Episode 1 'The Start' (Warning: This maybe quite short. So please don't comment on it's length, mainly 'cause I insisted it be short.)
Quick Summary of Content!
Places: The Pokelounge(made-up!), Pichu and Eevee's house.
Characters(in order of speaking): Pichu, Eevee, Chimchar
The Story!
Go to a place called the Pokelounge, in a land called Pokehigh. It's cool.
Pichu: The best place in places!
Eevee: Or at least we know of.
Pichu: Does it matter anyway?
Eevee: Nah, not really.
Chimchar: Hey guys! Whatcha doing?
Pichu: Hosting a show on LIVE computer screens!
Eevee: On a site for fan fiction! Can't remember the name...
Chimchar: Oh. Then hello, guys!
Pichu: Chimchar, don't do that! No, please! DON'T! That cost me a mini – fortune!
Eevee: And I had to go to COLLEGE for that!
Chimchar: Oh. Why didn't you say so?
Pichu: Sigh...what are we going to do with you?
Eevee: I think we should take a commercial break...
5 minutes later...
The gang are in Pichu and Eevee's house. Pichu is on his computer, the 'Computer Poketch 3000' which is a computer version of the Poketch, with the computer things, as well as the Poketch applications.
Eevee: What do you have to burn for yourself!?
Chimchar: Marshmallows!
Pichu: Why, can't, I, do, my, FREAKIN' EMAIL CHECKING!
Eevee: Calm down, Pichu.
Pichu: I AM CALM!!
Chimchar: It's really showing.
Eevee: Pichu, try eating this cheese – holy fur, let me finish my sentence you fat little mouse!
Pichu: I'm not a Bidoof.
Eevee: Whatever!
Pichu: Chimchar, what was Sinnoh like?
Chimchar: You two should know. Pichu's species are there, and Eevee's dad is living there.
Eevee: I miss him so VERY MUCH! (crying instantly after sentence.)
Pichu: Tissue?
Chimchar: Slightly over-cooked marshmallow?
Eevee: Nah. Let's roll!
End of Pilot
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