you want to get postive feedback on your stories,then just follow these few easy steps. Bold is just me takling.

1. interrupt reading readers with unrealated messages

The bounty hunter looked in Ratchet's eye and

hello people,make sure you favorite,review,and enjoy this story

(make sure to do this after every sentence)

you use misleading titles

2."I was going to call this chapter "the meeting of bounty hunters" but instead I'am going to call it "super hot girls"(makes trolling face)

prizes to people who favorite and review your story

(ending of chapter eight )"If you review and favorite this chapter,I'll give you a piece of my candy bar(eats piece of candy)never mind,this is my candy"

jokes in your beginning or end of story

4."So the cat walks into the bar and,wait cats can't walk,well there is a lombax and he goes,wait not even the jokes make sense (walks away with shame)

5."but most of all,just be your self"(I look at myself)You know what,dont follow that(walks away but falls on mat)


hope you guys enjoyed this chapter 8 and chapter 2 shall be out whenever I feel like,just kidding,make sure to review if you liked or hate.I hope you enjoyed