Disclaimer:I don't own anything in Naruto or….. things might have been different.I own only the plot...
Authors Note:My First Story so comments for me to improve are appreciated ,Flamers will be ignored.
Following the aftermath of the 3rd great ninja war,the world was split into many planets due to the fighting that had been occurring for many centuries. Earth was unable to handle so many destructive jutsus over an extremely long period of time.
It was broken into 6 planets occupying Konohagakure,Iwagakure,Kumogakure,Kirigakure,Sunag akure.
Miraculously,only a few people were injured.
However,much of the infrastructure from the 5planets were destroyed
After the kyuubi attack,Konoha was even more damaged.
It took quite a while for the 5 planets,especially the planet which Konoha occupied, to rebuild.
There were different ranks compared to the ranks before Earth split up.
genin were now called as Privates.
Chunin were now called as Captain.
Jounin were called as Commander. and the Kage were called as the Supreme Commander.
Not all of the planets in which the village resided was fully occupied by the supreme commander of each village.
Some parts of the planet was also occupied by the Daimyo.
There were also other small planets that were orbiting around the 5 main planets,those small planets were just chunks of land floating around the universe.
People had begun to rely on spacecrafts which were able to cover planets more efficiently and also made guarding their own planets more effective.
However,Taijutsu,Ninjutsu and Genjutsu and other shinobi arts were still being practiced by many on ground.
At the moment,Naruto Uzumaki was stuck in the academy listening to boring lectures by his academy instructor Iruka.
Iruka was going on a long and dreary lecture on Shinobi and it wasn't that Naruto wanted to insult Iruka but History wasn't going to be useful on the battle field and it wasn't relevant to his dream of being a supreme commander.
"Naruto!Wake up!"Iruka shouted while performing his typical Demon-head jutsu.
"Eh,sensei I couldn't help but your lecture was so boring."Naruto whined,annoyed from being awoken abruptly by Iruka.
"All the same,try to listen to my lectures if you want to pass" Iruka replied in a disapproving manner."Yes Iruka sensei" Naruto said with a sheepish grin on his face.
The rest of the class snickered at the 'dobe' of the class."Jokes aside,I am going to tell you the format for the Private exams which is happening tomorrow.
There are six portions in the exam,they are Theory work,weapons throwing,Spacecraft flying,Taijutsu,Ninjutsu and Genjutsu."Iruka stated seriously.
Upon hearing the word Spacecraft flying,Naruto brightened up.
Spacecraft flying was the best of all had been on prototypes and it was sensation of being in the air and travelling at a great speed that Naruto enjoyed.
There were a few tools in the Spacecraft that were interesting,there was a ninja wire which was extremely strong and there was also a chakra powered missile and the most dangerous of all of them was the jet boost that increased the speed of the jet by a triplefold.
However,that resulted in the spacecraft breaking down and make it near impossible to land.
Spacecraft was powered by the user through his own chakra.
A seal tag transferring chakra was placed just above the battery which stored chakra was used to run the spacecraft.
By pumping chakra through the seal,you powered up the Spacecraft.
You could also incorporate jutsu into the spacecraft by pressing buttons and pumping chakra through the buttons you pressed.
Even then,you had to be careful to control chakra you pumped as pouring in too much chakra would result in a failed bunshin.
Naruto had to practise an academy chakra control exercise by making the leaf much practise,he finally could do a bunshin on a Spacecraft.
This did not help him to make a proper bunshin on his own as the end result was always a failed bunshin no matter how much Naruto tried.
The only logical explanation he could come up with was that performing bunshin on the spacecraft took more like Sakura had difficulty performing 'Space Bunshin' as Naruto though,she had good control,she had pretty low reserves.
For once in his life,Naruto decided to prepare for his test as he didn't want to fail.
But then,ramen came first as Naruto rushed over to the stand and gulped down many bowls of ramen.
The next day,Naruto felt reasonably prepared, he had been studying and working hard for the test.'This test will be a piece of cake.' Naruto thought entered the class with feelings of nervousness and tension evident.
Just then,the brooding Uchiha arrived with fangirls closely behind.
Iruka-sensei arrived shortly after a certain incident occurred which convinced Naruto that Sasuke was gay."Settle down theory test is about to begin."Iruka shouted at the noisy students.
The theory test was quite easy and Naruto was quite confident that he would do well.
He had looked around and his other classmates didn't seem to be having much trouble.
Soon after that was his weapons threw ten shuriken and out of ten of them nine landed on the target with four landing on the middle.
Naruto got slightly better results for his kunai and while, his results were not as spectacular as Sasuke,he thought he had done quite well.
After,that they were led to a Spacecraft obstacle course with many prototype spacecrafts on the side"You are to fly through the obstacle course in an hour successfully with
little damage done to the space crafts.
If you are unable to complete it go back to the starting point" Iruka announced.
The course was quite large and it was able to accomodate the entire cohort.
When the test began,Naruto steered through the obstacles such as a swinging log and a few other traps.
It was quite easy for him,Naruto winced as he heard a few sounds,presumably those of the spacecrafts being destroyed.
he continued eventually managed to complete in thirty minutes,he was the first to complete it.
After an hour,Iruka arrived and led them to the taijutsu venue where they had to fight a bunch of automated dummies who could attack and defend in five minutes.
Naruto had managed to defeat them comfortably ahead of time by darting around and landing quick yet strong hits on them.
He also noticed that the dummies were not very durable and Kiba managed to demolish the dummies in a couple of minutes and even people like shikamaru who were not strong in taijutsu could defeat them.
Even then,quite a few fangirls were failed as they could not defeat the dummies within the time limit.
To Naruto's surprise,Sakura and Ino passed the test.
Next was the Ninjutsu test which Naruto was quite nervous."Iruka sensei,how many ninjutsu do i have to do among the three tested."Naruto asked as he entered the room.
Iruka replied "Based on your grades,you need to perform two of the three academy jutsu correctly"Iruka replied.
Naruto first transfomed into a naked blonde women but after being persuaded by Iruka,finally did the henge.
The only jutsu not done properly was Bunshin but that didn't matter as he only need to do two of the three jutsu to pass.
Naruto walked out proud of finally becoming a shinobi of konoha.
He thought'Great,I am one step closer to being a supreme Commander.'Iruka smiled at Naruto,glad that the boy finally became a shinobi.
Just then,Mizuki appeared."Naruto there is a secret way to become a Captain."Naruto was shocked and replied"How?"
Mizuki continued"You have to enter the Hokage Residence and steal the scroll of sealing and learn a tests your stealth skills and your cunning."Naruto knew something was amiss but didn't know what was wrong so he just decided to play along.
"Yes Mizuki-sensei." Naruto said.
Mizuki inwardly smirked as this would make his plan much easier as he could use the boy as a scapegoat.
That night,Naruto entered the hokage residence, had to disable a bunch of traps and that wasn't a easy just went to find the scroll of sealing and thought about what to learn from then, Naruto found the scroll.'Now,which jutsu should I learn from it' Naruto thought.
He decided to learn kage bunshin a jutsu that he could perform on the second try.
'Now what about space time sounds awesome' Naruto thought and decided to copy it into another scroll as he did not have the time to perfect it.
At the bottom of the Space time ninjutsu technique,there was a note 'Might be stuck in space if it is incorrectly performed.'Naruto made a mental note to practice the jutsu only with kage bunshin unless he got it right.
Just seconds after he finished copying the technique,Iruka arrived.
"Naruto,what are you doing with the scroll.
You are not supposed to be taking it as it contains many forbidden kinjutsu"Iruka prepared himself to arrest though he disliked doing this to his students,Naruto had commited an unlawful act.
However,Naruto was perplexed."I thought Mizuki-sensei said he would make me a Captain if I learned something from the scroll.'Iruka was shocked, why had mizuki stated was no test.
At that moment,Mizuki appeared and threw a few shuriken and kunai at ,Naruto's training had paid off and he was able to dodge the shuriken and also quickly dodged the projectiles.
"Mizuki!I should have known that it was you all along" Iruka replied"Naruto do not listen to Iruka and just give me the scroll."Mizuki said.
Iruka then understood what was happening."Naruto don't give the scroll to just wants the scroll for contains many powerful kinjutsu."
Mizuki snarled"Iruka is just lying to you know why the villagers hate you so much?"
Naruto had a bad feeling about where this was headed "why?"
Mizuki snickered"It is because you are the is inside of Iruka whose parents died in the Kyuubi incident, hates your guts"
Iruka cursed himself for letting this get out of hand"Naruto is completely different from the is a loyal shinobi to Konoha"
Mizuki smirked "Fine, I will just kill you." He scowled as he engaged Iruka in hand to hand combat.
For a while,it seemed as if Iruka was getting the upper hand,he was dominating over Mizuki but then Mizuki managed to stab Iruka in his thigh,slowing him down.
Naruto then pushed Mizuki away from him."If you ever lay a finger on Iruka-sensei,I will Kill you."He then made many kage bunshin and beat Mizuki to a pulp.
"Heh Iruka-sensei,I might have overdone it."
Iruka was surprised and thought'He learnt a high level technique in such a short period of know,I actually think he might be a supreme commander.'
Iruka smiled as he replied "To celebrate this,Let's go to Ichiraku"
Naruto was silent for a minute before replying"Hell Yeah!" and dragged Iruka to Ichiraku's.
Meanwhile,Konoha's current Supreme Commander,Sarutobi Hiruzen scowled as a new headache popped ,Naruto had to steal
the scroll of sealing.
He had sent out shinobi were out looking for just decided to see what was Naruto then, realised what happened and summoned all of his shinobi whom he had sent out to find Naruto here at his office.
"Sir,We haven't found Naruto"One shinobi reported.
Sarutobi replied "There is no need to search for the scroll is safe and
Naruto will be returning very shortly."
After the shinobi had left,Sarutobi thought'I think i will give you your parent's money tomorrow,Naruto.I will tell you about your parents when you are a Captain.
Before then,i won't tell you.'
He then sighed and went back to fight his daily S-ranked enemy,paperwork.
After eating at Ichiraku's and going home,Naruto decided to use his kage bunshin for training and learn space time jutsu for the rest of the week until they were assigned teams.
He decided not to practise Space time Ninjutsu on his own and just make his bunshin practise it due to the did not want to get stuck in space forever.
'Well,I will just see the old man tomorrow.'Naruto thought as he began to sleep.
Unknown to Naruto,there was a surprise for him tomorrow.
Power Level-The stats of a shinobi at this point of time.
Uzumaki Naruto Total-21/50 Jutsus- Kage Bunshin,Kawarimi,Henge
Ninjutsu-2/5 Spacecraft flying-3.5/5
Taijutsu-1.5/5 Stamina-4/5
Genjutsu-1/5 Speed-2.5/5
Intelligence-1.5/5 Hand Seals-1.5/5
Strength-2.5/5 Chakra Control-1/5
Iruka Total-33/50 (Demonstrated)Jutsus- Bunshin,Kawarimi,Henge
Ninjutsu-3/5 Spacecraft flying-3.5/5
Taijutsu-3/5 Stamina-3/5
Genjutsu-2.5/5 Speed-3.5/5
Intelligence-4/5 Hand Seals-4/5
Strength-3/5 Chakra Control-3.5/5
In this story,Naruto is more smarter and more serious.
Even though he has an immature side.
tHe is still wouldn't have a crush on Sakura.
The Kyuubi is only known to shinobi who are Captain and above,not the civilians.
The shinobi are forbidden from saying the secret.
Till the next chapter...bye.