Author: Snapbang
Title: Kim Possible In Redemption (Revised)
Summary: Takes place less than a month after Captainkodak1's story The Lotus Bloom in which Ron and Kim's relationship grows deeper and they both gain new powers due to the Lotus Blade. If you haven't read this story yet I suggest you go to his sight in Fan Fiction and do so first.

This is the first of four stories that I have written thanks to the inspiration I got from reading first The Lotus Bloom and then several other stories on Fan Fiction that are just too numerous to list.

I would also like to give a special thanks to my wife who acted as my editor and put up with my constant pecking on my keyboard and to the likes of all of the other writers and artist from deviant art especially my favorite rinacat

Warning: This story contains some strong language and explores mature themes, violence and death

Disclaimer: The characters and locations from Kim Possible belong to Disney Chapter 1 Redemption (Revised)

It was very late and Kim was exhausted. Ron and Kim had just gotten in from halfway around the world fighting Professor Dementor and had beaten him once again. But this time it was much harder because all of his henchmen had those stupid power rings from Henchco Inc. As Kim slipped in though the back door, she kicked off her boots and snuck up the stairs into her room. She didn't want to wake her parents at 12:45 am. Lucky for her that school is out for the summer and she could sleep in as late as she wanted to. Dumping her backpack at the foot of the bed, and then peeling off her clothes she climbed into the shower and started washing off the days grim and counting all the new scraps and bruises. She decided there were too many to count until she looked in the mirror and saw the rather large bruise just under her left eye. "Oh man" she thought to herself, "her mom was going to be upset! Oh well, there's nothing she could do but take the heat tomorrow; but for now she had to get some rest."

Kim slipped on some clean pajamas, then slid in between the sheets and was out within seconds of hitting the pillow. All of the sudden she was awakened by a something sitting on her chest and pinning her arms down. A damp cloth was clamped over her face with a very noxious odor to it, she tried to fight but was overcome too quickly and then everything went black.

The next thing she remembered was slowly waking up. Hearing someone calling her name, "Kimmy oh Kimmy wake up princess". Then she was hit with some very cold water in the face! That did it; she was awake and very angry! She tried to move but realized she was not lying down. Instead, she was standing almost straight up and was strapped to a table of some sort. When her head cleared, she saw Shego standing just a few inches away with a bucket in her hands and wearing a huge grin.

Kim screamed at her "What do you think you are doing, what's going on? Let me go!!!!"

Shego just smiled that stupid grin of hers and said; "Well Kimmy, I see you woke up on the wrong side of the bed this morning".

"Shego let me go or I'll".

"You'll what", said Shego? "Kick my butt; I don't think so Kimmy, not this time." This time is going to be very different! You see, there are several people here that want to have a little talk with you about your future".

Shego stepped aside and Dr Drakken stepped up into her face. Saying, "Kimberly Ann Possible, this is the last time you will interfere with my plans". "You see a bunch of your friends have gathered together to throw you a little going away party."

Looking Drakken square in the eyes, Kim said "I am not going away, and when I get loose you will be the one going away"!

Drakken just laughed; then with all his might he slapped her hard across the right side of her face sending shock waves of pain, giving her an instance headache.

Then Duff Killigan stepped up to her. He said, "Ahh lassie, we all got together and decided that it was time to put a stop to you. You see when you were little, you were more of a nuisance and we all missed a chance to kill you then. But now you joined Global Justice, and gained your new powers now none of us would stand a chance."

Kim looked down on Killigan and angrily asked, "What are you planning to do to me scare me into quitting the business?"

"Oh no lassie, we know that you would never just quit. Sooo we are planning your wake! But first we are going to have a little fun with you."

Kim's eyes grew wide with fear as she watched Killigan reared back his driver. Yelling "Fooour!" he swung with all his might at her legs. First she felt the right leg snap, then the left. Letting out a scream from the pain, for the first time in her life she was scared for her life. It hurt so bad she couldn't even think straight. After a few seconds her head cleared enough that she could see everyone in the room looking like they were enjoying themselves and could not wait for their turn at her.

Then she heard someone yell, "STOP! what do you think you are doing?" To her surprise it was Senor Senior Junior and he was pushing his way though the crowd to get to her.

Just then she heard his father yell at him, "Junior shut up and get back or I'll whip you with my cane!"

Junior said "NO! Father you cannot let this happen; Kim and Ron are my friends, I will not let you hurt her." Just then there was a loud crack and Junior dropped to the floor, his father was standing over him.

He said "I told you to get back! If you don't have the stomach for this then I suggest you leave now!"

Junior slowly stood; looking around and not finding any help. He decided it was best if he left; maybe he could get some.

As Junior left all hope just drained from Kim then Gemini stepped up to her. He looked her in the eyes, and said "We have only met once before but you destroyed my lair and helped my sister put me in prison, so I owe you this."

He punched her in the stomach and ribs several times with his steel hand. She could feel her ribs breaking, and she couldn't catch her breath long enough to scream from the pain. After what seemed like hours of beating it stopped, only to open her eyes to see Monkey Fist with his face just a few inches from hers; his breath was making her nauseous.

He whispered into her ear, "Miss Possible I have the pleasure to be the one to end your life! And I want you to know that boyfriend of yours won't have very long to cry over you, because he is next and I have special plans for him."

Then Monkey Fist hit her so hard on the right side of her head that he knocked her out. But this was not what Monkey Fist wanted, he wanted her awake, he wanted her to know that the end was coming; he wanted her to beg for her life! So he got a bucket of cold water and threw it on her, waking her back up. When she came to, this time her right eye was swollen shut. There was blood running from her nose so she had to breathe from her mouth she couldn't feel her legs and she knew that she had a punctured lung because she could not take a deep breath. Kim decided right then that she would not give them the satisfaction of begging for her life. If it was to be done, she wanted it to end now!

Monkey Fist jumped back on the table, telling her "Beg for your life and I may let you live!"

All Kim could do was spit blood into his face. This enraged him so much that he gripped her by the throat and started to squeeze her neck with all if his might. Just as she was about to black out she heard someone yell "STOP, let her go!"

Then a bright green light flashed before her eyes and Monkey Fist was gone. Only to be replaced by Shego's green glow. There was a lot of yelling and screaming. Then she could see Shego letting her plasma blast loose in the room but it was going away from her. Kim could hear junior yelling, "Stop; I'm not going to let you kill her."

Shego had watched in horror at what they were doing to Kimmy. With each passing moment she was getting madder but when Monkey Fist grabbed her by the throat, she knew that if she did not stop this she would be as responsible for Kim's death just as if she had been the one who strangled her.

Shego screamed at Monkey Fist, "LET HER GO!" When he didn't, she blasted him with her plasma with all of her might, sending him flying across the room. But when he stood up and started back toward her, she let him have it three more times. This time he didn't even flinch. Shego hoped that she killed him, she never liked him anyway.

The next thing she knew, Junior was standing by her side with his father's cane in his hand ready to fight any and all comers. Dr Drakken walked over and looking down at Monkey Fist, when he saw his friend was badly hurt. He became very angry; He turned and screamed, "SHEGO THIS IS THE LAST TIME YOU WILL FAIL ME!"

He pulled out a laser pistol and aimed it right at her chest. But Shego was too fast for him; she blasted him with her plasma and sent him sprawling against the far wall. Shego turned to Junior, and then said "Get her down but be gentle as possible."

Junior released her bonds and held her gently in his arms knowing they did not have long before she died of her wounds, his heart just sank and he started to cry. "Why father, why did you have to do this to Kimmy? She never ever really hurt anyone, just stopped all of your schemes. She is still just a young lady and she deserves better."

As Drakken came to, he looked around and saw everyone keeping their distance from Shego standing up he then yelled "I want everyone out and take Monkey Fist with you! He then pointed to Shego, saying "You're Fired" as he was leaving the room.

Shego knew what was going to happen next. She turned to Junior saying "We have got to get out of here now; Drakken is going to send in his drones with orders to kill us all! And the drones won't think twice about following orders."

But before she could blast a hole in the wall, the drones were sent in. Junior and Shego were forced into action. Junior pulled a wicked looking sword from his father's cane and then he started slashing away at the drones. Shego just blasted anything moving that was facing her. Then all of a sudden the walls blew in; she could hear laser rifles blasting the drones to pits. Suddenly Shego felt a sharp hit on the side of her face and she was knocked to the floor. When she shook the hurt from her head she looked up and saw Ron Stoppable standing over her getting ready to hit her again.

Kim yelled, "No Ron, don't hit her!"

Ron turned to look at Kim then ran to her; Ron's heart was in his throat as he looked down on Kim lying on the floor soaking wet, bloody and badly beaten. He went to pick her up but she cried out in pain. He was afraid of hurting her anymore, so he just took her head in his hands and held her. Just then Dr Director walked into the room with several armed guards. She had her gun pointed at Shego demanding to know where Kim was! Shego just stepped to the side so Dr Director could see Kimmy lying on the floor. At that moment Shego's life was held by a thread. She knew that if she moved that there were several laser rifles pointed at her and she would die.

Dr Director walked over to Ron, kneeling down she asked "Is Kim was all right." But one look for herself and she already knew the answer.

Standing then pointing her gun point plank to Shego's head she begged "Give me a reason to kill you! Please just flinch!"

In a weak voice, Kim called out "No please don't hurt her or Senior Junior. They saved my life and every second you waste fighting lessens my chances."

Dr Director ordered her medic to look after Kim then turned to Will Du her second in command saying, "I'm taking Kim to the hospital. I don't want any of these fiends to get away."

"Yes ma'am" was all he said.

Then as he was turning to leave, Shego told him "At least six of your people were down in the dungeon, maybe more."

The medic had Kim ready to go in just a few seconds and as they were carrying her to the jet she asked Dr Director "Please let Shego and Junior come with me to the hospital."

Kim woke up very slowly and she discovered that she could not see out of her right eye and her hands were being held down. After a few minutes of laying there trying to get her bearings she turned her head to the left and saw her mother with her head laying on the bed holding Kim's hand turning to her right and there was Ron in the same position. Kim then gently squeezed their hands causing both of them jump as if they were shocked.

Kim's mother looked like she had not slept in days but she had the biggest smile on her face that Kim could ever remember. But when she tried to talk she found that there was a tube in her mouth. Her mother gave Kim a kiss on the forehead, then said "Welcome back baby! Let me take that tube out, you don't need it anymore now that you're awake."

Ron had to leave the room while Mrs. Dr Possible worked on her daughter. In the hallway he saw Shego slumped in a chair and next to her was Dr. Director who was sipping on a cup of coffee. Ron walked up to them, saying "Well it looks like the worst is over, She's awake and her mom is taking the breathing tube out now." Then falling to his knees he just broke down and started crying.

Both of the women just looked at him being very uncomfortable with their own emotions, but Shego did the most un-Shego like thing, she knelt down in front of him taking him in her arms she just let him cry on her shoulder. When she looked up, she saw Mrs. Possible standing over them looking very ragged but happy.

She said "Kimmy is awake now and would like very much to see all of you. She is still very weak, so not too long she really needs her rest."

Ron, Dr. Director and Shego slowly entered her room to find Kim sitting up in bed with a huge smile on her face and her hands out stretched begging them to come in. Ron was there first, he grabbed her right hand and held it to his lips; gently kissing it with tears running down his cheeks, he just could not stop crying. Dr. Director was holding Kim's left hand; and she too was crying. Then Kim saw Shego standing at the foot of her bed and saw that she was crying as well.

When Kim spoke up her voice was very harsh and she was trying very hard not to cry. She said "You guys look like you're at a funeral and you're not helping my condition at all!" The three of them looked at her and then at each other. They started to laugh and with a smile from Kim, all of them knew that everything would be just fine and Team Possible will be back in action stronger and better than ever before.

Authors Note: This is a revised version of my first story thanks to King In Yellow for his reviews and his helpful suggestions. I went back and revised both Redemption and my second story Past Lives. Hopefully I made them better and worth reading and maybe get some reviews this time. Hay I'm new at this and I could use all the help I can get and I still have no idea what a beta editor is or how to get one. So any help there would be greatly appreciated.

Yours in all things Possible Snapbang