MY FIRST STORY! YAY! This my own way of Bon Bon The Birthday Clown. Short Chapter but it will show you what is going on in the story!


Star felt as her world had shattered, her heart fell with the pieces. Star didn't even know why it pained her so much through the night when she saw Marco descend the staircase, the handsome boy walking close to Jackie with his cheeks almost red but still tried to play it cool.

Star was planning on going to the dance with Marco in the first place when he had asked, but she believed it was two friends who wanted to have more fun with each other, especially when it was Star Butterfly's first dance on planet Earth.

The only problem was that she totally forgot about the Bon Bon the clown with Janna. She hoped Marco would take it easy and just go with her to the cemetery but she showed up by his side, just to see that one of a kind smile from the boy.

Jackie had asked him.

Star was happy that her best friend was happy and she didn't have to leave him alone, so it was a win-win for the two. Not really. She noticed Marco's beauty and couldn't peel her eyes off the sight standing tall on the staircase. She watched him move to the living room then out the door when Star snapped the photo.

The whole night was consisted of her asking Janna about Marco which was annoying the girl about a boy, and she had the picture out and open to stare at for hours. Her hearts on her round cheeks had cracked.

Star couldn't take the feeling of jealousy and having Marco being taken right from under her nose so she just had to call him. She did it at least 57 times before giving up and using a spell to spy on the two.

She watched how close they were, their cheeks pressing together. Her grip on her wand tightened and a growl had passed the barrier of her teeth and out of her lips. Everytime she was mad or felt any negative feelings, the magic would become green and dark. Her magic affecting the skateboard wheel and knocking the two off.

Shocked, she fell back on Janna and woke the girl up. Star couldn't help but to begin talking faster than light as she explained how she took Jackie and Marco down.

Things had been getting worse from there! Ludo had shown up, pretending to be the clown before he began the fight with Star and Janna. Rats had chased Janna to a tree and Star was by herself. No Karate-kid to help her.

Star tried to get it under control and it worked, the pink circle forming into a portal to suck Ludo back in from wherever he had come from, but when Marco and Jackie showed up, her jealously hit like a tidal wave. Anger and sadness building up, turning the portal green and creating a mind of it's own. That's when things got out of control.

"Star!" Marco yelled as him and his date went separate ways to save the two girls. Star kept her eyes closed, the giant vacuum growing in size and slowly dragging Star in.

Marco panicked, the book was leaving with Ludo but Star was in trouble. If Marco went after Star, then the book would be in the villain's grasp and him and Star would be in more danger than before. Marco did not want to think of the possibilities of going after the book. Besides, that book was filled with each spell that Star could use and they could get it back, but Star, he was afraid he couldn't.

Marco ran towards the Mewnie princess, her hand slipping from the ground, her body flying through the air. Her screams were like ice, Marco couldn't waste another second. If he didn't push her out the way, then both would be sucked in and no way out. So the brunette had to do what was best for Star.

Even if that meant leaving Earth.

"STAR!" He cries. The said girl cutting closer to the black vacancy.

"MARCO DON'T!" She couldn't afford to lose him to another thing. Marco didn't care, he held out his hands and jumped. The gravity disappearing when his body flew into the portal's atmosphere. His hands pushed Star to the ground and out of the net of the mysterious portal, his body being dragged in with a scream. His whole body swallowed, and it shut. It had finished its meal and disappeared into oblivion. "NO!"


Short but more will be on the way!

What do you guys think?