Fanfic: Naruto
Author: Anime1lover
Story title: Sins of the Heart
Chapter title: Curses and promises
Date 1st completed: January 29th, 2006
Date redone: Sunday: November 19th, 2006
Date reedited: Thursday, July 5th, 2007
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto for if I did the story would so totally go along a different course. Any who no flames, but total honest opinions. As always enjoy!
Author's note: Aww yes one of these any characters that act in or out of character in the commentaries before and after the stories are purely for mine and your pleasure. So please no flames just enjoy.
Demona: So she's finally getting around to cleaning this old piece of junk.
prettypinkninjagurl: It's a wonder this thing hasn't collected any dust.
anime1lover: Gee thanks for the positive thinking.
Both: Welcome.
anim1lover: Well you'll be happy to know that I've gone back reread it and reedited it. So hopefully it looks better and has fewer mistakes.
Boss: It better damn well have fewer mistakes it's my time you're wastin' when you slow as molasses.
anime1lover: Well were back with new and even completely randomer than before material.
Demona: So please read, review, and as always enjoy!
Part one: Curses and promises...
((Some where deep in the mountains in between the land of the Tree, Leaf and the land of the Stones. Deep inside a cave stood a girl inside of a lagoon pool. The water was clean and pure. She had long flowing blond almost white hair, mystical looking light purple eyes, and milk creamy skin. She was cleaning herself when suddenly she heard the voice that if heard by anyone else would kill themselves on sight. Standing behind her in an outfit similar to Sasuke's except it had blood red skull patterns on his out fit and he had black/red fingerless gloves on his hands. He walked towards the girl who had her arms over her chest and her back to him. Then he said to the girl while places his arms around her waist))
Unknown "My dear dear Syami how long to plan to keep yourself from being mine? Those symbols on you can't hold me off forever and plus once I do make you mine all I'll need to create the perfect demon child is those two demon souls living in the village hidden among the leaves"
Syami "Itachi leave them alone please they don't deserve this they have done nothing wrong. Isn't bad enough you kidnapped me when I'm already betrothed to someone I love"
Itachi "Who my idiotic younger brother. Who believes your dead along with the rest of our family"
Syami "I will find a way back to him"
Itachi "What if he finds out your secret"
Syami "I'll tell him and I know he'll love me no matter"
Itachi "Oh really, well it doesn't matter your mine and your not going anywhere"
((He turns her around to where she was facing him now. She could see in his lust filled eyes all his hatred towards Sasuke. He smirked at her as she glared back up at him. She roughly pushes him off, but he jerks her back slaming her small frame against his taller one. Then he tilts her head up and kisses her roughly on the mouth. In reaction she tries to claw him, but by then he had disappeared in a puff of smoke. Syami hugs herself and begins to cry))
Syami "Oh Sasuke...have you forgotten me"
(Okay this is a song I wrote specially for this fic)
----Can you hear me now-----
V 1
The skies are changing
so are you
You've changed from the person I once knew ,
but yet your still the one I love
Chorus:
Can you hear me now
as I call out to you
trying to say "I love you"
Can you feel me now
as I reach out to you
trying to hold you close
Can you believe in me
V 2
The people are changing so are we
We've changed from the people we use to be
,but our love never changed and it never will fade
Not now not ever not any other day
((chorus repeat))
After chorus verse:
All I got left say
is you are my shining star
when all goes dark
you'll still be in my heart
Even when the winds of change
are blowing trouble times our way
I'll listen for your voice so can you...hear me
Chorus special version:
Can you see me now
as I stand before you on new grounds
trying to believe this isn't a dream
Can we love forever especially now
as we hold out our hands into the future never forgetting what we've went through
that's all I got to say
because I can hear you now...
((Sasuke was sitting against a tree by the lake desperately trying to drowned out the sound of two people arguing behind him. Those two would be Sakura and Naruto the two most annoying people in his life. He sighs loudly and says to himself))
Sasuke "There has got to be more interesting people than these two nit wits"
((He glances back behind him just as Sakura pounds Naruto into the tree because he was attempting to kiss her again...and it failed. Hinata strolling by sees the injured Naruto and rushes to tend to his wounds while Sakura gets disgusted and goes to sit by Sasuke. But then she remembers what he said to her one time.))
Sakura flash back-
Sakura "I love you Sasuke, I really do and I know you think I'm an idiot, and you think I am the worst ninja in the world, but please these are my feelings"
Sasuke "You're right I do see you as an idiot. You just like every other girl here persist me like a pack of mangy wolves. I hate it, I honestly hate it. I don't like any girl here because there's none like her." he was looking away at that moment
((Sakura starts to walk forward in attempt to comfort him))
Sasuke "Stay away from me! All you girls ever think about is getting me to like you as your sex toy! Well guess what stay the bloody hell away from me!" seeing Sakura's hurt and fearing expression calms down and says Sakura "I'm...sorry...I...I'm just not in the mood for a girlfriend plus I don't have the time." walks off.
Sakura flashback end-
Sakura "Hey guys I'm going to go take a walk see you later"
Naruto "Sure, Sakura see ya later!" gives her a peace sign just as Kakashi comes strolling by reading his 'Make Out Paradise'
book.
Sasuke "Do you ever read anything besides porn and Make out paradise 24/7 Kakashi"
Kakashi "Now why would I ever read anything besides what I love to enjoy"
Sasuke "You might seem a little more normal for once in your ever so boring life"
Kakashi "You're so cold Sasuke you know that"
Sasuke "No one ever let's me forget it"
Naruto getting a blank expression on his face "I feel lost for some odd unknown vague reason"
Hinata blushing because she's holding Naruto's hand "Ummm...maybe you...wanna...you know...take a walk with me...for like a little bit...Naruto"
Naruto noticing her difficulty asking him on a date says kindly "Uhhh sure let's get going"
Hinata (I swear if I could draw this moment her eyes and facial expression would be lighting up like the fourth of July) "Really! Thanks."
Naruto "Let's go"
((Grabs his hand and drags him off into a pathway. Once they were gone Kakashi puts up his book and sits down by Sasuke. Then acting as if he has no clue what he's talking about he starts saying))
Kakashi "Me and someone I cared for along time ago use to love sitting by the lake to share our special memories..."
anime1lover: Well we made it through the first chapter.
Demona: don't forget my friend you still have 16 more chapters to go.
anime1lover: So kind of you to remind me and rub it my face Demona.
Demona: My pleasure anime-san.
prettypinkninjagurl: Can we please not do this the boss is on vacation let's enjoy his being without trying to kill each other.
Both: Okay pretty...
prettypinkninjagurl: Okay just so I can focus on something other than hurting those two please allow me to say thanks for reading, I hope you'll be reviewing, and I really hope you enjoyed it...((yelling offstage)) GET OVER HERE YOU TWO MONSTROCITIES SO I CAN HURT YOU!!
Demona and anime1lover: Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!! ((running off))
(End)
Anime1lover: Hey guys this is my author side chat that I'm starting. I thought I say hi as a person outside of my funny commentaries or my stories. I hope you'll enjoy the reedited updates. Also look forward to my others stories recieving the same treatment. I also like to say sorry for this chapter being so short. I never noticed how short it was till now. Oh well. See ya guys next time in Author Side chat.