Ok... so... I wanted to try my hand at a Naruto fic that didn't follow the Naruto storyline, but kept the characters in character... sort of... -sigh- anyways, it's a vampire fic, I hope it doesn't come out super cliche'd but all the good ideas are already used, and it's hard coming up with GOOD new ones... -sigh-
I WARN YOU KNOW there IS an OC in here, her name is Satsuki Uchiha, she IS Sasuke's twin sister, so if you hate that sort of OC... well... try reading anyway, and if you hate it, don't flame me simply for the OC, just tell me what you think of the story ok? And if you're going to flame, be NICE about it ok? I hate flames with really foul language that are well.. mean... if you hate SasuNaru (or yaoi) then DON'T read this, don't read it them flame me because YOU hate yaoi, I'll just laugh because you wasted your time reading something you hate.
Anyways, Satsuki Uchiha is the same age as Sasuke, they're twins, mirror images of each other (except Satsuki's features are lightly more feminine then the already feminine and beautiful Sasuke xD) and her hair is longer, thats all. Her internal organs and 'system' (for lack of a better word) are weak, and therefore she needs to feed more then other vampires or she'll become extremely weak, loose control of her senses completely and she could end up hurting someone... so... basic vampire stuff really -shrug- she's very protective of Sasuke and looks up to her older brother a lot, but don't listen to me, the story should get the basic idea across... this is only the first chapter, so sorry if it sucks, my stories tend to get better once I really get going with them.
The lamest summary I have ever written...
Humans
and vampires have lived separated lives for years, that's just how
it's always been. The treaty that vampires and humans would stay away
from each other was made long ago. Now and then, a vampire might slip
into the human world, following unrequited love, or just trying to
fit in. Sadly, it never works.
But when a human gets thrown into
vampire territory, and is found by the prince of the vampire
territory that resides in his country, what will happen to him? The
laws of vampires clearly state that if a human is found in vampire
territory he is free bait. When the prince is unable to make the
deathly blow, what events will unfold?
Good luck xD and enjoy the story!
Moonlight shone down upon the forest, it's beams leaking through the breaks in the leaves of the trees, onto the dark forest ground. Hidden deep within the forest, standing tall and proud among the large clearing of trees, was a beautiful. old Victorian style mansion. The area around the mansion was well kept and beautiful, unlike the dirty forest around the house, with leaves littering the ground. The walls of the mansion were clean, and looked as new and strong as they did when it was built over 10,000 years ago.
Towards the top floor of the house, a single light shone out in the darkness, it's glow dulled slightly by the dark curtains, which were drawn back a crack, as a lone figure with dark hair looked out the window, a blank look in their face, dark eyes focused on the sky above.
"Lord Sasuke..." a voice called quietly from behind the figure, pulling 'Sasuke' away from his star gazing, the curtain fluttering shut as his hand was lowered, and he turned to look at the man at the door, raising an eyebrow in question, but staying silent, wanting nothing more then to be left alone.
"..." the visitor paused, hesitating, wincing slightly at the cold look in the dark eyes in front of him. "Will you be leaving this evening sir? I know... you're going through a hard time, but... to neglect your health sir... Lady Satsuki is worried about-" Sasuke blinked at hearing the name the visitor mentioned, a light of interest in his eyes.
"Fine." he said, walking away from the window, brushing past the man at the door, "But I want no guards, and no one following me, I can handle myself, and I wish to be left alone..." The guard opened his mouth to protest the lack of protection, but shut it again. Since the betrayal of his older brother, Sasuke's mental state had been sensitive enough as it was, and risking the mental, and emotional control of one of the two remaining Uchiha's, one of the most powerful clans of vampires known to the race of the un-dead, was out of the question. Sasuke had one foot out the door before he glanced back, "Where...?"
"She's downstairs waiting for you sir..." the man smiled slightly, "She must know you very well, she said she would meet you in the hall... as if she knew you would come."
"..." Sasuke chuckled, "I'll bet she did..." Making his way quickly and quietly down the mansion hallway, his pace slowed, his eyes falling on a figure leaning against the wall a good ten or so feet in front of him. The figure looked almost like his mirror image, the only physical difference, were the others features were thiner, slightly more feminine then Sasuke's already feminine looks, and their hair was long, waist length and very straight, unlike this short, hair spiked up, resembling the wing of a raven. Regardless of the small differences hey shared the same facial features, obsidian eyes, jet black hair, height, build and beautiful moon pale skin, however, right now, the second figures skin looked more sickly then pale.
"Onii-chan..." the figure spoke in a soft, velvety voice, it was perfect, almost musical, to beautiful to be human. Uncrossing her arms, the figure stood straight, moving away from the wall to walk next to her 'other half', as they both made their way down the hall.
"Satsuki..." Sasuke greeted, a small smile gracing his beautiful features, which was very rare for the elder of the Uchiha twins these days, "How are you Suki-chan?"
"Alright..." she fell silent for a few moments, watching her elder of five minutes silently, "You're going out alone tonight then?" she said, half statement, half question. Sasuke simply nodded, waiting for her to finished.
"I'm heading out tonight myself..." she said, turning her gaze back in front of her, "I haven't feed once this week... and I can't avoid it as long as I'd hoped to..." Sasuke glanced at his sister sharply, worry etched in his eyes.
For a vampire, Satsuki was far to gentle. She avoided attacking anyone unless it was needed, and would avoid feeding as much as possible, human or otherwise. Alas, due to a rare sickness among vampires, she needed to feed much more then the average vampire to keep up her strength, and it was her main weakness. Normally vampires with her sickness would go man, and end up being killed for others safely, but the youngest Uchiha's nature gentle nature, loyalty to her brother, and Uchiha status, this had not been done, and everyone agreed that it had been the right choice, for it was a common rumor, that had the 'precious little sister' of Sasuke Uchiha been killed, their prince would have been left to lose himself in his mind, and turn to madness and end up killing himself, or many others.
"You're moving slower then normal, Satsuki... and you look like a human with a fever... are you sure you're alright? I could always bring you back-"
"I'm alright," Satsuki cut him off with a smile of her own, "I didn't wait till it was almost too late like last time Sasuke, I learned quickly that was a bad idea." Sasuke nodded in agreement, the memory of his sister on her deathbed, somewhere a vampire was almost never imagined to me, too weak to even stand, was forever stained in his mind, and he hoped never to see it again.
"How are you though?" Satsuki asked, pulling him from his painful thoughts, "You were much closer to Itachi then I was..."
"I've gotten over it." Sasuke said stiffly, knowing Satsuki didn't believe him, but she remained silent, not pushing the matter, and the elder Uchiha was silently grateful.
Satsuki suddenly stopped, tensing as her head turned to the right, her ear facing a door behind them,
"Sasuke-"
"I know." he muttered, sighing.
"Go on, I'll distract them for a bit..." Sasuke flashed a smile of thanks, before hurrying down the hall, disappearing around a corner just a as a door behind Satsuki was thrown open, the crash echoing loudly down the wide hall.
Turning, Satsuki crossed her arms, a blank look on her face as a female with blank blue eyes, and pale blond hair walked out of the room, looking around, shortly followed by a girl with emerald green eyes, and unnaturally bright pink hair.
"Oh, good, Satsuki." the blond stopped in her tracks, turning to face the raven haired girl in front of her, "Have you seen your brother?" she asked rudely, giving Satsuki the sort of look one might give a dog who just dragged in something foul and smelly.
"No." Satsuki said in a flat voice, frowning at the tone the blond used, earning a scoff with her answer.
"Don't lie!" Satsuki's mouth twitched, her obsidian eyes going from dark to bright, crimson red, three more pupils appearing, spinning rapidly around the normal pupil in the center of her eye,
"You're calling me a liar?!" she growled, taking a step forward, making the blond step back, the pale blue eyes faltering for a moment in fear before taking a fierce light,
"Yeah, I'd say I-"
"Ino, stop..." the pink haired girl said, stepping between the two, pushing the blond back gently, "She's may be telling the truth, no one has seen him all week... let's check his room, if he's not there, we'll head out, and try again later."
Ino was silent for a moment, before turning sharply, walking down the hall, an annoyed look on her face, muttering,
"You're lucky you're an Uchiha..." the other one lingered for a moment, giving Satsuki a sympathetic look,
"Don't mind her.. she really is nice... just when it comes to Sasuke, she's really snippy."
"I don't know why you put up with it." Satsuki muttered, "Besides, you used to be just like her Sakura." Sakura opened her mouth to protest, looking hurt and guilty.
"It doesn't matter," Satsuki cut her off, "You've changed since you started dating Lee..." the bubble-gum haired girl smiled,
"Thanks... I...think..."
"SAKURA!" she winced glancing back at Ino, who was standing at the far end of the hall, arms crossed, tapping her foot.
"I take it Sasuke left early tonight?" Satsuki paused, hesitating for a moment, before nodding. "I'll stall her for a bit then, so he can get away."
"Thank you..."
"No problem." Sakura smiled, before turning, jogging down the hall towards Ino. Satsuki watched the two disappear around the corner Sasuke had originally come from, before turning herself, heading down the hall and around the corner her brother had disappeared around only moments earlier, heading down to the first floor, out the main doors, and into the darkness of the night.
Sasuke made his way through the trees slowly and silently. He wasn't particularly hungry, but he wanted to get away from everyone, so heading back wasn't his favorite option at the moment. He wanted to nab at least something small, maybe a rabbit or vole, and take it back, in case Satsuki didn't catch anything. Not that he didn't have faith in her hunting instincts, which were just as exceptional as his, but he'd rather see her overfeed, and healthy, then underfeed and weak.
As he made his way deeper into the forest, he looked around, frowning. He didn't recognize the area as his normal hunting route, and realized he had zoned out in his own thoughts, and had gone much further then normal. He was almost at the 'border' that separated 'his world' from the 'human world'. Slowing his pace, he made his way over to a nearby tree, leaning against it's thick trunk.
Sighing, he slid down the bark, until he was sitting on the ground, one knee pulled up close to his chest, his right arm lazily draped over the knee, while his other leg stretched out, left arm holding him up for support. His gaze drifted upward towards the moon for the second time that night, it's pale light shining down on his creamy skin, making giving it the appearance that it was glowing. Closing his eyes, he allowed his thoughts to wonder randomly, not really thinking to hard on anything, simply enjoying the forest breeze on his face, and listening to the soft sounds of the incests of the forest, the scurrying of the small critters, the muffled sobs... he frowned.Sobbing? He thought to himself standing up.
His nose twitched as he looked around, trying to detect who was there by sent. The smell filled his nostrils, taking over his senses, it was so sweet, the smell, it was like some form of drug, and he was instantly hooked on it. Salt mixed in with the sweet aroma and he was able to conclude the sweet sent was near whatever was crying... or perhaps... coming from whoever was crying.
He listened carefully for a moment longer, before darting into the trees, leaping from branch to branch as he quickly located the source of the sound and smell. Pushing back a branch, he peered into the clearing in front of him, his eyes widening in shock as his gaze fell on the figure in the center of the clearing.
It was a boy, clad in orange pants and an orange jacket with sunshine yellow hair. His clothes were torn, as if he'd been running through the ragged brush away from someone...or something. Scratches covered his face and arms, and blood slowly oozed from each one. He had a particularly nasty gash across his shoulder that was bleeding more heavily, and the Uchiha had to clench the branch in front of him, straining against the urge to jump the figure in front of him. This boy... Sasuke thought to himself as he watched the boy attempt to quell his tears, his hands rubbing at his tightly shut eyes, He's... human... Sasuke smirked, according to the laws of the vampires, if a human was found in their forest, they were free game.
A sudden rustling in the bushes caused Sasuke and the boy to look up instantly. The boy froze in terror, and Sasuke instantly knew why. A oddly large wolf was advancing on the boy. Sasuke found this odd, wolves were afraid of humans... but...his eyes narrowed before widening again, foam was around the edges of the canines mouth, a dangerous snarl emitting through the fangs. The boy cried out in fear, throwing his arms over his head, going into a defensive ball position on the ground. Sasuke watched for a moment longer, waiting to see what would happen... when at the exact same moment, the wolf, and Sasuke, pounced.
The blond waited for the pain that never came, peering through his eyes, he saw a figure hunched over the now bleeding, and still wolf. He saw the figure turn, and hid his face instantly, waiting for whoever it was to strike him. He heard the soft footsteps approaching him, then frowned slightly as they stopped in front of him, his body tensing in fear.
"Human..." a velvety voice called, "Do you know where you are? Do you know where you dared to explore? Humans know the laws, this forest is forbidden, and for coming here, you must..." Sasuke trailed off as the blond looked up at him. Tears were slowly refilling the most beautiful eyes he'd ever seen. They were bluer then any sky he ever peered at through his window, purer then the many sapphires and jewels that sat in his family treasure fault, they were so innocent and pure, had Sasuke not had as much self control as he had, he was sure he would have fallen to his knees.
"Y-you're a v-vampire..." the blond finally spoke, in a voice, although rough, that sounded like music to the raven, "M-my d-dad told me about your kind... h-he t-told me about this f-forest t-too... b-but w-we were attacked... and h-he told me to run... I...I couldn't go anywhere else... I was scared... I wasn't paying attention... then that wolf tried to eat me and n-now..." he gulped, "Y-you're g-going to kill me..."
Sasuke
stared at the blue-eyed stranger, his couldn't draw his gaze away
from those eyes, that angelic face. The sorrow in the beautiful blue
orbs and the childish voice fogging up his mind, the intoxicating
smell of the blond's blond was pushing his limits to their fullest
extent. He jumped slightly as the blond moved, tilting his head
sideways, exposing the sun-kissed flesh of his neck,
"Please
Mr. Vampire... if you have any mercy in your undying heart...
please... just make it quick... at least I'll be able to see my daddy
again..."
Sasuke didn't move he merely stared at the blond for a moment, then without the blond even knowing it, his mouth was hovering over the others neck, his fangs exposed, but as he inched closer, his chest tightened, a feeling he'd never felt before rising in his chest. He tried to move forward again, but a feeling... in the center of his chest, around his heart... it wouldn't let him do it. Pulling back he sighed, raising a thin, pale hand. The blond, who had opened his eyes, winced as he saw the pale hand coming towards him, tensing as the cold fingers touched his cheek,
"What's your name...?" the raven asked softly, looking at the blond with a gentle look that one wouldn't think was possible for someone of his 'type'. Blinking, the orange clad boy hesitated, but the earnest look in the dark eyes, and the gentle hand caressing his cheek calmed the blond said quietly,
"U-Uzumaki... Uzumaki Naruto..." Naruto...Sasuke repeated in his head, Such a pretty name... it fits the beautiful face...
"I see... nice... to meet you Naruto... my name is... Uchiha... Uchiha Sasuke..." Naruto gasped, pulling back,
"N-no!" he suddenly shouted, "I-I've read stories on your family! You're dangerous, some of the most powerful..." but his words were cut short as blue eyes rolled back into their sockets, and the blond fell forward, darkness taking over his senses.
Pale arms caught him before he hit the ground. Standing up quickly, Sasuke stared at the boy in his arms. ...I'm going to get in trouble for this... he sighed, I hope Satsuki is back... I'll have to have her clean his wounds... if I stay around him much longer... I might lose control... I don't know why... but I don't want him dead... Spinning on his heel the raven darted back into the trees, disappearing into the dark of the forest.
