Don't Be So Kind

Disclaimer: This Fan Fiction is based on Love Hina, I do not claim to have any rights to characters and locations included in the Love Hina Animated series or Manga, However I do claim rights that this story is my own work and the rights to any original characters. To my knowledge the copyrights are owned by Ken Akamatsu and should he request the story be removed it will be.

Chapter 1: Admittance

Based on Love hina volume 9 on the premise of what if Keitaro didn't get those pegs.

"D-Don't be so nice to me" Motoko sobbed aloud suddenly lunging at Keitaro she yelped "Please help me Keitaro"
the thing that struck Keitaro the most wasn't the force of her body but the force of her words 'Keitaro?' his mind stammered that was the first time she'd referred to him like that it was always 'Urashima'
Suddenly he snapped back to reality feeling the cold wind blow across a wet patch on his shirt as Motoko used him, quite literally as a shoulder to cry on. Kei panicked suddenly realising the pain he would be in if any of the other tenants walked in at that moment, or if Motoko realised how awkward the situation was. He looked desperately for something to draw Motoko's attention. Nothing. There was not a thing that he could see that might have cheered Motoko up or to shock her out of this
"Please" she sobbed again "stop being so damned nice to me. I don't deserve it.", Keitaro wrapped his arms round her delicate figure he flinched away realising what he was doing 'gah, what are you doing! Pervert!' he screamed in his mind
"I'm a weakling, a failure as a swordswoman, as a house keeper and even as a girl, too weak even to say that I love you" Keitaro jumped at this statement "See! You're repulsed by knowing my feelings for you"
Keitaro's arm flew round her in an instant hoping to cheer her up, no effect.
"Motoko never say you're a failure, things don't always go the way you want them to, I'm more of a failure than you could ever be I failed my collage entrance exams 3 years in a row and when I finally get in I can't go because I break me leg on the first day, all these things aren't your fault, I agreed to play along with the ploy, I let you go over the top with house keeping, Don't focus on the bad things in life or you'll regret everything you ever do..." Keitaro cut off, thinking "The…truth is I...I also care for you Motoko..." Keitaro finished the sentence blushing ear to ear. Motoko looked up, staring deeply into Keitaro's eyes. Her silky black hair matted to her face "Keitaro..."

How long she had hoped for those words, she began climbing on top of him, showering him in heated kisses all over his face and neck, sucking gently on his ear, wanting to show how much she loved him in every possible way, suddenly his hands had her wrists in a vice like grip "Motoko...stop...please" the tone of Keitaro's voice changed from almost demanding at the start to an almost fearful tone, He was scared he saw where this was going and knew that if she pushed for it he wouldn't be able, nor was he truly sure that he would even want to stop her.

"I...I'm not ready for this and your upset so please, we can't let anything happen. But I'll stay with you"
The pair cradled in each others embrace slowly drifted into a new world, one where time didn't matter, there was only them, and that's all they wanted.

Author's Note: As stated this is my first fan fiction, please read and review and continue to read on. If you don't like it still review and say why please so I can improve it, I don't take offence easily so the only things I will really consider to be flames are ones the read something similar to "OMG! You fic is TeH Suxx0rs!"

The Next Chapter: The Morning After.

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