The Rogue Knight chapter 2
Authors/Writer's corner, well I actually got a review and that was awesome thanks to that person, but anyway yeah I would love some reviews as they let me know what I should do to help improve this story (abomination) :]
Thanatos woke up to the sound of pouring rain; it seemed to be the most obvious foreshadowing about the events that would take place. I had gone to one of these tournaments to watch, while they were prisoners they were allowed to watch the Battle Royale, I luckily also had a vast combat experience due to my training that I undertook at a very young age. It was a brutal training that most people would die, it involved from the start fighting a Master Swordsman, which is what most people fail on but the next part is worse. You have to go a full 3 days dodging a group of highly trained assassins that specialize in public assassinations. The reason he decided to partake in such a reckless training, was that I was homeless and hungry, and there was a rumor going around that the ones who complete the training will gain a fortune, turns out it was wrong though you did get paid, given food, and housed in there base of Operations the group he had joined called themselves the K.N.I.G.H.T.S which used to mean something but was long forgotten. After
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I awoke to the Guards rounding the people who would attend the Battle Royale, in the people who were gathered I noticed a Gallade, a Zoroark, a Garchomp, a Bisharp, a Lucario, a Scizor, an Absol, an Espeon, a Houndoom, and the final contestant Myself, I had never seen these people before and I have been in this prison for at least 10 years. I noticed that while they were in standard chains, I was put in a straight jacket, and had a muzzle put on me, I imagine I looked like the Hannibal Lector, and the others might have thought so too as they looked very scared upon seeing me board the train. The train takes us to an underground facility, I know this as I had overheard some of the Veteran Guards talking about it.
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They released us into the facility and then took off my straight jacket but kept the muzzle on, now that wouldn't be so bad as normally I would be able to get it off but it for some odd reason it had a lock; Now to the problem at hand. The others were looking at me even more worried, and I honestly don't blame them for being afraid. Other than being taken to the facility not much else has happened it, while watching the others it appeared they all had known each other for a while, probably before they went to the prison. After a while more the guards came in and restrained me, the reason is still unclear to me as to why but they did so and then injected me with… something. I blacked out after that.
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It appeared that I had been asleep for a long time, before I heard someone say, "You know who this is right?" There was a second voice he sounded extremely nervous. "N-No sir", " This boy happens to be the Kings son and you sent him here? I assure you if the King finds out your head will be rolling around in a pit!" "I-I'm sorry sir I thought that you wanted the injection to go to him". "NO YOU DOLT IT WAS TO GO DIRECTLY TO THE KING!" "I-I'M SORRY SIR!" "You'd better be". That's all I could pick up before blacking out again. I awoke not to long after, and how'd I wake up? Well it turns out one of the others had shaken me awake, it turned out to be the Espeon whom seemed really nervous that she was even contacting me, and as soon as I had got up she literally jumped back like 4 feet. I stood up and noticed that my muzzle was finally off so I took a deep breath then exhaled and said, "It's about fucking time I can speak!" The Gallade decided to ask, "You wont like eat us for dinner or anything right", I cant believe he had asked that though to be honest I wanted to see their reaction so I said, "No not dinner, Breakfast maybe". They all started to prepare for my presumed assault. I flashed a devilish grin before saying, "Dear god you all took it to seriously no I won't that's disgusting". At that they seemed to relax a tiny bit, and after about 4 minutes of absolute silence the Absol asked , "Who are you anyway?" I flashed that same devilish grin again before proudly saying, " Thanatos at your service little lady". I swear she blushed, but I honestly didn't care. They all introduced themselves, The Espeon was Crystal, the Absol Valkyrie, the Gallade was known as Chevalier (French for Knight), the Scizor was Raze, the Lucario was known as Ren, the Zoroark was Raiden, the Garchomp and Bisharp had the same name (Pure luck I guess) Lance, and finally the Houndoom was named Mort (French for death) . I had a feeling that nearly all of us would die come a few days so I only responded with " It wont matter who you are anymore, just what you can and will be able to do". I walked away and I could faintly hear a quiet "Jackass" from the Zoroark, so I turned back and looked at him and said, "Fight me now". He took a minute to think about fighting me before replying, "Fine but I hope you know how to crawl". As the fight started I teleported behind him and hit a certain point that everyone was prone to but no on knew about except the K.N.I.G.H.T.S he was instantly down and I just walked over his now unconscious body. I went back tot eh rooms they had given us and laid down, after about 15 minutes of laying there I finally went to sleep.
Author's/Writer's Corner – I realized that this is sounding a lot like the hunger games, at least in the beginning but yeah, I will probably be killing off some of them so I can remember them a bit easier but yeah, I hope you enjoyed and I would love it if you would review me (I need to know if its good or not duh) , also one final thing if you find any flaws in my writings like grammar please message me and ill fix it pronto. Bye Everyone ^_^!