Hey everyone! I decided that i have indeed improved greatly over the last year, and decided to try my hand at a fanfiction, this story will star THE DREADED OCs! Well, if your here now, i suppose you dont care since you obviously are here to either flame (fuck you if so) or read (bless your big fanfiction hearts!). Are characters will NOT BE ANY DAMNED MARY-SUES, i- we yes WE my friend Becca is working on this too! say hi becca!
-Hi everyone, um, im very excited to be doing this ive never really done something like this before, I hope this is at least somewhat of a success, im glad my friend gave me this opportunity to do this and I really hope you enjoy it.-
Not that she's intoduced her pretty ass, lets get this party started dammit!!! Wait, oh yeah, me and becca will try our hardest to keep our OCs from getting out of line, but if they portray any Mary-Sue-ness PLEASE tell us, well be more than happy to rewrite it.
A Dr. Spaz and Dr. Professor Sexylegs Production!
~*~*~Prologue~*~*~
It was a beautiful Friday night, the stars were showing brilliantly, and there was a soft cooling breeze, you could hear the crickets chirping and trees rustling to the soft breeze. I was in the middle of my room practicing my leading role in the play. I've worked so hard to get that role, I've never been the leading role- and now that I was, I was going to do my best!! I went to bed late that night with butterflies in my stomach and a smile on my face…
"Get up! Come on sleepy!" yelled Artemis. I jumped out of bed and went on with my day. I was aware that my little brother Benjamin had a soccer game with their BIGGEST rivals, and it happened to be on the same day as the play, but I was hoping for once, mom and dad could go to, at least, this play.
"Artemis," I whispered "I'm going to ask mom and dad about the play." I said with a little grin. "You KNOW what they're gonna say, Luna." she frowned, scolding me. "Well, maybe… this time they will go." I walked towards dad, and I put on a very sweet, cute, soft, warm smile. "Daddy, Um… I was wondering, if you and mom are going to my play this time. I am leading role, as I've said before…. And I want you there to see me." He looked at me, "We're sorry princess, but we'll go to your next performance, Ben-my-boy is excited to play against their rivals, and I want to see him beat them!" He then just petted the top of my head. I inwardly sighed. Of course they wouldn't go, why should I of even wasted my time asking? Artemis was right…. as she usually is.
***Artemis***
Hearing dad reject my sister's performances always pissed me off! Luna could've been an actress, and a fine one at that! Her simple smiles at me, saying it was okay, were just simple cover ups about her feelings! But there was NO WAY she could EVER fool me. Oh no, what kind of sister would I be if she could?! She covered it up, and always held it in; it made me so angry that they didn't even THINK about her feelings.
I was going to hold it in, but no, not this time. My hands shook with anger as I thought about what he said over, and over again; the look on Luna's face; and his simple 'pat on the head' for Luna. My teeth ground together, my arms stiffened, and my breathing became fast. "How could you fucking do that?!" I screamed out before I could think. The words were just escaping from my mouth.
"ARTEMIS!" hollered my parents, outraged by my language
"I'm SO tired of hearing the same excuse! 'Oh, sorry Luna, we can't go because 'Ben-my-boy' is WAAY more important'" said Artemis in a mocking voice. "Can't you see that she has worked hard to impress you?! She stayed up late last night practicing her lines, I would know because I could hear her! How could you blow her off like that?! She worked so hard!"
"Artemis?" Luna called. I was surprised by her expression of 'dumbfound'; surprised that I even DARED to speak to our parents like that…. The people we should be most grateful to… for providing us everything we ever needed and wanted.
No. They weren't going to get away with it this time, not until they get a slap to the face!
Verbally of course.
"How DARE you speak to us like that?!" Dad's voice boomed across the room, he strode overto where I was standing. He attempted to raise his hand at me, but Luna grabbed his arm. "Dad…" she said quietly.
"You, for once DAD, need to hear us out! We are tired of you guys ignoring us! Just like we have no feelings and, you could care less about important things in our life! We understand you want to spend time with Benjamin, but we're here too! We work hard to gain even the slightest amount of attention from you two, but it never works!" I yelled, tears welling up in the corners of my eyes, my hands clenched. "I hate this!!! I hate you!!!"
"If you don't give a shit about me or Luna… then just…. then just…. DIE!" I sprinted to my room, with my back finally to them I let the tears come down, thinking about what I said…. Not knowing I would regret those words for the longest time, wishing I could take it all back. I said the worst thing a child could say to their parents…
***Luna***
I understood Artemis's anger, and where it came from. I was just shocked she would tell them to die. I walked slowly and quietly to my room, while father hurriedly dashed up the stairs to the door of Artemis's room. Since my room is beside Artemis's I could hear her crying, and father pounding on the door, demanding she come apologize for her 'awful behavior' I sat on my bed getting dressed for the performance. I could hear Artemis suppress her tears as my mom was softly telling Artemis they could have a 'calm talk' after Benjamin's game… and you could hear her footsteps walking away…
I noticed a few minutes afterwards, that even after Artemis expressed her feelings… they STILL went to the game. I sighed. I peeked out my door, seeing that the coast was clear I walked over to Artemis's room and tapped on her door. She didn't answer but I opened it anyway. I walked softly to where she was laying. She began crying again, I wrapped my arms around her. Obviously she was hurt. I held her tightly as he wept. She cried onto my costume, but I didn't mind. I was hurt too.
Death Note (flashforward)
Yagami Light glared out the window his mind running 80 mph 'This world… Is rotting' He thought, remembering the news, the environment, the murders, thefts, kidnappings, rapes. These atrocious crimes flooded this rotten world. As he glared holes through the window, he saw a small black notebook suddenly, appear on the ground outside.
'A notebook?' He thought skeptically, he'd have to go get it, it probably belongs to somebody. He then looked away from the window, just in time too. As soon as his eyes tore away the teacher called on him.
After school let out he walked over to where he saw the notebook appear, he bent over to pick it up.
"'Death Note...'" He mumbled quietly to himself. 'Meaning a notebook of death.' He thought.
"'This is a shinigami notebook.'" He chuckled to himself, how ridiculous! "'How to use…' It's all in English what a pain…"
"'The human whose name is written in this notebook shall die'" Now this made him laugh 'This is so sick, who do people like this crap?' He considered putting it back down and walk away, but something made him decide against it and placed it in his bag. 'This is worse than those chain letters.' And he walked towards home, deciding that he would think about it when he got home.
"I'm home." He called, opening the door and walking in. Seeing as nobody was there (his mom was probably out shopping) he walked briskly up the stair, and entered his room, sitting at the deck and clicking on the lamp he began to read the instructions on how to use it.
''This not will not take affect unless the writer has the persons face in their mind when writing his/her name therefore, people sharing the same name will not be affected.''
''If the cause of death in written in 40 seconds of writing the persons name, it will happen.''
''If the cause of death it not specified, the person will simply die of a heart attack''
''After writing the cause of death, details of the death should be written in the next 6 minutes and 40 seconds''
After finishing the instructions he stood up from the chair. He internally chuckled 'So you can make a person die peacefully or suffer.'
Hhe plopped himself onto his bed "Impressive that someone would put so much effort into a prank like this." He folded his arms behind his head and lay down then glanced at where the notebook should be on his desk, then looked back up at the ceiling.
"Death if you write the name… Eh? Stupid." He closed his eyes, and after a few seconds reopened them.
He sat up, and ignoring the voice in the back of his mind telling him how stupid he was for even thinking about it. He sat at the desk and grabbed a pen thinking of a name to write.
"Hold on… If it actually does work, does that make me a murderer…?"
'Someone who's death doesn't matter, and it should be someone with no connection to me… Also, I need to know if the immediately died…' He chewed the eraser. 'Let's see…' He snorted in him mind 'Why am I taking this so seriously?' He grabbed his remote and turned up the volume to his TV.
"The killer who indiscriminately killed 6 people yesterday in Shinjuku's Hanka district is still locked up in the preschool with the teacher and 7 children as hostages." A picture of a haggard man with a long face flashed on the screen "The police suspect Otoharada Kurou, 42, unemployed. Last night Otoharada was…"
Light turned his attention away from the TV.
'Perfect.' He thought as he wrote down the killer's name, nobody would care if he died, in fact, it would save lives!
"Heart attack in 40 seconds right?" He stared at his digital clock's second timer.
'Thought so…' He thought when he heard noth-
"Oh! The hostages are coming out!" Light snapped his head over to the TV
"It seems like everyone is fine. And now the police storm the school, have they made an arrest?!"
After a few minutes of nothing but frightened children relentlessly crying and random people muttering things like "Are they okay?" and "I hope they catch him." the police started leaving the school,
"Oh! They're coming back out. I don't see the suspect… What's going on?"
Light leaned forward. Did it really work? Did that notebook do the impossible and really kill somebody by making them have a heart attack?! His mind raced with questions
A newsman ran from a policeman to the screen looking frantic and surprised "We've got word that the suspect has died! They are saying the suspect is dead!"
Pure shock radiated off of Light "Dead?!" He whirled back to look at the Death Note sweating. It could be coincidence; he would have to wait until they say how Otoharada died.
"The police are saying they didn't fire any shots… Was it suicide? According to the hostages the suspect just collapsed!" That was all the explanation needed, Otoharada died of a heart attack. But one time wasn't enough, one more test, coincidences like this don't happen twice.
"Light!"
He rushed to the door, still sweating and looked down the stairs to look at his mother.
"It's 6:25 it's time for your cram school."
"Yeah, I'll be right down."
As he packed the Death Note in his bag he was muttering to himself "Someone… Someone it doesn't matter to kill… No, someone that deserves to die"
'So another criminal then? No, I can't kill someone important again, the news might keep it secret for a while. I want the results immediately!'
The Human World
Colin gripped the steering wheel of his car in a vice-like grip, while Alice shot worried looks to her husband. Benjamin sat in the back, hopping in his seat, excitement oozing out of every cell of his being. Alice needed to talk with her husband, but what if things got out of hand? She hated fighting in front of the kids, and she wasn't about to start either. She reached into her purse and pulled out her ipod shuffle and turned it on. "Here Benjamin, why don't you use mommy's shuffle? I know how much you love listening to her music." The young boy squealed and thanked his mother, then put on the earphones. His mother sighed in relief, now he wouldn't hear them if they got in a fight.
"Colin, maybe we should go back."
"What?!"
"Don't you remember what Artemis said? She said we weren't paying any attention to her and Luna anymore… And by hearing that, and just walking away, doesn't it mean were intentionally turning our backs on them?"
"Alice, that girl showed an unbelievable amount of disrespect, I'm not going to miss out on Benjamin after that display." Colin gripped the steering wheel so hard his knuckles turned white he glared out through the windshield.
"That girl's name is Artemis! And that attitude is what made her act that way in the first place!" She ground out; frustrated that Colin is too stubborn to admit that they, as parents, made a mistake. 'No wonder that's where Artemis gets it!' She thought.
"What started it is that she's too selfish to give Benjamin some time for our attention!" Colin tore his eyes from the road, anger making him forgetting about the stoplight up ahead at the intersection, "And furthermore-!"
Alice screamed; they were going to run a stoplight! That truck going off the left lane was going to hit them!
'Mommy must be excited too! She squealed! We must be here already!' Excited little Benjamin turned his head to look out the window, only to turn to a look of terror.
"Colin, watch out!" Alice shrieked.
But it was too late, even if Colin braked; they would be rammed by the car coming from the lane on the right, crushing Alice. If he didn't brake, they would be rammed by the truck coming off the left lane, crushing himself and Benjamin.
Before Colin or the truck driver could do anything, the truck crashed into their car, instantly crushing Colin and Benjamin and knocking Alice unconscious. The sheer force of the collision made the cars skid into the left lane, where a Mercedes crashed into Alice's side, killing her.
In less than one minute, the girls lost their family.
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Anybody who's seen the Death Note series know
that there is a strange vortex in the Shinigami Realm that
leads to the 'Human Realm' but what if, there were more strange vortexes?
What if two girls from one of these strange realms, were somehow
pulled into the 'Human Realm'?
It's going to be one hell of a party.
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Awright! Have I improved or what?! This is WAY better then Sasuke's Dinner and it DEFINITELY kicks Second Chances ASS, Becca (aka Professor Sexylegs) wrote everything until the part with Death Note, everthing there and after is written by me, I also did somework on the part thats from Artemis' point of view (since shes my OC and i can get her in character) and did some grammar checks on everything Becca wrote and vice-versa. Hope this story will be a great success!
