What if, instead of visions, Alice spoke prophecies? What if she spoke one about Bella coming? This is what I think it would be.

This is the first prophecy I've ever written, so please let me know if it's any good! Also, if you hadn't read the books, or, rather, you were one of the Cullens before Bella came along, do you think this is cryptic enough? I tried not to make it too straightforward. Thank you in advance for your input! :)


When the earth circles the sun ten and seven times,
An event will change one's life, and we'll hear wedding chimes.
A young man to the sight will fall hard and fall fast.
There will be trouble, but he'll have her at last.
She won't be afraid, and it will tear him apart
To be blind to her thoughts, but she will have his heart.
It will be hard; to him, she will sing.
She'll want to change, and he'll give her some bling.
She'll change his life, and we'll hear wedding chimes
When the earth circles the sun ten and seven times.