Dear Brother

by violaplayer12

After being taught to write letters by England, Colony America takes it upon himself to write to his elder brother while he is away. I don't really think it should be rated K but, I'd rather not write something darker later and have to change the rating. Ideas welcome! Seriously, I'm out...

1. Chapter 1

I had this idea and wrote it on a whim. If you have trouble reading some of the earlier posts let me know. Enjoy. I own nothing.

deer big brother,

thank you for teeching me how to right leters even tho i dont like them. but you sed they are impurtant so, i will right sum to you. you went back to england today which maed me sad. i will miss you lots.

love,

alfred

Dearest Big Brother,

One of the housekeapers told me about capitalizing leters. She also told me I spelt dear rong. Then she sed that wen you right to someone you like you say dearest. I wanna say bestest but, tisn't a word. I liKe cApiTaliZing!

Love,

Alfred

Dearest big Brother.

You've been gone so long! Pleese com back! Pleese. I miss you. Alot of the colonists are getting hungrie and sick. It's kinda scary. Com back soon.

Love,

Alfred

Dearest Brother,

Yay! You've come home! 'Tis good news! You read my letters and said you enjoyed them a lot. However you said I didn't spell some words right. A gentleman need to spell good and have grammar. Whatever that means.

Love,

Alfred

p.s. I asked you why English is such a hard language to learn. You didn't answer.

I rather like it so far. I apologize for the shortness as Alfred's letters are lacking in paragraphs. One of my ideas was that Alfred would use old English and modern American slang. It will either be really cool or a complete mess. I'm experimenting a lot as I've never written a story via letters nor try to show growth in the writing( as Alfred grows up and learns to write). From now on except a lot of brotherly fluff. Constructive criticism is much appreciated.