hi well this is my first fic so i hope you like it if you fund any errors please tell me (say what you want as long as its not too bad) well enjoy..or not (you have no confidence what so ever you know that?) heheh...(this contains femnaruto and a semi nice kyubi!)

Tears fell from her eyes, she could taste the unmistakable flavor of blood. Slowly she stood and

searched for her opponent. Her eyes scanned the area looking for the slightest shift of rubble, she

listened for the sound of feet moving against soil. A scream let out into the dark, a scream she knew

very well. Eyes widening she sought back more tears, she refused to turn, refused to look over, and

accept what she knew had happened. A soft thud indicated that the body had reached the ground. An

unwanted image of a pink haired corpse came into her mind. The back of the blond girls neck tingled,

sensing someone watching her, and an intense feeling of danger she pumped chakra into her legs and

jumped to the side and up, just barely dogging the attack. She jumped up onto a pile of rubble close by,

close inspection of the spot and you would see the symbol of konaha once proudly displayed laying in

the ruins of what was once the great wall surrounding the village.

The blond girl looked around trying topinpoint her attacker, she stood and made to take a step to the side, but she stumbled back over the

ledge. She fell five feet, almost hitting her head along the way. Landing on her feet she tried to step

forward, but fell onto her hands in exhaustion. A man in a white mask slowly walked forward, his black

hair spiked out behind the mask, he savored the moment , his victory , and the end of this war. As he

walked closer, you could make out a sharingan eye staring out at her. The man chuckled darkly the girl

tried to get up but it was useless. Not a lot could take so much out of the girl, when she was younger she

was energetic, hyper and slightly annoying, but always looking out for others. Her personality changed

as the war got worse still as energetic and hyper as she was as a kid but a lot more serious, and an

added bonus she used less chakra then she used to, but fighting for hours on end against undead ninja

and different tailed beasts drained her of her mass amounts of chakra leaving her weak and tired. The

man was closer now, taking his time getting to her savoring his victory. "madara….uchiha" the young

kunoichi growled. This man took everything from her the home that finally accepted her after peins

attack, the friends that stood by her side, the brother that she did everything to get back.

Rage and pain

took over she could feel the hate pulsing through her veins a red demonic chakra surrounded her body,

not havening enough strength to call up the kyubis full power, four fox like tails wiped around her body

. blond hair spiked up more so than it was, her features looked more animalistic , fox like ears were

produced from the red chakra. Blood began to flow anew from her mouth as the impure chakra pulsed

through her body the nails on her hands elongated into sharp claws the six whisker marks on her face

thickened. It hurt her, the hatred was like a poison but she could not control it the masked man, madara

took a few steps back and went into a defensive position awaiting an attack from the young jinjuriki

(sp?) . the blond kunoichi lunged at the man intending to claw his face but the man was to fast even

with the fox enhancing her speed. Madara rushed forward in hopes of knocking her unconscious but

was surprised when the chakra tail shot out and knocked him away. The blond rushed forward not

wasting a second and swiped at him with her claws once again. At first it would seem that she missed,

but the demonic chakra seemed to take on a life of its own, and a fox like claw shot out of the biju cloke

almost hitting the mad uchiha, who teleported away. The fight continued in that manner for some time.

The attacks getting weaker and weaker, until madara found his opening, hitting the blond with a chakra

enhanced palm hand strike to the side of the head, forced her to the ground. The masked man went

through several hand signs, the last thing the girl seen before the darkness over took her was a furious

cry and a demons laughter

a/n so is it any good? should i continue it? (i am sure its fine) Youu may think its fine but your me so your opinion is unvalid! (review if you want ja ne) ...