Disclaimer: I do not own naruto
also gaarashukaku please remember I'm am new to fan fiction . net so I've had some problems anyway here's the real 1st chapter
It was October 10th the 15th anniversary of the Kyuubi's defeat while everyone was drunk and happy 3 cloaked figures walked through the crowd on the backs of their cloaks were the faces of animals one a fox another a wolf the last a cat who was trailing behind
"Yo cat hurry up!!"
"Shut up wolf!!"
"now cat is that any way to talk to your boyfriend?" the one named wolf turned red at this point
"DAMN-IT FOX I TOLD YOU SHE IS NOT MY GIRLFRIEND!!" wolf exploded at fox
"Suuuuuure she's not" fox smirked under his hood
They continued in silence for a while when they passed a play of the Kyuubi fight and the people cheered when kyuubi "died"
Fox scowled at the play
"Fox we should get going to the Hokage tower. Cat you find us some place to eat fox and i are going to find us a place to stay k?"
"OK wolf" she said as she shushined away
Time skip 2 hours later
"Well we're here" fox said to wolf
"Sure you'll do ok?" wolf asked concerned
"Yes I am sure"
"OK then let's-"
"HALT WHO ARE YOU AND WHAT BUSINESS DO YOU HAVE WITH LORD HOKAGE? ANSWER FAST AND MY DOG WILL NOT TEAR YOU TO SHREDS!!" a boy said as his dog growled
'What they smell like a wolf and fox?'
"Hmmmm an Inuzuka" wolf said
"Yep Kiba Inuzuka heir to the Inuzuka clan" Kiba said proudly
"Mm arrogant as all Inuzakas are maybe you should hold your tongue Inuzuka filth!!" wolf yelled
"How dare you insult my clan" Kiba retorted at this point fox decided to intervene and spoke with a near demon voice
"Wolf stop we do not want a fight. it would be bad for our village rep and our village already has a bad rep here" after this his voice eased up "Kiba-san forgive my teammate he had an unpleasant experience with an Inuzuka when he was young. now then we are here to discuss maters with your kage about mine and my 2 teammates vacation." fox said calmly
"Ok I'll let you speak with him go on through"
"Thank you Kiba-san" was said by both as they passed him
End of chapter one
well is it good? bad? ether way please review and tell me what you think
who are the the cloaked figures guess right and get a cookie
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