Hey, their fellow Disgaea Fans I'm back and updating!
First, I would like to apologize for taking so long to update, between the rewrite and major bouts of writers block writing this tale has been heck!
I hope that you can forgive any (I'm sure there are at least a few I've missed) spelling and or Grammar errors within this posting, I am without a Beta and my Grammar skills need work so I have had to rely on both the Grammar fixer as well as free online checkers.
Please note the following changes to this story:
• New Author's messages added
• Added a prologue
• Chapter 1 reposted with extended content
• Chapter 2 posted
• Chapter 3 is coming soon
On a side note, my Profile is now updated with new details of upcoming stories.
Again, sorry for the lateness of this update.
P.s
For anyone who wonders what the original draft of this story was like before the massive rewrite began, you may get your chance to see it someday down the road if I can ever find the original free write draft notes.
Summary:
Set post Disgaea "good ending" follow along as Flonne begins her new life in the netherworld as a Fallen Angel. Can Flonne survive the netherworld? Can the netherworld survive Flonne? You'll just have to read to find out.
Hints of LaharlxFlonne. Please R&R
Rated T for Teen:
Mischief
Mild Language
Mild Violence
Our tale now begins as the Trio of Laharl Etna and Flonne (Along with Gorden and Co) return from celastla to the overlord's castle.
Oh, yes, before I forget...
A disclaimer: I do not own Disgaea NISA does.
Etna: Hey, aren't you forgetting something important?
Me: Oh, right, sorry Etna. Keeping with the Style of the Disgaea Hour of Darkness I have teamed up with Etna and her awesome Episode preview...
In addition, she threatened me with her newly acquired Rank 0 legendary glorious, so here is Etna.
Etna: and so the battle of Celstra is over Angel trainee Flonne falls from the Heavens and becomes a fallen angel
What's this the prince revealing his true feelings for our fallen angel!?
Laharl As if
Etna: Next time on Disgaea after the darkness episode one prologue of love
Laharl: like I'd ever have feelings for a love freak like her
Etna: just admit it already Prince...
Chapter 14 what lies beyond the battle End.
Save Game?
Saved data can be carried over to a new game
Saving data...
Done.
Life as a Fallen Angel
Prologue
The group watched as mid boss left the scene, hopefully for the last time (really how many times do you have to beat someone up before they take a hint?) celestial host began to flood into the room ready to defend their seraph Laharl thought it nothing but blind loyalty, he was ready for a fight if they wanted one. He started to lift his blade behind him Etna stepped in front of Flonne spear raised ready to strike when a voice rang out "no stop this at once!" said a famine voice a woman with long hanging
Dark brown hair had appeared in a flash of light between Laharl his group and the gang of celestial host
From her robes, it was clear she was a high-ranking angel an Ark angel perhaps. "Mater what is the meaning of this? Theses demons have forced their way into the sanctuary injured seraph lamington they must pay for their sins," said one of the celestial hosts the others nodded and voiced their agreement that the demons must pay.
"No stand down at once" the woman said 'but master their demons they..." the other angels began to protest "no stand down" the Ark angel repeated being the full authority of her rank in her voice. The angels toke a step back lowing their weapons from behind him Laharl hared Flonne let out a sigh of relief unsure what to do now Laharl let the Ark angel speak first
"Greetings King Laharl ruler of the netherworld I am Ark angel Trance third in command of the angels of Celestia with the loss of Ark Angel Valcanus I shall speak for Celstria while our seraph recovers from his battle with you young overlord" she began
I most first apologize for not realizing what he was up until I noticed for some time Valcanus acting strangely, but thought nothing of it when" the ark angel said with a small bow Laharl decided now was a good time to interrupt
"So you come here to stop us? Or are we free to leave?" he asked bluntly Trance couldn't help but smile "always ready for a fight typical of demons" she recalled to herself
"No, I am not here to fight you king Laharl I have arrive to end the fighting and escort you and your allies to the nexus gateway" she told the group the celestial hosts began to object to this the Ark angel silenced them "these are the decrees of the Seraph himself," she stated plainly
Therefore, with the seraph left in the hands of the healers and celestial hosts Ark angel Trance guided the group of former invaders from the sanctuary back to the field virtue where the portal home awaited them
The group walked down the concluding set of stairs and set off down the path Laharl in front with the young Ark angel guiding them Etna and Flonne behind them with the defenders of the earth bring up the tail end
It was a silent walk at first but once clear of the celestial host Trance spoke up, "I component you on your fighting prowess young overlord none has defeated the seraph in battle in almost 10,000 years" she pronounced
Laharl smirked at this "yeah, while I'm a demon what would you expat some kind of good always triumphs over evil crap?" he asked
Trance chuckled softly "I do not recall saying demons were evil king Laharl" she stated "I like the seraph have a more open mind about such things more than most of my race I believe as seraph Lamattion does that someday our races can put aside our differences and live in peace" she said
Etna made a throw up gesture behind the Ark angels back 'you disagree young one?" the angel asked Etna jumped slightly how the hell did she see that? Etna wondered "no but you make it sound so corny" she said the angel simply laughed "and you fallen angel Flonne?" she asked kindly Flonne who had been walking eyes down cased her thoughts on the home she would soon be leaving behind perhaps for the last time and her closest friends
"I um I think you're right that we can all live in peace someday, " she said Laharl grumbled, "Dam it your being a love freak again!" but there was no real anger in his voice
The group made it to the portal without incident, Laharl was about to lead them through the gateway back home to the netherworld he stopped abruptly when he noticed Flonne had stopped a few feet back "Hey you coming or not?" Ha asked the now Fallen Angel.
"I um..." she stumbled over her words "is it alright if I speak with Master Trance first?" the ex-Angel asked Laharl rolled his eyes with a huff "Fine" he said shortly
"Master Trance I have a favour to ask of you" Flonne said "Yes" the young ark angel replied, "my friends I may never see them again could you give them a message for me?" Flonne asked the older woman "of course Flonne" she said Flonne was happy to know that her friends would at least get to know why she had to leave them and her final goodbyes to them
As the two spoke Laharl and Etna waited by the Gateway Laharl growing more impatient by the minute "what's taking her so long?" he grumbled to himself Etna rolled her eyes "he's come so far in learning about love and friendship and yet he's still a self-centered brat" she thought with a sigh
The now fallen angel bowed "Thank you" Flonne said as she turned to join the others "you're welcome and safe journey" the Ark angel said she waved bye
Flonne spoke to the young overlord Trance was too far way to hear the girls' words, but she could see what Flonne did...
The now ex-Angel pulled Laharl into a tight hug the young demon's face insanely turned bright red his eyes blazing "what the hell you love freak!" he yelled loud enough for all of Celestia to hear "Laharl and Flonne up in a tree..." Etna began in a singsong voice "ETNA!" Laharl roared nearly deafening everyone still arguing the group steeped thought the gateway
Trance is waited until they were though the gateway before returning to the sanctuary she faintly felt a presence behind her, she turned to see a figure behind her wearing a
Black with gold trim cloak the hood pulled low over his face "What are you doing here you could be seen!" she scolded
"Lamington asked me to follow as you supervised his guests back to the Nexus gate in case of trouble I guess Lamington was worried about reprisals" The cloaked figure said "while then your task is complete now go before you are seen" Trance ordered with a mocking bow the cloaked figure vanished in a flash of light.
Trance sighed, "One of these days half breed," she thought to herself as she set off returning to the seraph.
A/n
So ends the prologue. What did you think? Did you like it, hate it?
I added this little prologue to fill in the gap between the last cut screen before the credit roll and the last scene before the save game plus screen of Disgaea it felt like filler between the end of the game and the start of this fic was needed.
As for the "cloaked figure" you'll have to wait to find out about him all shall be revealed in the next story (Okay, most of it) for now you have to guess about him.
So that's it for now tune in next time for more Disgaea after the darkness
You know the drill please R&R