Hi guys this is my first story and I'm not much of a writer as you wll probably find out, but im a huge fan of the inheritance cycle and I have had this idea for a while so please review and please point out any mistakes I have made.

Thanks.

T.I

Prologue

I've done it! The old elf thought to himself, I've finally done it oh how the others laughed at me and cast me out, years of research and experiments finally paid off, well if they could see me now, how they would quake in their boots. A loud roar distracted the elf from his thoughts he looked around the large dark room he was in and towards the glowing purple portal in the center of the room, or to be more accurate he was looking at the giant coal-black reptilian head protruding from the center of this gateway.
"I am Crumptor keeper of souls and I command you to obey me!" As soon as the old elf shouted this at the being he felt another presence push against is consciousness.
"And, I am Shruikan, me and my brothers and sisters would be willing to come to an arrangement, to avenge our deaths" a deep voice resonated from the elf's mind, the voice of which he knew belonged to the black dragon now before him.

"Well it looks like we have a deal then"The elf said cunningly.

Shurikan road once again and more heads began to protrude from the glowing portal...