When they all pulled back inside, a knock at the door quieted the room, they weren't expecting anybody not even Alice saw this. When the door opened their in the moonlight and rain stood a figure surrounded in a cloak that clung to their being with a hood that hid their face it said in a voice so soft and so low that even the vampires struggled to hear as she asked to see Bella....(by the way I only claim one character the rest are Mrs Stephanie)
??? POV
as I approached the house, it reeked of dog and vampires, and my beloved Bella. Inside I knew nobody would know I was here unless I knocked. As I did no body breathed, the wind picked up behind me and blew the door in. I let them them take in my custom made cloak, then I asked to see my little Bella, but known as Isabella or Bella for short. She looked liked she remembered me she called me mom my heart fleeted so flew to her side my hood fell of as I went to hold my baby again. That's when I noticed my little baby girl was pregnant and she didn't remember me "Bella I'm your biological mother..please let me explain but before I do I must warn you all now in won't be pretty..."
Edwards POV
I could hear the thoughts of my 'siblings' Alice didn't see this person, Jasper couldn't feel any emotions off of....it? Most importantly none of us heard it coming, the door flew open and there in the moonlight and the rain stood a female that wore a cloak that clung to her being the hood hid her face and she didn't have a sent, then in a voice so low everybody strained to hear "I'm hear to see Bella" it wasn't until then I realized i could not read her mind just like MY Bella why did she want to see my pregnant wife Bella?(I am trying out a poetic Edward plz review i need input)
Bella's POV
when everybody came back inside, a knock at the door startled everyone they were... quite it was eiree surely Alice knew? The door flew open and there in the moonlight and the rain stood somebody that smelled like flowers in a tight cloak with a hood over their face and in a voice that I would of known anywhere said "I'm here to see Bella" my only reply was "Mom?" as she ran over to me her hood fell back. She was not Renee, but she looked familar like I've sceen her before she had very dark brown hair and hazel eyes that chenged colors. I had to say " but your not my mother. Who are you? Why do you look and smell so familar?" I was so confused she just said she was my biological mother NO WAY!!! (dum dum dum lol reviews would be nice this is my first time up to bad so i don't mind crack about wha to improve and plz no cracks about my grammar I know it sucks!)