That's all she really had to say before they were aboard the ship. Aang had set off a booby trap and they had to get out of the ship before someone saw it.

They climbed out of the ship and toward the tribe. They were stopped by Ariston. "What did you do?" He yelled. "If any fire nation saw that, we're all dead!"

"We didn't mean to." Katara said.

The snow around them started to turn black. "Tell that to the navy." He said slightly rude. "They're already on their way." He turned and ran back to the tribe.

...

Zuko was talking to himself as he looked through a telescope. "The last air bender. Quite agile for his old age. Wake my uncle! Tell him I found the Avatar..." Zuko looked back into his telescope to see Aang and Katara running across the ice away from the ship. He then scans left. "...as well as his hiding place."