The Dying Dove
Disclaimer: Don't own, never will.
This is my first story. Please don't flame me. Just tell me nicely that you don't like it. :) Okay here's the first chapter!
Ch1: The Egyptian Puzzle
A fairly small for his age teenager entered the Turtle Game Shop. It wasn't normally an unusual site for a spiky headed kid to enter the game store. Today was another story. The afore mentioned kid was covered in large gashes still dripping slightly with blood. The wounds weren't serious, more painful than anything else. "Ouch!" The teen slapped a hand on his face where a cut had begun to sting. Let's see what Kyle did this time, the young boy thought. His reflection showed an innocent child like face; baby fat still there. His black hair was spiked with hair gel. The black was outlined with violet matching his enormous eyes. Lightning shaped blond bangs covered the teen's eyebrows. The standard blue uniform was torn and had splotches of blood on it. Lines of blood that were going to become scars covered the plump face. I am ugly.
"Yugi? Are you home?" Solomon Muto called up the stairs to his grandson. "Yeah Grandpa!" I'm washing up then I'll be in my room," Yugi responded as he wiped blood from his face. It's Kyle's word; I'm just living in it.
Sitting on his bed, Yugi unearthed a box with the Eye of Horus on it. Completely gold pieces fell on the baby blue blanket. I'm been working on this puzzle for eight years; I'm going to finish it!
Click. Click. Click. Click. Click. Click.
Yugi stared at the puzzle concentrating. This is where I always mess up.
Click. Click. Click. Click. Click. Click.
I've got it! I see now! The boy's eyes lit up. I've figured out how to finish the puzzle!
Click. Click.
One piece left. Now what did Grandpa say about the puzzle? Yugi's brow furrowed as he thought. He looked at the puzzle. A pyramid! Only one piece was missing and that was the.
Eye! Grandpa said to make a wish on the eye! I wish. I wish for friends that will care for me and back me up when I'm in trouble. True friends I can care for!
Click.
The peaceful silence was broken as a bright light flashed and a strong booming voice echoed through the room. "By the god of the sun, holy Ra, where am I!" That is supposed to be my friend!?
Well that's the end. I realize this chapter is short but it felt like a good place to end. Please R&R
Disclaimer: Don't own, never will.
This is my first story. Please don't flame me. Just tell me nicely that you don't like it. :) Okay here's the first chapter!
Ch1: The Egyptian Puzzle
A fairly small for his age teenager entered the Turtle Game Shop. It wasn't normally an unusual site for a spiky headed kid to enter the game store. Today was another story. The afore mentioned kid was covered in large gashes still dripping slightly with blood. The wounds weren't serious, more painful than anything else. "Ouch!" The teen slapped a hand on his face where a cut had begun to sting. Let's see what Kyle did this time, the young boy thought. His reflection showed an innocent child like face; baby fat still there. His black hair was spiked with hair gel. The black was outlined with violet matching his enormous eyes. Lightning shaped blond bangs covered the teen's eyebrows. The standard blue uniform was torn and had splotches of blood on it. Lines of blood that were going to become scars covered the plump face. I am ugly.
"Yugi? Are you home?" Solomon Muto called up the stairs to his grandson. "Yeah Grandpa!" I'm washing up then I'll be in my room," Yugi responded as he wiped blood from his face. It's Kyle's word; I'm just living in it.
Sitting on his bed, Yugi unearthed a box with the Eye of Horus on it. Completely gold pieces fell on the baby blue blanket. I'm been working on this puzzle for eight years; I'm going to finish it!
Click. Click. Click. Click. Click. Click.
Yugi stared at the puzzle concentrating. This is where I always mess up.
Click. Click. Click. Click. Click. Click.
I've got it! I see now! The boy's eyes lit up. I've figured out how to finish the puzzle!
Click. Click.
One piece left. Now what did Grandpa say about the puzzle? Yugi's brow furrowed as he thought. He looked at the puzzle. A pyramid! Only one piece was missing and that was the.
Eye! Grandpa said to make a wish on the eye! I wish. I wish for friends that will care for me and back me up when I'm in trouble. True friends I can care for!
Click.
The peaceful silence was broken as a bright light flashed and a strong booming voice echoed through the room. "By the god of the sun, holy Ra, where am I!" That is supposed to be my friend!?
Well that's the end. I realize this chapter is short but it felt like a good place to end. Please R&R