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okay this is my third time editing this chapter so i hjope you like it!please read all my chapters not just this one. no flames please.i've based my oc around my persona.

chapter one:

Ume ( plum) Melodi was your average sixteen year old gang girl , she had long brown hair she kept down her back with bangs , she had dark red eyes ; she wore a black jeans and a white vest top covered by a leather jacket with a silver panther on the back with black strap heeled shoes on her left wrist she has a strange mark she covers with wrist bands. She comes across as a girl that could be your dream or your wrist enemy and who doesn't give a care. She lives on her own because her family was killed when she was eight. Now she lives by herself.

One day she was on her black and silver lined motor bike racing a group of guys on a track, it just so happened that ichigo, mint and lettuce were going there to check it out.
- hey look at that one, he's fast. said pudding pointing to Ume melodi ( she's got her biking gear on and helmet which also had a silver panther on it. so they think she's a guy)
yeah he's cool. said mint.
yeah.
LAST LAP PEOPLE!! a man announced from a microphone.
the riders sped up a bit but ume was still way ahead of them.
3,2,1 THE WINNER MISS UME MELODI!! Announced the man.
MISS?!! they all chorused looking over to the a woman rider: she looked about eighteen she had long brown hair that blew around when she took off her helmet and dark red eyes that seemed to stand out. She was very pretty. She looked around to them and drove off into the parking lot.

wow, that girl was sure fast. i wish i was that cool sighed ichigo.
yeah I'd love to be able to do that. Said lettuce they walked over to the bar.
bang!! a football came flying and nearly hit lettuce. HEY THAT'S DANGEROUS! yelled mint and ichigo. To the gang of men that kicked it.
they were about 20.
eii girly com 'ir . said one.
NO! they yelled .
little bitches! they exclaimed they kicked the ball it was heading directly for them they braced themselves for an impacted but none came.
they looked up to she the woman from the race track standing there with the football in her hands.
- man you boy's are low picking on a couple of kids like that. she said darkly. she through the ball at the leader it hit him hard on his manly parts knocking him down in pain. his gang of thugs walked up to her looking pissed.
ya may be a cutie but that won't go unpunished. the man went to punch her she grabed it and threw him against a wall then she jumped in the air kicking two guys in the face making them fall back.
the three teenagers watched in amazement as the young girl beat up the whole gang.
NOW GET OUT OF HERE! She hissed at the guys. the men scurried of terrified.
the woman turned around to the three girls who now were staring gobs-to-the-floor at her.
Are you girls okay? asked the woman. With a concerned look on her face.
h-h-hai. stuttered lettuce.
good smiled the woman. be carefull next time. she warned.
I'm ichigo, this is lettuce and minto. said ichigo.
I'm ume melodi.nice to meet you girls. she extended her hand ichigo took it but then she saw it had a strange birthmark on her wrist.
Ume that's a yummy name. said ichigo.
a what ? asked the puzzled girl.
a yummy name it's a food name.
( ume means plum in Japanese) yes i guess it is.
not to be rude ume-Chan...ume-Chan is ok ?
yes it's fine. replied ume you don't look Japanese. stated minto.
no I'm English but I'm fluent in fourteen languages.
Yosh, that's more than zakuro. puffed ichigo.
hey, why doesn't she come o the cafe?
yeah come to the cafe with us.
ok ,do you want to go on my bike I've got a passanger seat at the side two people will fit .
cool! They all walked over to her bike. She gave ichigo a spare helmet.

okay uchigo,hold on to me tight.you two hold on as well. warned melodi as she put her helmet on and started the bike up.
the three mews exclaimed as they held on tight. they drove over to the cafe.
They drove off very quickly to the café minto was giving directions.

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