I truly hope that none of you are angered with me for deciding to re-write this fanfic. Its just… I wanted to make my story better… Many people have wrote better stories than me but I'm not saying I want to be the best or anything… I just want to improve. I'll accept any scolding or flaming… I'm also planning on writing a new fanfic ^^ Hope you all enjoy that one :P
The young Hyuuga Heiress sat on her knee's, her head bowed before her father, Hiashi Hyuuga. His face was twisted with an anger that made both Neji and Hanabi feel sorry for poor Hinata. You see, Hinata was found walking home with Naruto Uzumaki by one of the Hyuuga elder's that was walking homefrom a meeting with the Hokage. As soon as Hinata entered the door, her father Hiashi had struck her directly in the face. Hiashi continued to scold Hinata harshly, his deep voice ringing loud enough for the elder's to hear. Hinata winced every time his voice grew louder as tears rolled down her cheeks and onto the floor.
"You are worst piece of shit of seen yet. That Uchiha was worse enough but now my own daughter?! Becoming a whore just like all those other bitches out there?! As the Hyuuga Heir I expect you to be more responsible with your body!"
"B-But O-Otou-san-," Hinata was cut off by the hard slap that Hiashi delivered to her cheek. "Do not call me Otou-san if you cannot respect me! Go to your room and you are not allowed to come out!"
Slowly rising to her feet, Hinata turned and walked out of the room with her head hanging low. Two bright red marks were burning brightly on her cheeks, the stains of the salty tears drizzled down her cheeks. She slowly opened her door and walked inside, closing it and locking it. Whimpering softly, she locked the door and leaned back against it, sliding down to her bottom with her knee's against her chest. Wrapping her arms around her legs, Hinata placed her chin on her knee and stared into the darkness of her room. Eyes narrowing, Hinata glared at the empty space in her room.
Why does Oto- I mean Hiashi-sama always think I'm doing something as disgusting as that? I was just being walked home by Naruto-kun… Nothing wrong with that… right? Maybe… I should just leave this place… Maybe Hiashi-sama will be happy…
Biting her bottom lip, Hinata stood up and strolled silently to her bed. Sitting down, she thought of the simple answer to her tortures. Hinata would finally be free of the pointless scolding… The hurtful slapping as well as disdainful assumptions. She crossed her legs and continued to ponder on the thought. If she left… Would that really bring peace to her father? Hinata missing and Hanabi crowned as the next Heir? Maybe…
"F-Fine… I'll b-bring H-Hiashi-s-sama peace."
Making that her final decision, Hinata stood up and began to pack up. She unzipped the large empty duffle bag and began to fill it with different materials such as: Clothes, Weapons, blankets, Some different Hygiene items, and a small box. Once Hinata was finished with that, she pushed the duffle bag under her bed and walked to the bathroom, taking a quick shower to soothe her swollen cheek and to wash away the dry tears.
"Ano… Onee-chan? You awake?"
Hinata walked out of her bathroom with a lavender towel wrapped around her naked body to hear the sweet voice of her sister, Hanabi. Her eyes flickered a bit with sadness as she walked over to the door, slowly pulling it open. Hanabi was surprised to see that her Onee-chan had actually opened the door. "H-Hai Hanab-bi-chan?"
"Onee-chan… Are you ok…? Your cheek looks a bit swollen…"
"D-Don't worry, H-Hanabi-chan… I-I'm fine. I-I just n-needed a-a shower t-t-to clear m-my thoughts," Hinata replied softly, smiling assuringly.
"O-Oh… Well… Please don't take it to heart, Onee-chan. Otou-san is just too harsh for his own good. I'll be sure to sneak to breakfast tomorrow."
Hinata smiled and nodded as Hanabi smiled sadly, turning on her heel and leaving to her room. Hinata sighed softly and closed the door. Hinata knew it would be hard to turn away from her little sister and her cousin but she couldn't stand staying around anymore… Shaking her head, Hinata walked over to her wooden dresser and pulled it open by the knob. She slowly slid out the silk button-up shirt that appeared to be violet with small white clouds decorating it. She pulled out some cute pink panties as well as the matching sweats. Hinata began to slide on the cute pink panties but then pulled on her sweats. She pulled her arms through the sleeves and began to button up the shirt. Once she was finished dressing, she jumped onto her fluffy queen sized bed and crawled over to the corner of her bed where her alarm clock was sitting. Her bed was pushed up against the wall so the alarm clock was able to sit on the window sill. Hinata lazily began to set the alarm clock for 11:30 so she would be able to get ready then to be on her way. Placing the clock back in its place, She laid in her bed and slowly drifted into a peaceful sleep.
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Hinata's eyes snapped open when she heard the Alarm clock beep loudly. Not wanting anyone to wake up, she quickly scurried to the alarm clock and pressed the snooze button. Hinata relaxed a bit and took the time to rub her eyes drowsily. Yawning softly, Hinata swung her legs to the side of the bed and stood up, stretching happily. Hinata lazily walked over to the bathroom and flicked the light switch up. She looked at herself in the mirror, seeing her bed head. She sighed and began to wash her face and brush her teeth. She had put an extra tooth brush in her duffle bag. After she was finished brushing, she washed her face one more time and began to run the teeth of the comb through her hair. Once the bed head tangles disappeared, she walked out of the bathroom and stepped to the middle of her room.
"Byakugan."
The blood-filled veins appeared by her eyes as she searched the entire Hyuuga Mansion, checking for any people who were awake for some odd reason. She smiled when she saw that no one was awake except for herself. Switching her Byakugan off, Hinata began to quickly un-button her shirt and slide off her sweats. She walked over to her wardrobe and opened it wide, pulling out a black tank top that was connected to a fishnet shirt. She pulled out her pitch black Capris and slid the two on. Unfortunately for Hinata, she forgot to put on a bra. Hinata slid on a gray jacket and zipped it while picking up her shoes. She sat on the side of her bed and put on her shoes, her body feeling a bit tired. Once she was finished with that, she stood up and slid out the black duffle bag and slowly listed it, wrapping it around her shoulder.
Well… I guess… This is finally good-bye. I won't be able to return once I leave…
Biting her bottom lip, she looked over to the tossed head band that laid on the vanity. Shaking her head sadly, Hinata walked over to the window and slowly slid it to the right, the cool night air brushing passed her face. Hinata slowly stepped through the window and stepped onto the tree branch. Once she was securely out of the Hyuuga Mansion, she walked down the branch and slid down against the trunk. Quietly, Hinata crept in the darkness, sneaking passed the lights of the guards who were ordered to look for any type of threat to the Hyuuga's. Successfully slipping Out of the Hyuuga Estate, Hinata walked down one street, feeling confident in herself. Walking quicker, Hinata began to feel more nervous but gasped softly when she passed the Ramen shop. Stepping back, Hinata looked inside to get a better look to what a certain blonde and Pinkette were doing. Her mouth dropped in shock when she saw Sakura sitting on the counter, her legs wrapped around Naruto's waist while he kissed her neck.
No Naruto-kun! I thought you were smarter than that… How could you do this… She's only using you… Nothing more…
Hinata felt the tears welling up in her eyes as her heart had a crack run through it. Her eyes narrowed and she continued to walk, the tears disappearing. Hinata wouldn't let herself cry over something as Pathetic as Naruto. Hinata soon reached the gates of Konoha and looked back to her village. Not her home anymore… Turning on her heel, Hinata walked away from the village and down the path that led into the forest. A few hours passed and Hinata was growing a bit tired. Right when she was about to settle she saw a small black gate with a note hanging off it.
"W-What could t-that be…?"
Hinata curiously walked toward the small black gate, noticing the chipping paint. Hinata kneeled, looking at the note that had been painted onto wood. The wood was obviously aged and the black ink on the wood was a bit faded. Squinting her eyes, Hinata tried to read exactly what the note said. When she was able to understand the faded writing, she read silently in her mind:
These gates stand tall, hiding the true feeling of pleasure
Each who pass will enjoy the feeling
Into the world that holds the lovely treasure
Each girl, Each boy holds the power of healing
"T-The true f-f-feeling of p-pleasure…?"
Confused by the odd note, Hinata leaned over a bit to the right to see a large tunnel. Curiosity getting the better of her, Hinata pushed the gates open, hearing the hinges creak loudly. Walking through, she arrived at the entrance of the tunnel and slowly began to walk inside. Hinata looked around, barely able to see the faded pink color of the walls.
What an odd color for the inside of a tunnel…
Hinata walked further down the long tunnel, hearing the echoes of the howling wind. Being slightly frightened, Hinata walked hurriedly until she reached the other side of the tunnel. Once Hinata studied her surroundings to see where she was, she appeared to be confused since she ended up in the same area. Looking back, Hinata saw the tunnel but shrugged and walked forward, deciding that it was the same place she had been in only a few moments ago. Hinata began to feel tired for some odd reason so she only walked a bit more, finding a clearing by a small river.
"T-This'll h-have t-t-to do until I-I get into another v-village…"
Hinata sat down on the floor and unzipped her Duffle bag, slipping out two blankets. As she was taking the two blankets out, she saw that a little doll fell out of the bag. The doll looked exactly like her older cousin, Neji Hyuuga. Nii-san…? Examining the small doll, Hinata placed a blanket on the floor to act as bedding and put the duffle bag up as a pillow. Laying down, Hinata pulled the blanket over her body and looked at the doll that resembled her cousin in so many ways. Feeling sad about leaving them behind, she hugged the doll, closing her eyes and drifting into sleep once more that night.
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Hinata winced slightly when she felt the bright rays of the sun hit her closed eyes. Opening her eyes, Hinata stared drowsily at the sky, sitting up when her eyes got caught in the sunlight. She rubbed her eyes and looked down to see the Neji doll sitting up, almost in the sunlight. Smiling, she stood up, stretching tiredly. Once she was done, she kneeled down and took out the tooth paste and her neon green tooth brush. She stood up and walked over to the small river, beginning to brush her teeth. While Hinata brushed her teeth, she failed to notice that the little Neji doll leaned over into the sunlight. The doll shined brightly which did catch Hinata's attention. She slowly turned her head after washing out her mouth to see the bright light. Confused, she walked over to the bright light, curious to what it was.
"H-Hmm…?"
After the bright shining light subsided, Hinata felt two arms wrap themselves around her. Squeaking, Hinata was sitting on the lap of her cousin, Neji. "Morning Hina-chan!" Hinata was too speechless to reply to his greeting. Hinata was truly shocked when she felt Neji's lips press roughly against hers', his tongue slipping into Hinata's mouth. Hinata's cheeks shifted to bright red when he finally broke the kiss.
"N-Nejinii-s-san?!"
Neji grinned happily at her, slipping between her legs and pressing himself against her 'special spot.' "Hina-chaaan… Your so soft and sweet tasting up here… But it's been sooo long since I've tasted you down there… Come on Hina-chan… Let's Fuck."
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Dear Reader's,
Hai Hai! Here is the first chapter of the remake of 'This world? Or the other?' For all the people who are new to this story… Don't read the other one! Cuz I'm deleting it :P Annnd… I require… five reviews on this story so be sure to put 'em up!! I feel confident in this chapter :3 Hope everyone likes it :D Bye Byee!!
-Akumu-chama
