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Disclaimer: I don't own Tokyo mew mew, so to atone for my disappointment, I wrote this.
A Forgotten Rose
The air rippled around him. Though Ichigo did not see it, something fell from his right hand. He whispered, "Goodbye, koneko-chan." His voice cracked on the last syllable. I looked up, hatred and frustration still burning in my eyes. Before he disappeared, I caught a fleeting glimpse of his face. His pale face looked so fragile, so delicate just then, and his amber eyes had quivered as his voice broke. For a fleeting instant, I felt a shard of concern pierce through all my flaming anger. I brushed it off, he wasn't worth it. He had never cared about me anyway, I thought icily. All he thought of me was as a toy, something he could play with, his to toss around, to break if he felt so inclined. I suddenly thought back to the battle with Deep Blue.
"I lost." In spite of the situation, he smiled.
"I lost."
Then, before I could react, Deep Blue's sword flashed, and Kisshu's body came to a dull halt by my knees. His battle costume was stained with his blood and grime.
"Ichigo… I-.." A shudder ran through his weak body .Then, he lay back against me, his golden eyes closed.
"No… Kisshu." I murmured.
"KISSHU!!!!" He couldn't be gone. The perverted alien who had always seemed to know just when to bother me. He had lost his life to save me.
"I won't forgive you!" I shouted to Deep Blue, my eyes streaming as I raised the Strawberry Bell.
"I can never forgive you!!!
But I had. Masaya and I had been together since that battle. I had thought about giving Kisshu a chance, I really had. But then he just took the Mew Aqua and left. He had just left, diminishing any doubts I had to his thoughts about me. Only a toy, not someone really special to him, never anything more than a person whose emotions he could toy with...
I ran from the park. I kept running until I had to stop to take a breath. My eyes were full of tears, but why? Why should I care? No, I decided. I wouldn't care. I wouldn't care if Kisshu loved me or not, I had Aoyama- Kun, my friends at Café Mew Mew. I slowly started to walk home, a new spring in my step. A huge weight lifted off my chest. I could live my life not caring. All my thoughts were of Aoyama-kun, Kisshu had been eliminated from them permanently, and I knew it would stay that way. I smiled.
"Maybe things really will turn out ok." I said happily.
Back at the park, a single object lay on the ground below where Kisshu had disappeared. A dark red rose lay on the ground, forgotten.
"If only you knew…"A tear escaped his amber eye.
END
Me: So…. Did you like it?
Kisshu, Ichigo: No.
Me: ~falls down anime style~ NANI?!?
Kisshu: It was sad, just like the last one.
Me: Well, duh. *I'm attracted to sad endings*
Ichigo: You made me sound like a total baka!
Me: ~rubs back of neck sheepishly~ Well….
Me: Well, please review!
Thanks so much Mew mew 124 for being my first review ever.
She got a special preview of this story!
If you are the first reviewer, I'll send you back a preview of my newest work, KISSHY…KUN?
* see ya!*