Jake was so close. Blood was spilling out of the roof of his mouth. More like gushing actually. If Jake stayed in one place of the floor too long, a stain that would be impossible to erase would accumulate there. Jake pushed on. The fish hooks were so deep that he didn't understand how they hadn't touched his brain. The wires from them were rubbing against his face and kept scraping against his eyes. His tear ducts were going to get torn off if they continued to scrape against them. Come on, Flomany! Get over it! Just beat this creep! Jake said to himself. He kept going and going. So did the blade. It was as close to his spinal colum as he was to the door.
The blade was getting closer.
Just a little more, Jake thought.
The fish hooks dug deeper.
It's almost out! Jake exclaimed in his mind.
Jake reached for the doornob.
Please God, Jake prayed as he rapped his hands around it.
The blade got even closer.
"GHAAAAAAAAAA!" Jake screamed out in pain as he opened the door and began to crawl through.
The blade was almost out.
Jake screamed out again.
The blade cut through his spinal cord.
Jake fell down.
It continued to cut.
Jake stopped screaming.
It cut through the other side of his neck.
Darkness surrounded Jake.
Game Over
Author's Note: I had two different endings planned out and I was torn between the two. So that's why I asked you guys what you wanted. I was only going to take the first few comments and do the ending that they said they wanted. But this ending is very sad. I mean Jake was so close! So if you want me to put the happy ending up too, I'll do that. Just say what you want in the reveiw box.
