the first chapter of my first crossover read and review please

BELLA POV

Flash back

"I don't want you anymore bella"

"You…don't…want me."

"Yes I'm tired of pretending to be what I'm not. "

Flash back ends

One year later

I can't do this to Charlie any more I know that I'm handling this badly he has only been trying to protect. He had been doing a great job to, thinking about it I was even more upset with my self; Uncle Charlie has been protecting me from a terrorist for over a year now and he couldn't protect me from a break-up. I needed my friends and real dad so I made the call.

Ring

Ring

Ring

"Director Shepard's office. Gianna speaking how can I help you?"

"Hi can you please put me through to the director." I asked I tried to sound happier for the assistant.

"Who should I say is calling?"

"Hello her that I.M Gibbs is on the line she'll know who it is."

Then five minutes of bad hold music jenny picked up the phone.

"Bella it has been so long how is your time in forks going?" then I let it go I told her everything but the vampire thing and told her how bad I have been for the last year. She has always been like a mother to me ever since my mother died when I was five.

"Oh bella honey that is terrible but I don't think this call is just about having a girl talk." She knew me so well and I loved that she did.

"I want to come back I need a change of scenery everything reminds me of him and I hate putting Uncle Charlie through this torture." I told her nearly breaking down again.

"Well it is save for you to come back and I since you are your father's daughter you will make a great field agent." I could almost hear her grinning when she said that. My dad was always my role model and I dreamed of being a field agent like him.

"Really can I be on dad's team?" I asked this was the happiest I had been in months.

"That can be arranged. So pack up and tell Charlie I'm sure he will be happy that you are going to start getting over it." She told me.

"Yea he suggested that I call you today." I told her.

"Okay bella I'll sent a member of your dad's team to come and get you, can you be ready to leave tomorrow morning?" she asked

"Totally jenny I'll be all set to go so who is picky me up?" I asked Abby has been e-mailing me so I knew the team by names and personalities but not faces.

" DiNozzo is coming to pick you up he should be there around ten o'clock tomorrow morning."

"Okay jenny see you tomorrow. Can we make this a surprise for my dad?" I asked I wanted to see the rare shock on his face.

"Sure honey that was what I was thinking. I love you too." then she hung up. I smiled for the first time in a year then. I went downstairs to make a special dinner since this was my last night with him. An hour after I stated diner Charlie walked in the door.

"Hey bells smells great. What's the occasion?" he asked but I saw it in his eyes he knew.

"Jenny called you?" I said more like a statement.

"Yea and I'm glad you are heading back to D.C. it will be good for you." He said with a smile. Then he mumbled something about definitely being my father's child. We had a quiet dinner then I went to my room to pack up my things. Around ten o'clock at night I fell a sleep but the nightmare didn't stay away even thought I had tomorrow to look forward to.

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