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Before you read this i would like to clear up some questions about my message that I posted here before entitled "Attention all yaoi flamers" , Yes I do like yaoi and I think it is a beautiful thing, which is one of the reasons that I got so mad about the flames, and I do like non-yaoi stories too, but I mainly like yaoi, which is one of the reasons I am writing this story on my favorite couple of all time, Quatre and Trowa, I just think that they make a good couple, they seem so right for each other don't you think.
Well anyways I'll tell you a bit about the story, this takes place during the time the two met, actually a little after when they were at Quatre's. The first two or three chapters will be written in 1st person point of view, switching from Quatre and Trowa, and also the first few chapters will mainly be about the characters emotions, more action should come later on..... well, have I given enough away? I hope not, and I hope you enjoy this story. Just to make sure I don't get any unnecessary flamers this story has shounen ai ( thanks Shinigami Baby for the spelling) so if you don't feel comfortable in this subject you shouldn't read this. By the way this is my first attempt on writing a Gundam story so please be gentle, so anyway on with the story, enjoy.
Chapter 1 New Feelings
Trowa
I stood there, leaning against the wall, watching him, studying him as he played his violin. Never before had I met anyone quite like him. Although Catherine also had some of his qualities, it was not the same. It was not only his beauty, though even that surpassed anything I had ever seen before, with those blue eyes, so full of emotion, his fair skin, and his golden hair which would even make the sun envious...I shook my head trying to clear my mind. I had never thought of anything like this before, let alone anyone. It frightened me. I had never become so enthralled on someone's looks before, but as I said earlier, It wasn't only his looks that made him different, but other things, simple things, such as his ability to make everyone around him aware of his emotions, unlike myself who never allowed my feelings and emotions to show, this boy's feelings be read as easily as a book. With those full of happiness, excitement, surprise, or concern. I had yet to see sorrow taint those eyes, and I hoped I never would, which is one of the reasons I resent these feeling I have for him. Anyone I had ever become close to has gotten hurt, and I didn't want anything to happen to this angel I see before me.
I continue watching him, he hasn't noticed me yet and generally this would be the way that I prefer, because I don't usually like to be noticed, but this time was different. I actually wanted him to notice me, to look upon me with his beautiful blue eyes. Once again these thought scared me, but I didn't care. I wanted, no, I needed his attention no matter the price. I saw my chance. Near me was a cabinet. Without hesitation I opened it and pulled out a flute. I had learned to play the flute a young age. When I was younger and I had a bit of free time, no matter how small, I would play. It used to be my only chance to escape the pain that had happened in my life. I hadn't played for a while, but I would try. I made a bit more noise then necessary closing the cabinet, hoping to catch a glimpse of his eyes. It worked. He lowered his violin and looked at me with wonder and confusion. I kept our gaze for a few moments longer, then started to play.
OK, first chapter done, shorter than what I would have liked but the later chapters should be longer. So anyway, how did I do, please review and give me any advice you have.
Before you read this i would like to clear up some questions about my message that I posted here before entitled "Attention all yaoi flamers" , Yes I do like yaoi and I think it is a beautiful thing, which is one of the reasons that I got so mad about the flames, and I do like non-yaoi stories too, but I mainly like yaoi, which is one of the reasons I am writing this story on my favorite couple of all time, Quatre and Trowa, I just think that they make a good couple, they seem so right for each other don't you think.
Well anyways I'll tell you a bit about the story, this takes place during the time the two met, actually a little after when they were at Quatre's. The first two or three chapters will be written in 1st person point of view, switching from Quatre and Trowa, and also the first few chapters will mainly be about the characters emotions, more action should come later on..... well, have I given enough away? I hope not, and I hope you enjoy this story. Just to make sure I don't get any unnecessary flamers this story has shounen ai ( thanks Shinigami Baby for the spelling) so if you don't feel comfortable in this subject you shouldn't read this. By the way this is my first attempt on writing a Gundam story so please be gentle, so anyway on with the story, enjoy.
Chapter 1 New Feelings
Trowa
I stood there, leaning against the wall, watching him, studying him as he played his violin. Never before had I met anyone quite like him. Although Catherine also had some of his qualities, it was not the same. It was not only his beauty, though even that surpassed anything I had ever seen before, with those blue eyes, so full of emotion, his fair skin, and his golden hair which would even make the sun envious...I shook my head trying to clear my mind. I had never thought of anything like this before, let alone anyone. It frightened me. I had never become so enthralled on someone's looks before, but as I said earlier, It wasn't only his looks that made him different, but other things, simple things, such as his ability to make everyone around him aware of his emotions, unlike myself who never allowed my feelings and emotions to show, this boy's feelings be read as easily as a book. With those full of happiness, excitement, surprise, or concern. I had yet to see sorrow taint those eyes, and I hoped I never would, which is one of the reasons I resent these feeling I have for him. Anyone I had ever become close to has gotten hurt, and I didn't want anything to happen to this angel I see before me.
I continue watching him, he hasn't noticed me yet and generally this would be the way that I prefer, because I don't usually like to be noticed, but this time was different. I actually wanted him to notice me, to look upon me with his beautiful blue eyes. Once again these thought scared me, but I didn't care. I wanted, no, I needed his attention no matter the price. I saw my chance. Near me was a cabinet. Without hesitation I opened it and pulled out a flute. I had learned to play the flute a young age. When I was younger and I had a bit of free time, no matter how small, I would play. It used to be my only chance to escape the pain that had happened in my life. I hadn't played for a while, but I would try. I made a bit more noise then necessary closing the cabinet, hoping to catch a glimpse of his eyes. It worked. He lowered his violin and looked at me with wonder and confusion. I kept our gaze for a few moments longer, then started to play.
OK, first chapter done, shorter than what I would have liked but the later chapters should be longer. So anyway, how did I do, please review and give me any advice you have.