authors note: this is my first story so tell me what I should do better or what would improve the story in the review O.K?
Chapter 1 it begins
"OW" Gio yelled as he fell riding his bike. "Stupid ice, I should have just stayed home" He thought drying his pant legs. Gio Gibbs was a 14 year old kid who is 5 ft 5 and has brown hair and brown eyes. The only reason he was biking in 20 degree weather was the fact that he was getting the new pokemon game, POKEMON LIFE. it is the realistic pokemon game ever, at least that what was on the commercial he thought.
When he got to the store it just opened and the guy at the desk looked suprised to see him there, probably because Game Corner, thatts the name of the store, is really old and dull looking. "What do you want." the cashier asked in a monotonous voice. "The new pokemon game, I got it pre-ordered" Gio asked, hoping this will be done quickly. "Here." the cashier said. Gio got out of there as fast as he could.
He went and ran to his bike, but before he could get there, there was a person in tattered clothing and their form looked a little like yoda from STAR WARS. "sorry." Gio said seeing if the old person was all right. the person held up a pack of contacts and glasses. For me?" Gio said as a joke. the old person nodded, witch was weird science Gio actually was neersighted and on the contact box it had his perscription. the old person nodded to the glasses signaling him to put them on. "Weired, but O.K." he thought putting them on, and what he saw made him gasp, the old person he thought he saw said Pika Pik? Gio just started walking away as he was thinking he has gone insain. seeing pekachu is not normal he though right before blacking out.
second authors note: Sorry if it sucked, add suggestions on what should happen, what I should do better that types of stuff and I will be accepting OC's. Name: age: hight: personality: looks: anything else wanted to be added: and thats about it.