first fanfic.

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belongs to Stephanie Meyer, P.c and Kristin Cast

The day started of a normal I guess. Other than the weather being nice I wouldn't of thought anything weird would happen today

I walked down stairs and said morning to mum and dad. Im running late for school so I skipped breakfast and just went straight threw the woods.

Seth was waiting for me by the rest of the families house. He goes to my school so he meets me every morning and I give him a ride.

I said hey and grabbed his arm pulling him into the garage. Mum and dad had brought me a white rang rover for my 17th birthday 3 months back. It my baby. Seth got in the passenger seat and I got in the drivers seat blasted up the music and was on my way.

Me and Seth had all our classes together do we made or way to first period English. Erchh. I mean what's the point in teaching us English when I was raised speaking it. I never really understood the point in that lesson.

'nessie nessie. You in there ness?'. seth shouted quietly

'yea, yea im here what's up?'

'you was like day dreaming during the whole of first period. Second period starts in a minute. Oh and let me guess Jake?'

'no actually. I was thinking about English' seth smiled at me sarcasticlly.

Ever since I was old enough me and Jacob got together. that's all anyone thinks I think about. I mean yeah were imprinted an all but, like, I do have a life!

'come on. Were gunna be late for science' seth said impatiently

'yes. Ok .but I need to get my texts books out of my locker first.'

'Kay just make it quick' seth said

My lockers only down the hall from the science rooms so we wouldn't be that late.

As I was walking down the hall I saw this guy standing a locker about 2 down from mine.

He had a weird tattoo on his head. That when I realised who he or what he was. He was a vampyre. There completely different from my family. They don't turn by venom. They turn by getting chosen and marked.

Oh no. he's not waiting for me Is he?

He cant be im already half vampire

I got to my locker. Seth had noticed him and he growled and started crunching up his nose. The smell was clearly annoying him.

The mans mark seemed familier. It was the same as my friends Laurens but his was filled and and had different tattoos from her.

My friend Lauren had been marked about 3 months back. We were really close. We still write to each other. She's made a load of new friends. She thinks she's weird because its not normal for 'fledglings' or whatever their called to have tattoos. But there's this girls called Zoey who has tattoos and hr mark is filled in so she doesn't feel to different. Lauren has the affinity or what ever she calls it to move thinks wit her mind.

Yeah. Anyways the guy was getting closer and seth looked like he was getting ready to phase. I mean in school, In the middle of the hall.

The guy finally stopped in front of me and said

'Renesemee Cullen! Night has chosen thee: thy death shall be thy bith. Night calls to thee: hearken to her sweet voice. your destiny awaits you at the house of night!

And with that he pointed at my forehead and I collapsed in pain.

I had a killer headache. I must be dreaming. I was in a garden, a beautiful garden with beautiful flowers. Than the beautiful woman walked towards me she had long black hair that framed her fac and she smiled with her perfect lips.

'welcome daughter' she said sounding like an angel

'where am I. am I dead. Who are you?' I questioned

'do ntfear my child you are not dead. And I am Nyx the vampyre goddess'

'what do you want from me im already a half vampire?'

'again do not fear my child! I have marked you to help my children. Your skills could help defeat any darkness that overrules my houses of night' she said

'skills? What skills. I can only show people things by touch?'

'you see my daughter. you have much more than that. Speed, strength and most of all courage'

'but?'

'oh and I have advanced your skills you no longer need to touch someone to show them things you can just use your mind'

'huh?'

'I must go now. Remember my child darkness does not always equate to evil as light does not always bring good'

She kissed my forehead and disappeared

I woke up in my bed my family seth and jake surrounding me. I coughed and had a killer headache.

' I swear when she passed out her mark wasn't filled in. weird now it is and she has tattoos?' seth said

Huh? What did he mean tattoos?

*cough cough*

Poop, im gunna die. The nearest house of night is in Tulsa OK and i live in forks and I f I don't geth there soon. I die.

'renesemee darling can you hear me' I could hear nan esmes worried voice

I nodded. Hurting my head more

'nessie, nessie are you ok?' I could hear Jacobs voiceover every one elses

'yea, im fine. Just got a killer headache'

My head was seriously hurting. I coughed. A lot I needed to get to the house of night. Or I die. I knew this because Lauren had been told this when she was marked. But the closet house of night is in Tulsa.

'mum, dad. Cough. I have to get to the house of night or I .gulp. Die'

'WHAT' mum screeched. Im sure the whole house shook.

'Darlin. calm down, im sure there's another way'

' there's not. Remember Lauren. She got marked 3 months back. There's no other way'

'then where going on a road trip' uncle emmett said. Seriously. He is slow. They cant stay there.

'no. im going you cant stay there. Marked vampyres only. Ill be fine guys. Lauren will show me. cough. Around. I said

'but' jake said

'but nothing I have to go there or I die. Now take your pick. I go to the house of night for the next 4 years where you can visit me. Or I die and you never see me again. Huh?. Take your pick!

'We need to go now' grandad carlise said loudly to block out all my coughing.

'Jacob, can you carry renesemee to the car. Ill pack her stuff and the rest of you go get ready. Where moving to Tulsa. Aunt Rosalie said

What moving to Tulsa. Are they stupid. Their home is here. But my head was killing and I was to tired to do anything. So I just kept quiet. Jacob picked me up bridal style and I fell asleep in his arms.

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